Intermediate

[bboy_dlyt]

[attachmentid=18006]
this i made for a girl i liked. idk whut to say bout it. i nvr really say im good at taggin. i say i need to get better

[attachmentid=18005]
this i did on my free time. says simon sanchez. its the name of my skool hopin to make it into a skool shirt.

[attachmentid=18008]
this i did a year ago or prolly months i forgot. but yeah just found it.


well those are my work. i didn't post err thang else....




oh and uhh can ya peeps help me out a lil. i've only been writing for nearly a yr now and i reside on a small rock in the pacific. so extreme graffiti as y'all would knoe it is limited on my island. i just have one question. whut kinds of utensils do y'all use to color and design ur art works?

[uephoric drips]

eat a dick.

[Abc Eater]

I think you should take a step back to simpler letters, but thats just me. My opnion, thats where I am simples.

[uephoric drips]

oh yeah, i forgot to tell you theres a toy thread.

http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/index.php...c=60783&st=3800 (http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=60783&st=3800)

[CRUELone]

Originally posted by uephoric drips@Jul 5 2005, 01:26 PM
oh yeah, i forgot to tell you theres a toy thread.

http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/index.php...c=60783&st=3800 (http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=60783&st=3800)
Quoted post

i dont think he needs to go to the toys

[risin 519]

^^^ i agree i think he is better then "toy" status^^^^

[HAL*LOVE*U]

uephoric drips- this is why i hate going on this site having to deal with asshole rookie toys...

go play in some traffic of some shit little bitch

bboy- the blue one is actually pretty damn sick keep working at it and remember keep it simple :bday:

[GnomeToys]

Originally posted by uephoric drips@Jul 5 2005, 11:25 AM
eat a dick.
Quoted post


You spelled euphoric wrong, euphaggot.

[HAL*LOVE*U]

i <3 gnometoys

[StarzAbove]

:haha: :haha: :haha:

The second Pic is cool don't really like the first.

[uephoric drips]

i dont wanna talk shit back cuz ugh itll only leed to more shitt and more shitt. and i dont wanna get banned.

how bout we battle bboy????

[bboy_dlyt]

Originally posted by uephoric drips@Jul 6 2005, 02:22 PM
i dont wanna talk shit back cuz ugh itll only leed to more shitt and more shitt. and i dont wanna get banned.

how bout we battle bboy????
Quoted post




yo man i'd take ur challenge but i really ain't got the time. imma be goin' on a trip soon. back to my hometown philippines. maybe when i get back i'll hit you up. whut u say to that?

[bboy_dlyt]

[attachmentid=18046]
this is some old works i've found.

[attachmentid=18047]
this was for a friend.

[bboy_dlyt]

[attachmentid=18048]
umm idk when i made this but idk not really feelin it. dnt have the right utensils to color my works. but i do like the one in green

[attachmentid=18049]
this hmm idk same im not really feelin.

[uephoric drips]

Originally posted by bboy_dlyt+Jul 5 2005, 11:36 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (bboy_dlyt - Jul 5 2005, 11:36 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-uephoric drips@Jul 6 2005, 02:22 PM
i dont wanna talk shit back cuz ugh itll only leed to more shitt and more shitt. and i dont wanna get banned.

how bout we battle bboy????
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yo man i'd take ur challenge but i really ain't got the time. imma be goin' on a trip soon. back to my hometown philippines. maybe when i get back i'll hit you up. whut u say to that?
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[/b][/quote]


perfect.

[Mr. Chad]

12oz prophet makes me sick.

[GnomeToys]

IT MAKES ME UEPHORIC AND DRIPPY. SO MUCH SO THAT I GO TO THE CLUB AND dAnCe n' GrAfF all nyte dewd

[casekonly]

those sketches aren't all that bad.

[JeLisOneR]

itermediate thread is a good idea
heres something i drew today while at work http://www.strike9.com/krylonone/DSCN1520.jpg

color didnt comeout worth a shit on the scaner so i took a pic ...it still didnt come out as good as it is irl ....criticism is appreciated

[wiseguy]

Originally posted by uephoric drips@Jul 6 2005, 02:22 PM
i dont wanna talk shit back cuz ugh itll only leed to more shitt and more shitt. and i dont wanna get banned.

how bout we battle bboy????
Quoted post

gee dewd, ur mega awesome. but i bet you hear that ALL the time.

[Boopathy Bangalidad]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/1mourningkrew2005.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/222222222.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/111111111111111.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/7grafidgey.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/IMG_0440.jpg

i dont draw much. any thoughts?

[gren1 bnc]

Originally posted by Boopathy Bangalidad@Jul 14 2005, 04:42 AM

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/7grafidgey.jpg


i dont draw much. any thoughts?
Quoted post

i like this one alot...very nice, but in not feeling the one below it.

[CEKONE]

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a231/dc61188/71905043.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a231/dc61188/71905.jpg
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a231/dc61188/71905044.jpg
couple simple sketches
comments/critisism is more than welcomed

[gren1 bnc]

http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/2091/largegre8qs.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
gren, innit?

[la creme de la seme]

yo that gren sketch is fire!! damn ive seen your characters and really like them, keep up with that euro style!

