Feedback wanted

[BalognaZone]

So, after like three years having not painted, I've started to go out again, this time with a different name. Here's some shit I've dopne recently, let me know what you think.
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y280/BalognaZone/P6050011.jpg

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y280/BalognaZone/P6060019.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y280/BalognaZone/P6120036.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y280/BalognaZone/P6120035.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y280/BalognaZone/P6110032.jpg

Ok, be gentle now.
Byeehttp://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y280/BalognaZone/P6050008.jpg

[MrJackDaniels]

learn to fill in letters cleanly.

[CACashRefund]

learn to leave spray paint alone.

[religion]

Spend more time on paper.

[BalognaZone]

I probably should have said this in the first place, but I'm really not worried about the graf community greeting me with open arms or something, I know I'm not great, and I'll likely never be, at my age. I'm trying to do my own thing, and whether people like it or not is fine with me. I am looking more for technical advice than design ideas, because I'm not really trying to fit any style specifications. Any way, hope that helps, more than "learn to leave spray paint alone" which, although humorous, doesn't really address my issues.

Be well.

[KiLL Or DiE]

Like some one said up there, try sketchin more..Go simple, instead of tryin to go all wild n shit...I like the name..Kinda funny though..

[imported_b0b]

Practise makes perfect. You aren't awful, just keep doing it. Find some nice quiet spots and paint them a lot.

[bears_with_knives]

Originally posted by religion@Jun 12 2005, 05:35 PM
Spend more time on paper.
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i'm not sure about painting on paper... i tried that already, no matter what it still drips like crazy... go with b0b's advice. paint the shit out of that spot when you find it...

[Gunm]

Originally posted by BalognaZone@Jun 13 2005, 06:10 AM
I probably should have said this in the first place, but I'm really not worried about the graf community greeting me with open arms or something, I know I'm not great, and I'll likely never be, at my age. I'm trying to do my own thing, and whether people like it or not is fine with me. I am looking more for technical advice than design ideas, because I'm not really trying to fit any style specifications. Any way, hope that helps, more than "learn to leave spray paint alone" which, although humorous, doesn't really address my issues.

Be well.
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by saying something like this...you only invite more abuse....kinda like trying to put a fire out with gasoline


your fills are sloppy....work on them

[KiLL Or DiE]

Originally posted by bears_with_knives@Jun 13 2005, 09:48 AM
i'm not sure about painting on paper... i tried that already, no matter what it still drips like crazy...Quoted post


Are you fuken serious with this shit?... :rolleyes:

[BalognaZone]

Originally posted by LENS+Jun 14 2005, 10:12 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (LENS - Jun 14 2005, 10:12 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-BalognaZone@Jun 13 2005, 06:10 AM
I probably should have said this in the first place, but I'm really not worried about the graf community greeting me with open arms or something, I know I'm not great, and I'll likely never be, at my age. I'm trying to do my own thing, and whether people like it or not is fine with me. I am looking more for technical advice than design ideas, because I'm not really trying to fit any style specifications. Any way, hope that helps, more than "learn to leave spray paint alone" which, although humorous, doesn't really address my issues.

Be well.
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by saying something like this...you only invite more abuse....kinda like trying to put a fire out with gasoline


your fills are sloppy....work on them
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My point exactly. Work on your fills is good advice. All I'm saying is if someone says you are wack, while it may be true, I don't really care. If you say fix the f or something like that, now we're talking businness

[BalognaZone]

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y280/BalognaZone/P6120035_1.jpg

Here's another one. The fill is better, but there are other problems, like when my only German thin clogged. Anyhoo, rip away.

[yeaaaah baby]

a few more arrows and that shit would burrrn that freight down! just add like 4 more on the next piece! and then hit me up on it! i write graFsTarRr!

[Rogue Pistol]

better then kaper

[BalognaZone]

Originally posted by yeaaaah baby@Jun 15 2005, 10:25 AM
a few more arrows and that shit would burrrn that freight down! just add like 4 more on the next piece! and then hit me up on it! i write graFsTarRr!
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You can't be serious

[source]

Originally posted by Rogue Pistol@Jun 15 2005, 02:26 PM
better then kaper
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http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y86/salmasacala/DSCF0118.jpg
just happen to have one of these...check the hand

[yeaaaah baby]

Originally posted by BalognaZone+Jun 15 2005, 12:54 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (BalognaZone - Jun 15 2005, 12:54 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-yeaaaah baby@Jun 15 2005, 10:25 AM
a few more arrows and that shit would burrrn that freight down! just add like 4 more on the next piece! and then hit me up on it! i write graFsTarRr!
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You can't be serious
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i am. but for that knowledge i just dropped you gotta hit me up on your next freight. remember its: "graFsTarRr!" exactly like that, remember the capitalization changes. yeah. and uhh post it here.