[Poop Man Bob]

Originally posted by uephoric drips+Jul 6 2005, 12:19 AM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (uephoric drips - Jul 6 2005, 12:19 AM)</div><div class='quotemain'>Originally posted by bboy_dlyt@Jul 5 2005, 11:36 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-uephoric drips@Jul 6 2005, 02:22 PM
i dont wanna talk shit back cuz ugh itll only leed to more shitt and more shitt. and i dont wanna get banned.

how bout we battle bboy????
Quoted post




yo man i'd take ur challenge but i really ain't got the time. imma be goin' on a trip soon. back to my hometown philippines. maybe when i get back i'll hit you up. whut u say to that?
Quoted post



perfect.
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[/b][/quote]


This is one of the lamest conversations ever had in the history of 12oz.

[WhiteOx]

Hahah thats a big call, real big call

[fuckum]

some of these people are not intermediate and should get there stuff off this page before they get made fun of

[gren1 bnc]

Originally posted by la creme de la seme@Jul 22 2005, 05:04 PM
yo that gren sketch is fire!! damn ive seen your characters and really like them, keep up with that euro style!
Quoted post

thankyou.

[SNOROX BLEACH]

I SAID JAWN...

[redeyedanimal]

good idea gone away?
A lot of people in the toy thread could be posting intermediate these days, and maybe gettin a better insight from more knowledgeable heads.

Resurfaced?

[theScapegoat]

my contributions... was told the 3d's fucked up, tried a drop shadow to the bottom right... just lookin for help!

[carlo1]

the drop on the S is off,
but other then that it looks fresh

[theScapegoat]

Damn yup, I see it now haha

[redeyedanimal]

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/TRAINS/BLACKBOOKIN/IMG_2726-2.jpg

[Decyferon]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02170.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02167.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02165.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02128.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02053.jpg

any crits from some more experienced writers would be cool.

Kelo I like that but maybe the bars are too wide, I dunno the letters seem real fat, also the lil extension bits off the K and O at the top of the letters could maybe be elaborated on a bit, like rather than just being little nubs almost? but overall nice colid style to progress with I think

[MR.CRUS]

love it o.o! ^^
would anyone classifie me as intermediate? or not yet, i know im far from toy but far from intermediate

[freakeenyc]

alts that capn crunch style is great..just the L seems like the odd man out..cuz it isnt top heavy..also think the first chowda sketch woulda looked better with a lil larger L..seems teency compared to even the E...the colroing and inking is great in the last three sketchs..

good thing abt this thread...u dont consistently have to say ...work on simples.u can actually give crits...

[redeyedanimal]

^^^exactly why i felt it should be resurrected.

about the extensions, i feel like the piece would be more solid without the extensions/addons. The nubs are akward.
crus, post up a piece and take it from there.

[mynameaintbic]

hi guys im new here and was wondering if i belong in this threadhttp://img365.imageshack.us/img365/1972/screencapture1.png

[redeyedanimal]

I can dig it. Work on the style of the B a little bit, it seems plain to me. Maybe distinguish the left bar of it using the same crossovers you used in the E.

[mynameaintbic]

word, whats good witht that attached thumbnail. i didnt post that

[redeyedanimal]

there is a ghost attachment thing that has been goin on since this site crashed a few months ago. Sometimes it's thumbnails like that, and sometimes it says your post was edited by someone else. No idea what is causing it, but it is a common thing now.

[mynameaintbic]

good looks

[NEBER1Z]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a393/NEBERONEZ/SKETCH3.jpg...

[NEBER1Z]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a393/NEBERONEZ/03-13-2008105036PM.jpg

[NEBER1Z]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a393/NEBERONEZ/SKETCH5.jpg

[redeyedanimal]

and finally, i contribute a pic.

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/IMG_0503.jpg

[mynameaintbic]

t shirt designhttp://img44.imageshack.us/img44/2984/screencapture2to.png

[DonaldFour]

http://i35.tinypic.com/ipw22t.jpg
exchange
http://i37.tinypic.com/29olb2b.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/120p6xz.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/9lcys2.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/1zcd29.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/1zxwso2.jpg

[peterpopoff]

oh snap !!

[DonaldFour]

http://i35.tinypic.com/ipw22t.jpg
exchange
http://i37.tinypic.com/29olb2b.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/120p6xz.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/9lcys2.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/1zcd29.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/1zxwso2.jpg

bottompagebump

[smoothness05]

siiiick

[mynameaintbic]

bumpshttp://img44.imageshack.us/img44/2984/screencapture2to.png

[freeofcharge]

yo the caligraphy looks sick bro. kinda wondering what it would look like if the "is to" was in the same caligraphy style, cuz not u got 3 different letter styles all in the same area

[redeyedanimal]

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/IMG_0503.jpg

no thoughts?

[MAXISHARD]

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/IMG_0503.jpg

no thoughts?

wack as fuck

[Decyferon]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02181.jpg

dying markers, fill overload

Kele I don't like the way the Es slope or the K, just looks akward and doesn't sit right or flow right

[redeyedanimal]

^ What's your favorite marker for blackbookin?

[Swindle]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02053.jpg

any crits from some more experienced writers would be cool.


http://jerseyjoeart.com/Images/Paintings/WS_Jesus_07L.jpg

[Decyferon]

haha not quite sure what you're getting at there Swindle, because my char doesn't look anything like that Rime one

REA - Prismas are my fav for fills and sharpie for outlines, but I have also used letraset and Copic Ciao markers too

[med84]

no but the character does look alot like AROE MSK type of style.

[Decyferon]

Hmmm not sure just did a b boy char all of aroe's chars are side profiles or cartoon character copies. Ah well I know it isn't a bite so I'm not bothered lol

only thing that may remind me of aroe's is the straight jawline

[Micro281]

swindle im no expert but that letter structure is legit bro

[freakeenyc]

saying that something looks similar to anothers isnt exactly a crit....

[gnarwalker]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02181.jpg

dying markers, fill overload

Kele I don't like the way the Es slope or the K, just looks akward and doesn't sit right or flow right

this is straight up aroe

[ekazr(ak)]

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/IMG_0503.jpg

no thoughts?

the letters are pretty cool
your 3-d is fucked though

[DonaldFour]

this is straight up aroe

Are you serious? The letters have no resemblance to Aroes style at all :rolleyes:

[theScapegoat]

no but the character does look alot like AROE MSK type of style.

eh wrong. you havent been writing for long. look up mugsies, thats where those characters come from. not aroe, theyve been painted for years by thousands of different writers.

keep it up alts

[MR.CRUS]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2765/4017533049_a75540720b.jpghttp://farm3.static.flickr.com/2510/4018294240_9ae273bb15.jpg
earthwormjim battle (not finished) characters looked like they were traced but they wernt...trust me

[.hopeless.]

hi guys im new here and was wondering if i belong in this threadhttp://img365.imageshack.us/img365/1972/screencapture1.png

i know who you are ;)

dope shit man your throws are progressing nicely..

[MR.CRUS]

wow i suck at my throws i dont even like em thats a dope thro lol!

[ServiceCamp]

i dunno CRUS i don't think you're ready to post in the intermediate thread.

but really dude do whatever you want, who am i to tell you what to do?

[mynameaintbic]

shitty cell phone pic, needs more arrows

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/6279/screencapture6s.png

[freeofcharge]

sick piece. fill is very excellent. however, whats up with those hands?

[mynameaintbic]

their called toy, its this special style ive been working on you know....

[Aristotle]

snap, that fill is super sweet. what do you use to color?

[DonaldFour]

shitty cell phone pic, needs more arrows

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/6279/screencapture6s.png

fuck this is nice.. except for that hand.. i seriously dont understand how people do this. they get really good at pieces and suck at handstyles. ehh.

[med84]

:lol: eh wrong. you havent been writing for long. look up mugsies, thats where those characters come from. not aroe, theyve been painted for years by thousands of different writers.

keep it up alts


no shiiiit. i meant the execution of that "STYLE" character. dont get fuckin E-nerd graffopedia on me kid. (because you did your online/dvd/graff book research doesnt mean your a vet or a king or ANYTHING.)

[med84]

i like that ''snap"

[mynameaintbic]

fuck this is nice.. except for that hand.. i seriously dont understand how people do this. they get really good at pieces and suck at handstyles. ehh.

you spend all your time piecing and bombing. and not tagging, thats how it happens. in my defence my tags are usually better...lol

but yeah i dont tag

[Craze/Sinz]

Dope snap! Some mad colours.

[theScapegoat]

:lol:


no shiiiit. i meant the execution of that "STYLE" character. dont get fuckin E-nerd graffopedia on me kid. (because you did your online/dvd/graff book research doesnt mean your a vet or a king or ANYTHING.)

i never said i was a "vet or a king or ANYTHING" ha, dont get mad lil guy. the only other response youll get out of me is your still wrong.

bump that snap, dope color blends

[mynameaintbic]

id rather ppl bump me for my letters than my blending, blending prismacolors isnt that hard

[DonaldFour]

damnn bump that snap for the prismacolor blending

[mynameaintbic]

http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/6760/screencapture8p.png

[freeofcharge]

BIC, i thought u was gonna use the word RASE

[med84]

i dont get the captions with the shark. maybe i shouldnt

[mynameaintbic]

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/3602/screencapture13.png

[Aristotle]

fresh fill, nice letters. That piece is tight. Wanna exchange?

[DonaldFour]

i dont get the captions with the shark. maybe i shouldnt

http://www.mrhaironline.com/mv6/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/im_a_shark.jpg

[med84]

umm. yaaaa

[PentiumOrange]

Don, I find that hilarious, but I have no idea why. Lol.

[BlackSheep13]

http://i354.photobucket.com/albums/r409/black_sheep08/2009-10-09190702.jpg
http://i354.photobucket.com/albums/r409/black_sheep08/2009-10-08132446.jpg

Crits please.

[MR.CRUS]

sake rake or snap nice shit bro
blacksheep keep doin your thing lol its alright
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2535/4056443931_f64f631140_o.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2733/4056443955_2996fd724a.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2548/4057182626_9ea7bff173.jpg

[MR.CRUS]

ignore the char
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2752/4051613520_8487d52dae_o.jpg
basek exchange
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2737/4042012639_439b1f1d34_o.jpg
keane n me word battle (for fun)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2801/4047314150_8202168242_o.jpg
and throw
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2642/4044868561_03647d1778_o.jpg

[Decyferon]

This is why we shouldn't have an inter thread on 12oz just gets filled with toys trying to claim inter. Only person on this page who should post in here is Mynameaintbic

[redeyedanimal]

agreed.
/apologies...