[BalognaZone]

word yo, we can totally bomb together

[yeaaaah baby]

no!

[iloveyoursister]

Yeah man keep practicing.
Paint as much as you can.
Sketch whenever you can.

you can only get better.

[Gunm]

Originally posted by BalognaZone+Jun 16 2005, 02:09 AM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (BalognaZone - Jun 16 2005, 02:09 AM)</div><div class='quotemain'>word yo, we can totally bomb together
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<!--QuoteBegin-yeaaaah baby@Jun 16 2005, 03:18 AM
no!
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ha ha ha

"No i will not make out with you!"

[NeRVe54]

didnt you ever try the painting clean thread?? thats honestly your problem. you paint sloppy.

[BalognaZone]

Well, like i said, my only thin cap i brought for the black one shit the bed, so i had to outline and force field with a fat cap

[yeaaaah baby]

dont blame it on the caps. i only piece with fat caps, and i dont drip.

[BalognaZone]

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y280/BalognaZone/P6200009.jpg

New shit, I focused on painting clean. It's an improvement, i think

[whoneedsavet]

should of made the O white makes it even.. Ain feelin that forcefield If i do a forcefield i do them near the beghining makes them look clean butyou need a good fat cap for them

[H of BL]

Originally posted by KiLL Or DiE+Jun 14 2005, 10:36 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (KiLL Or DiE - Jun 14 2005, 10:36 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-bears_with_knives@Jun 13 2005, 09:48 AM
i'm not sure about painting on paper... i tried that already, no matter what it still drips like crazy...Quoted post


Are you fuken serious with this shit?... :rolleyes:
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:haha: :haha: :huh2:

[MOOGLE?]

Originally posted by yeaaaah baby@Jun 18 2005, 04:47 PM
dont blame it on the caps. i only piece with fat caps, and i dont drip.
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... are you talking about your penis or the paint?

[haru]

Originally posted by MOOGLE?+Jun 25 2005, 03:48 AM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (MOOGLE? - Jun 25 2005, 03:48 AM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-yeaaaah baby@Jun 18 2005, 04:47 PM
dont blame it on the caps. i only piece with fat caps, and i dont drip.
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... are you talking about your penis or the paint?
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I love the comments on this forum

[yeaaaah baby]

Originally posted by MOOGLE?+Jun 24 2005, 07:48 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (MOOGLE? - Jun 24 2005, 07:48 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-yeaaaah baby@Jun 18 2005, 04:47 PM
dont blame it on the caps. i only piece with fat caps, and i dont drip.
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... are you talking about your penis or the paint?
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lololol you said penis!


and doood why didnt you hit me up on that last freight you did? i thought we were homies...

[register]

bwah. future dropped some advice. stay away from arrows. leave bubbles alone for now. go for simple letters ( and numbers)

[NUK_IF_YOU_BUK]

paint more in your backyard with cheap paint and learn to paint clean. if you can paint clean with colorplace, you can do miracles with krylon..and remember that paint drips more on frieghts than walls, so start with walls and move to frieghts as your skills progress

[STR8BOLDSTYLES]

Originally posted by BalognaZone@Jun 12 2005, 04:52 PM

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y280/BalognaZone/P6050011.jpg




lol poop :innocent:

[ASER1NE]

Stop Painting fr8s first of all , your not even close to good enough . Paint more walls .

[MOOGLE?]

fuck that...i say he should paint the shit out of freights... seems to me he just need to get over the nervousness of getting caught wich tends to make fills sloppy and in haste ..

just work on keeping your lines straighter when you paint..
and on paper work a little more on the size and look of each individual letter...you pretty much have placement down..

you should get into making throwees/bubble letters with no fill to fill the gap between the trains or walls you paint..



my only real gripe about your work...is your 2 and 5..


other than that i have nothing to say that hasnt already been said a bajillion times in the yard or paperchase..



oh...i dont care about handstyles at all...mine is probably the most slop one you'll ever see..


keep it up though

[graffkid15]

gettin' better

[register]

handstyles, like it or not are the basis for graffiti, if you got a good hand, it could transfer into good letters.

[MOOGLE?]

NAW...i disagree..

they arent cause i say so..

and the fact that well............ i'm right

[register]

oh yeah? try arguing with some old school NY writers about this. obviously, you know nothing of history;)

[!@#$%]

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