[redeyedanimal]

...

[WaddaWadda]

whats with everyone jocking ewok's arrows? as as for that jesus character...just another on msk's dick.

what ever happened to originality? i undestand that you can only do so much with with a combination of letters at this point in the game, but really...pulling whole sections of someone else's name is more toy than anything.

[redeyedanimal]

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/IMGP1496.jpg

[SMK|480]

What do you guys think? Toy thread, stay here, or wut give me some feed back ppl..
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BMGtyZWFtLmpwZw.jpg

[EliAlibi]

SMK, I think that fill is pretty tight, and the linework looks clean. What's it say?

[SMK|480]

Says smoke, thanks man. So should I stay here or wat kuz I dont want my post to get taken off if I go to the wrong thread..can anyone tell me..

[SMK|480]

whats with everyone jocking ewok's arrows? as as for that jesus character...

Thank you I was about 2 ask the same thing, but then I saw this @ the end of the page lol. N their not just ewoks, pretty much everyone in MSK does them like jersy joe/ ryme n revok, and I think pose on occasions

[freakeenyc]

wat do ewoks arrows look like..?

[SMK|480]

WTF r u serious???

http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BZXdva3ByaW50dmVyc3VzLmpwZw.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BMjM1OTk3NzE3OV82MTE5ZDc2MjQyL.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BcmV2b2tfcmltZV9id19yZWFsbmVzc.jpg

...I never got a legit answer...

[redeyedanimal]

toy thread with your stuff.

[SMK|480]

No offense but I'm not listenin to you...srry..
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/IMG_0503.jpg

no thoughts?

..And the one @ the top of the page is just colored not much difference

[mind617]

you spend all your time piecing and bombing. and not tagging, thats how it happens. in my defence my tags are usually better...lol

but yeah i dont tag

still shoulda posted it in "our" thread.

[redeyedanimal]

fair enough, do your thing. This thread has been dead for quite a while, except for when i get drunk and bump it to see what happens.
This is what happens, and this is why there isn't an intermediate thread on this site. I keep fuckin up when i bump it...
Sorry to everyone.

and yes, i know that outline is terrible.

[mind617]

lol im a drop a few pics in here, nothing too crazy, hope you all enjoy the contribution, ill keep posting if so.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/SNC00393.jpg
during last weeks lost...lol






this one was real late 09, just fuckin around
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/photow-1.jpg

[SMK|480]

fair enough, do your thing. This thread has been dead for quite a while, except for when i get drunk and bump it to see what happens.
This is what happens, and this is why there isn't an intermediate thread on this site. I keep fuckin up when i bump it...
Sorry to everyone.

and yes, i know that outline is terrible.

Well I came here because I looked for a thread that wasn't exactly toy but not king either lol
..But ya I needed a place to post my stuff opinions as to where to go or stay here wasn't lookin for a recent thread.

But ya ima keep sketchin to get better

[SMK|480]

That one you did during lost is pretty good bro lol

How's this one?
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAzNzctMjAxMDAyMDUtMTgyN.jpg

[mind617]

i csnt read it. sry

[Veritably Clean]

No offense but I'm not listenin to you...srry..


..And the one @ the top of the page is just colored not much difference

toy thread, hope you can accept my credentials :lol:

[SMK|480]

I don't really know you sonce I'm new here but since you used credentials ima think about it lol

Oh says smoke pretty legible..@least I think

[redeyedanimal]

now that you said that i can see it, but i couldn't before.

[SMK|480]

Haha ya I need 2 finish it but my friend has my black book, damn its gunna look clean when I'm done

[muvotwo]

lol im a drop a few pics in here, nothing too crazy, hope you all enjoy the contribution, ill keep posting if so.

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/SNC00393.jpg
during last weeks lost...lol






this one was real late 09, just fuckin around
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/photow-1.jpg


like this

[redeyedanimal]

fair enough, do your thing. This thread has been dead for quite a while, except for when i get drunk and bump it to see what happens.
This is what happens, and this is why there isn't an intermediate thread on this site. I keep fuckin up when i bump it...
Sorry to everyone.

and yes, i know that outline is terrible.

On second thought, it would be dope if there were enough heads in this thread to give real crits rather than the same shit you hear in the toy thread. /momentofclarity
keep throwin up pics, let's see what happens here.


http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/SNC00393.jpg

likin this. Dope fill!

[SMK|480]

An oldish production but still want some crits
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BcmVtYXN0ZXJlZDIuSlBH.jpg
One I did for my friend a while back, says, natalie my fav part is the E. Still nothin 2 major just wanted some crit
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BR0VEQzAwNjAuSlBH.jpg

[redeyedanimal]

on the bottom one, it's really hard to read, and I can't tell what the 3d is doing. Do you always split the 3d to left and right? It's not makin sense to me.

[SMK|480]

Actually its not going just left and right its goin all around (left right up down and going diagonally kinda too) but I didn't really do it right I effed up kuz I rushed on it lol she had been askin me for like 3weeks I was like ahh lol

[EastHastings]

youre annoying.

smoke is a toy fucking name, obviously. and go simpler.

Mind, shit looks tight. I agree with REA on that one.

[redeyedanimal]

3d is supposed to go in the same direction, or toward a vanishing point though, with the exception of 3d pieces which then are based on the lighting.

[SMK|480]

Ya but I make look better than most toys who try to write it. And why the fuck would I go simpler for a toy like you? ...nah I'm good Ill keep my style, sides what do you want me to have the same style as you or what, kuz that would just be gay not everyone wants to do the same shit that's graff expressing yourself in your own fuggin way...:|

...Oh ya rea, really its not supposed to go one way like I was tellin the other dood you do it how you want to, otherwise graffiti wouldn't be graffit it would just be shit painted on canvases and not walls...and I didn't notice I did that two/multi way shodow/3D thing hahaha

[redeyedanimal]

did you come here from bombing science? There's a lot less beef on this site, so how about you deflate your head and take some crits. If you don't want them, then hit the streets and shut your mouth.

[redeyedanimal]

:scrambled: :scrambled: :scrambled: ...Oh ya rea, really its not supposed to go one way like I was tellin the other dood you do it how you want to, otherwise graffiti wouldn't be graffit it would just be shit painted on canvases and not walls...and I didn't notice I did that two/multi way shodow/3D thing hahaha


What?!? :scrambled: :scrambled: :scrambled:

[EastHastings]

smk, you are a disgrace.

[SMK|480]

Your the one sayin I'm annoying dood so yo probly came from bombingscience I'm not even beefin dood I'm just telling you I got my own damn style not the same shit as everyone else deal with it. I took your crit but its called a conversation I'm talking wit ya...

rea ya I didn't even notice I do that untill you told me lol, but I have way more shit n I dnt usually do the shadow/3D both ways that was just kinda a coincidence..that's wat I meant to say

[mind617]

iight no disrespect but smoke is not the best name (not a personal attack) for the style the "o" is trash yo, none of them make any sense. i say if you wanna stick with that style, try a simplified version of it. like try not to have all that hype n shit, simple simple simple. i know people give alot of that same advice but for me personally, ive always appreciated letter structre over fillins, color skemes n all that mess.....3d's never look good going in all sorts of directions, if its not a 3D style piece, woulda been stronger if they all went in one direction....this is just what i see, hope the info helps

[SMK|480]

Oh ya its a shitty name I honestly don't care, but that's when some bullshit halfass wannabe gangwriter that can't even throwup a good handstyle. And ya I have trouble wit O's sometimes kuz I dnt like to do simple shit so its hard to think good lookin O, thanx for the opinions, but ima keep my style I think its simple enuff as it is

[mind617]

so my response didnt show up......i was saying as far as the name smoke.....toy (no offence) but trust me on that one. next as far as the piece, the "O" on all of them dont fit at all.....id try getting rid of all the extentions and hype, rock straight letters with the same style....like a less is more type of thing....also backgroungs aernt alwasy ness. but letters, and simple simple simple, its like trying to run before you can walk ya know? i peronally alwasy look for dope letters before a color skeme, or theme or fill-in...w/e. letters is what matters most to me, and in my opinion if you aint got letters, you aint got shit. hope that helps yo....i know theres a lack of ppl who are willing to help the less expiernced so holla whenever....


o yea....as far as the one for that chick.....the 3d's screw it all up. it would have been tighter if the 3d's all went in the same direction.i peronally think 3d's going in diff. directions dont look right unless, theres a vanishing point or an actual "3D" style. other than that keep it nice n uniform, keep it classy

[Decyferon]

An oldish production but still want some crits
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BcmVtYXN0ZXJlZDIuSlBH.jpg
One I did for my friend a while back, says, natalie my fav part is the E. Still nothin 2 major just wanted some crit
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BR0VEQzAwNjAuSlBH.jpg

your talking about people using an arrow that looks like Ewoks (how many fucking ways are there to do an arrow) yet you completely bite the fuck out of TSL/MSK logo thing?

Personally I think that your stuff needs to go simpler, you are clouding your letters with colours when it should be the letters that stand out, you come in here with a rubbish attitude towards people that offer crits because you don't think you should be listening to them when they have been members of the board longer and generally give out good advice.

and just for the hell of it even though this thread is dead here are pics for credentials
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02527.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02495.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02483.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02378.jpg

[pedophilism]

SMK, intricate fill-ins don't make up for bad letters.

[mind617]

sry bout all that ranting....ill post now lol

this is from the beantown sketch thread....

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/IMG_2308.jpg

pencil freestyle..just fuckin around

[SMK|480]

Never said they did yo^

Oh ya on the TSL thing I did it kuz I was bored dood I dnt try to incorperate it into my style and in every single piece I do, in my defense it serves as a character. its not like we haven't done something like that man its like the cheech wizard dood who duznt do that shit, I mean seriously but again nothin wit my letter style.

[Decyferon]

not to be on your case SMK but your letters do ned some work, tone them down a bit, get some solid structure to them, I'm not gonna deny sometimes I try to hard and the letters look forced, like Mind said to me with the posted piece I did, I tried too hard and it shows, and I feel that is what you are doing with your letters you're trying to push them too much, pull it back a bit and it will look a lot better.

For instance, the production with the TSL logo, the letters are weak, the M has poor bars at the top of it and the K has a chunky vertical bar with little narrow ones as the legs, just produce solid letters, you will get 100% more respect for that.

[pimps up hos down]

what you think
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/518/fdgfd.jpg

[SMK|480]

your talking about people using an arrow that looks like Ewoks (how many fucking ways are there to do an arrow) yet you completely bite the fuck out of TSL/MSK logo thing?

Personally I think that your stuff needs to go simpler, you are clouding your letters with colours when it should be the letters that stand out, you come in here with a rubbish attitude towards people that offer crits because you don't think you should be listening to them when they have been members of the board longer and generally give out good advice.

and just for the hell of it even though this thread is dead here are pics for credentials
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02527.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02495.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02483.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02378.jpg

Aight, but the second one the ?'S are kinda distracting/annoying and the drips on the e kinda lagg(third one) but the forth one is pretty clean

[mind617]

not even respect, its just better for your art in general, make it nice n uniform, kinda what i ment by classic "classy"

[Decyferon]

yea the question marks are because it was a double page production I just couldnt be bothered posting the whole double pager

[mind617]

what you think
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/518/fdgfd.jpg

i believe i saw this in the toy thread, dudes were h8ing hard...
ok so what i think is, the letters shoyuld be spaced out a little more. i feel the A is hidden and the arrow gong through it should blend in with the A like the line going across the lower case E, see how its not over lapping? im sayin , its little things like that, that throw off the piece. its craZy cause a line that looks like that will make you come off nice n toy.....but fix a few things here n there n all of a sudden.....BAM shit is sizzling


oh, one more thing.....pencil and bic pen outlines are an ILL way to get letters down, shit for the last 4 years or so i didnt even use color, just started busting it out 2months ago or so

[SMK|480]

Aight thanx man but I remind you that's an old_ish one, and I already said that I forced my O's that duznt mean I force all of them, like my S's, E's n K's they just come to me easily...but 4reals I honestly don't know if I can go simpler on my style. if I try to go simpler in another form besides my style i would probly wouldn't be able to do pieces it be more of a JA throw up letter style...not that I dnt like it but its not piece material atleast not the ones I wana do

[EastHastings]

Aight, but the second one the ?'S are kinda distracting/annoying and the drips on the e kinda lagg(third one) but the forth one is pretty clean

for all of our sakes, dont crit anything. decy looking good, same with that last MYND. especially the cityscape. im gonna post some shit in here soon.

[mind617]

jchea! show some love

[n8galicia]

for all of our sakes, dont crit anything.


this

[mind617]

Ya but I make look better than most toys who try to write it. And why the fuck would I go simpler for a toy like you? ...nah I'm good Ill keep my style, sides what do you want me to have the same style as you or what, kuz that would just be gay not everyone wants to do the same shit that's graff expressing yourself in your own fuggin way...:|

...Oh ya rea, really its not supposed to go one way like I was tellin the other dood you do it how you want to, otherwise graffiti wouldn't be graffit it would just be shit painted on canvases and not walls...and I didn't notice I did that two/multi way shodow/3D thing hahaha



chill out yo, thats a hard headed way to taking advice and looking at things. you ever read "the art of getting over"?

[Mr. Ilovehaters]

i would say to totally scrap the name "smoke" like said above its a toy ass name, maybethat will help your letter structure and style, to switc up your letters, maybe think of all the letters your the best at and choose a name based off of those letters, just an option.

[mind617]

/\/\/\/\ agreed

mr.ilove, you never answered my question after roger got banned

[freakeenyc]

excuse my bluntness..theres not such thing as an intermediate...ur either a toy or ur not...and if ur not a toy u shud be posting in the sketch thread...that being said mynd and alts gettoutta here yall are 2 good for this shiite

also smk go to the toy thread...theres a general consensus..u have crap lettersstructure and ist drownded out by ur extensions and fills unless ur eurpoean its not ok.

[mind617]

wtf are you doing here freak! .....im not going anywhere!!! roll through for once son, im bout to text you

[redeyedanimal]

I think all these conversations relating to smoke should be taken to the toy thread. Art or not, your attitude is straight toy.
Decy, lookin good as usual.
Pimps, i think your letters lack consistency in the bars. Like, I know you're goin for a big-to-small bar structure, but they aren't all matching up right. You write a bunch or different words, have you settled on one for yourself?
I'll post up a simple in a the next day or so.

[SMK|480]

Ilovehaters, Thanks 4 not being a totall asshole...I think and

chill out yo, thats a hard headed way to taking advice and looking at things. you ever read "the art of getting over"?

I dnt think that's an art yo..anyways can't u read they were askin me about it so after a question is asked there's usually an answer..

I dnt see how they that good, no offense doods, but that last mynd kinda lagg'd I like the first but that's it, but if you think he should go to the other thread then I'm out dood you guys have horrible taste *offensive if you wana take it* ...I dnt care if you keep talkin shit I'm out of this website, wow shoulda never trusted the innernitz 4 crits ima get in in person from ppl who actually hit up not from inside writers srry but its true.

[redeyedanimal]

Bye. You won't be missed.

[mind617]

homie aint sayin i need to be in the toy thread, need to b back in MY HOODS sketch thread. and as for my post, yea it lags...cause its a freestyle exersize, showing that simple letter and simple background can make a whole production look like more effort was put in it than needed. notice how ppl nicer than you aint sayin shit? cause your on the defence homie and now you back yourself into a corner....and now your gone.....
.....a certain queen song comes to mind...

[n8galicia]

Good riddance to you toy

[mind617]

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/SNC00109.jpg


colors clash a little bit. but these were the only color markers i have

[EastHastings]

i like the char. and the fill.

[redeyedanimal]

excuse my bluntness..theres not such thing as an intermediate...ur either a toy or ur not...and if ur not a toy u shud be posting in the sketch thread...that being said mynd and alts gettoutta here yall are 2 good for this shiite

also smk go to the toy thread...theres a general consensus..u have crap lettersstructure and ist drownded out by ur extensions and fills unless ur eurpoean its not ok.

so we'll say this is the "I got simples down, can i get crits other than do simples" thread, maybe. I agree with you freak, but i do feel there are very limited crits in the toy thread, especially for people who rely on the internet for guidance (whether it's righr or wrong it happens).
Or maybe this could be the "can i move on to the NEW sketch thread or stay in the toy thread" thread. haha.

[freakeenyc]

werd redeye u do make a good point..crits in the toy thread are really general for the most part..

[redeyedanimal]

you are a very reasonable person freak, if we could ever meet in person i'd buy you a beer. /nh

[mind617]

hes a bum! dontbuy hi.mshit!

[redeyedanimal]

hahaha, 2 "negs" on one of my posts and still

YOUR REPUTATION ON THIS POST IS EVEN.

and this nigga... :lol2: :lol2: :lol2:
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/utf-8Bc21fbWVlZS5qcGc.jpg

[Veritably Clean]

smoke posi propped me, thanks!

[mind617]

haha

[mind617]

heres another from 09 sometime lol

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/IMG_2323.jpg

and another from my man's n them

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/drawingpoisonclose.jpg

[redeyedanimal]

I need help after the first KE... any thoughts?

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/IMG_0259.jpg

[freakeenyc]

much better kele!

[redeyedanimal]

thanks man. Like i said earlier i think in the toy thread, sometimes i tend to get away from the basics, but then after i realign myself my simples are a lot better. Expand and condense constantly for the win!

[mind617]

yo i just dont think u should limt yourself to using 2 of the SAME letters, like theyre identical. i think if you varried the 2 letter n make em different than eachother. stylicticly the same tho, ya dig? ive been peeped your shit, im deff a fan. here a new one of mine. not tryin to saturate just keep it alive!

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/SNC00472.jpg



i DID edit n flip the pic. give it time to correct itself

[redeyedanimal]

Word. sometimes the simplest shit evades me. Another reason it helps to go back to simples sometimes. :D

^new one's lookin good, the extensions on the M could use a little work, though. Maybe don't connect the left on on the top, idk. It just looks a little off to me.

[mind617]

i thought the m-to the- y conne3ction was useless, cause theres nothings else like that going on, but i was just goin for like an nyc kinda style....i try to make each piece look like my style, with a competely intentional twist to it. like what ever i do....its a "thats what im going for" kinda trhing.....idk if that makes sense. like, that piece i did up there, its all nyc, but its "all me" at the same time , its like 8am i just woke up lol idk wtf im talkin bout hahahahahaha

[redeyedanimal]

anybody got some single letters geeked out with extensions? i'm tryin to get some extension steeze on my pieces.

[Q666]

figure it out for yourself faggot

[BOILFAST]

just fuckin with some different letters, and i don't color at all, outlines are where it's at

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4049/4381424286_df79ee8489.jpg

[redeyedanimal]

this is what i got so far...

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/IMG_0286.jpg

[Decyferon]

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02601.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02607.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02605.jpg

there you go Kele, some I did recently and framed for myself, wife and son

[justchill]

http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420640.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420646.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420647.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420650.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420657.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420653.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420656.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420654.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420655.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420659.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420660.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420664.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420669.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420672.jpg
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy133/chero419/P1420674.jpg

[freakeenyc]

feeling the chero withe the light blue filla nd yellow 3ds

[n8galicia]

mind: the symmetrical heart on the i (?) could use some work

[mind617]

yea i know, but w/e...the heart wasnt supposed to be simetrical
yo the letters of that chero are ok, but that dj is terrible! also i think your script needs CRAZY work


it says MYND by the way. i dont write with an "I"

[mind617]

heres some shit from mid 09, the piece on top was my 1st color piece sketch in like 5years after doing NOTHING but bic pen sketches, all color pencil.
one on the bottom was like the next day, its a pic of one of my boys when we were younger bombin in boston n shit....enjoy

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/SNC00067.jpg

yes the arm is intentionally weird lookin....w/e it took me like 20mins

[Decyferon]

personallyI thikn those Chero sketches need to be in the toy section, letter proportions are all ovr the place, they are messy and I don't think they particularly flow that well, not saying they are terrible just that they need a lot of work

[mind617]

yea i agree.

[redeyedanimal]

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/IMG_0289.jpg

[mind617]

fresh!!

[mcrgraff08]

http://i910.photobucket.com/albums/ac308/ewor210/DSCF0180.jpg

any ways to improve it in your opinions? Thanks.

[datniggachauncy]

http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac291/kwestone_25/dudugreen-1-1.jpg
http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac291/kwestone_25/dugreen-1.jpg
http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac291/kwestone_25/dunnnz-1.jpg
http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac291/kwestone_25/dunzo1-1.jpg
http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac291/kwestone_25/dunzo-2.jpg

[mind617]

more like chicken and broc.

[redeyedanimal]

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll309/jliv1650/IMG_0298_2-1.jpg

[mind617]

too dope

[shaken20]

i didnt know this thread existed
imma start postin in here

[shaken20]

http://i50.tinypic.com/2mqoqvb.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/2jezcjr.jpg
http://i48.tinypic.com/2vb3ko9.jpg
http://i48.tinypic.com/qq4ejd.jpg
http://i47.tinypic.com/wa288g.jpg
http://i47.tinypic.com/do46yw.jpg
http://i45.tinypic.com/2h4j14y.jpg
http://i48.tinypic.com/2wno3uc.jpg
http://i46.tinypic.com/b5smew.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/2m7f1gw.jpg

[midgetfeltch]

this isnt intermediate... pretty much everything here just belongs in the toy thread..

[MorganFreeman]

http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs036.snc3/12417_10150110985625014_532660013_11550490_5586512 _n.jpg

[THEATK]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0fJgHFBfrKw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6N2ZqzIE6pY

[mind617]

this week on lost...
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/SNC00044.jpg
lol

i did this 1 too

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/SNC00009.jpg
bad pic, just a colored freestyle

[shaken20]

done for MYND
http://i39.tinypic.com/34zdq8g.jpg
done for MERCKS
http://i39.tinypic.com/2hn6hj7.jpg

[mind617]

dude that mind came out terrible, all your other pieces are like 100% better than that!

[shaken20]

i know. i blame many things. but imma do up one more homie

[carlo1]

just cause some of yall have been at this for a minute doesnt mean you arnt toys anymore.
some of you need to wake the fuck up

[shaken20]

http://i43.tinypic.com/4zw9u.jpg

[MR.CRUS]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2738/4445583865_dab539c969.jpg

[redeyedanimal]

just cause some of yall have been at this for a minute doesnt mean you arnt toys anymore.
some of you need to wake the fuck up


...

[vare_one]

actually i just been doing some research and
heres my conclusion...............as from the moby thesaurus 2.

intermediate - Moby Thesaurus II by Grady Ward, 1.0 :

158 Moby Thesaurus words for "intermediate":
Charlie McCarthy, Hydromatic, act between, agent, amidships,
ancilla, appliance, arbitrate, arbitrational, arbitrative,
arbitrator, automatic transmission, average, banal, bargain,
broker, center, central, cogwheel, coming between, common,
connection, contact, contrivance, core, creature, deputy, device,
differential, differential gear, dummy, dupe, entrepreneur,
equatorial, equidistant, fair, fairish, freewheel, front,
front man, gear, gear train, gearbox, gearing, gearshift,
gearwheel, go between, go-between, going between, halfway,
handmaid, handmaiden, high, implement, indifferent, instrument,
interagent, intercede, interceder, intercessional, intercessor,
intercessory, intercurrent, interfere, interior, interjacent,
interlocutory, intermedial, intermediary, intermediate agent,
intermediator, intermediatory, intermedium, internuncio,
interpleader, interpose, intervene, intervener, intervenient,
intervening, interventional, interventionist, interventor, judge,
lever, low, make terms, mean, mechanism, medial, median, mediate,
mediating, mediative, mediator, mediatorial, mediatory, mediocre,
mediterranean, medium, meet halfway, mesial, mesne, mezzo, mid,
middle, middle-of-the-road, middleman, middlemost, middling,
midland, midmost, midships, midway, midwife, minion, moderate,
mouthpiece, negotiant, negotiate, negotiator, negotiatress,
negotiatrix, neutral, normal, nuclear, ombudsman, ordinary, organ,
overdrive, pacificatory, pawn, plaything, puppet, rack, referee,
represent, reverse, routine, servant, slave, so-so, spokesman,
spokeswoman, standard, standard transmission, step in, stick shift,
stooge, synchromesh, tool, toy, transitional, transmission,
treat with, umpire, usual, vehicle

dont believe me
check for yourself...:rolleyes:
http://onlinedictionary.datasegment.com/word/intermediate

so really youve just gone and opened yourselfs another toy thread

[redeyedanimal]

check the history of the thread... do your research. Nobody here opened it, just brought it back to the front page. Good effort though.

[vare_one]

fair play:scrambled:

[mind617]

i odnt understand the need to come in a thread not contribute positivly then bash others for tryin..

[redeyedanimal]

this forum has a really convenient IGNORE function, if you click on the screen name, view public profile, and ADD ----- to ignore list. :D

[mind617]

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/SNC00117.jpg

did this for a young cat whos just starting out

[freakeenyc]

ill^

u gotta show me how u color shit next time i see ya.

[shaken20]

http://i43.tinypic.com/xbep1u.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2qu86dz.jpg

[mind617]

sure freak

[skeet-]

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u39/thacarlylegroup/SNC00117.jpg

did this for a young cat whos just starting out

word im feelin this. wan2 excahnge? pm me if ur down.