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[imported_moses1]

[img]http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1692616&a=12995127&p=48932641'>


what do u think of my style, ne crizitism welcome.

[imported_JedaOne]

personaly the letter arent that great i am not any better but i have seen better how long have you been writting i liek the character!

[same ol' 6s & 7s]

character = baaaaaaad
letters are pretty good if you lose the connectors which dont really work, but the basic letter structure is ok from what i see. keep drawin.

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I'm not your average honky, raised by a pack of retarded donkies...

[imported_moses1]

i been writin for almost a year. i been doin my best to develope a style. ne1 have ne thoughts on how i could my the lettering better.

[kid furie]

start simple...

[mr.yuck]

Yes. I the wisdom tycoon have some knowledge to drop. Try by making all of your letters the same size. Keep the basic shape you have now. Something i reckomend to all new comers is to read a book on caligraphy. As you understand letter structure better you will be able to tear the damn alphabet to pieces my young boy.

PEACE

[same ol' 6s & 7s]

1st- i am not an expert, king, or even close, but i do know a few things. some i can apply, others i still work on.

having said that, i think that just working towards making your letters more consistant. in style and in shape. draw with a pencil and eraser close by. work with it. tweak it. draw shapes. rectangles, sqares, circles etc. this will help with getting some consistancy.
drawdrawdraw
paintpaintpaint
thats what they tell me
keep at it
dont lose hope
i get excited by progress, because i am no where near perfection

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I'm not your average honky, raised by a pack of retarded donkies...

[imported_curious george]

what the fuck is up with that WAK ASS 3D!

[imported_intercept]

Originally posted by moses1:
i been writin for almost a year. i been doin my best to develope a style. ne1 have ne thoughts on how i could my the lettering better.

holy shit...a year and you suck that much i have been writing for a year and a half and painting for like a year(on and off).....and i was better than you when i first started look you should learn how to draw dont just tag wit markers............a year you must be kidding......this makes me happy to know i dont compelly suck..................

[sect one]

its not that bad the character looks like the crackhead from the pj's

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[imported_satellite]

make the two "s"'s consistent, lose that thing over the m, and the o looks slightly lopsided

[knowlej]

for the love of god, lose the arrows!

[imported_garth vader]

the character looks like that crackhead from the pj's

[SezOneSke&SonsIncCo]

its not bad if your a beginer
just keep it more simpler, work on your handstyle,then throwies,then simples, then try out your crazy stuff
thats the way I THINK is the best way to get better
but who am i?

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Penis Juice!!

[imported_ruEtbeer]

Originally posted by knowlej:
for the love of god, lose the arrows!

and change your name....moses kog.

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i am the buff...

[imported_jojoo13]

take away all that other shit and you have yourself a good bomb...the charecter is wack though..it looks like a old man or a girrafe of some sort

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no no NO not BZEE....BZ
={(____) <---i luv this stuff!!!

[near]

personally i like it...its not a totally dope style or anything but ide like to see it up some where props on the character

[imported_dead people rule]

dont do that

[Vanity]

dump the connectors, don't worry about cuts in the 3d, cump the character, have the letters on the same 'plane' and make em the same size.
there's a cat from st. louis that writes moses

[imported_Sirca]

Nice letter structure...its a pretty good piece

[imported_rancid]

The only good letter is the s.
The handstyle sucks...

[imported_JedaOne]

how long have you been writting

[imported_moses1]

OK dudes and chiks i been tryin all the things most of u all tell me, but when i do it just looks so simple kinda like just plain ol bubble letters neone can do. most of u all say it sucks but if u seen it w/out all that stuff around it i think u would be sayin worse thing. does ne1 have ideas for write it w/out all the shit around it but where it wont be so simple lookin. and i been tryin to write for bout a year but i change my style completly a few months ago. also thanks for tell me how it is cause i dont want to be out there putin up bullshit people think if fucked up

[imported_Seym1has2no3fiends]

I really like the word "crizitism"
it sounds funny! criz-it-tism!

[imported_Fr@se]

i bet your crew is pretty tigh

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[imported_Imerz]

Originally posted by curious george:
what the fuck is up with that WAK ASS 3D!

Nothing..... maybe?

[AidsIsDeadlyShit]

work on the 3d .. the char the can the e and a lil bit on the s... not sayin i am dope but i just think that those are some aspects that need attention..

[This message has been edited by AidsIsDeadlyShit (edited 05-23-2001).]

[MASk!]

Originally posted by intercept:
holy shit...a year and you suck that much i have been writing for a year and a half and painting for like a year(on and off).....and i was better than you when i first started look you should learn how to draw dont just tag wit markers............a year you must be kidding......this makes me happy to know i dont compelly suck..................


TO bad your an asshole!

[imported_SaEkOnCe]

that stuff aint that bad. you look like you have mad potential keep writing.

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"PTA smack a ho"

[brown twinkie]

honestly that bboy character is way played out.
if you wanna do characters, be original please.
other than that you need to PRACTICE.

[imported_i sketch sace]

Hey im a mad toy also and i know i suck but im just saying that the arrows should go other than that its pretty tight

[Curve]

it s alright some of the letters need to be improved character looks good....

[i eat poo]

reminds me of Giant

[imported_AesoSayso]

oh dear....this is what needs to go on:
try making some letters individually some straight letters and think of your letters as structures that cant be bent too much or the lose strength,like i said just try doin some straight letters(keeping them relatively the same size) and try doing some realistic maybe comic book type characters before you get into inproportionate "graffiti style" ones you know?
im not saying im some sort of master but this was info handed down to me by some pretty ill writers so im just passing it on.
dont let people tell you you suck either because everyones stuff was crap their first time just practice it up.

Peace

[imported_devilsMESnger]

what style?

[imported_jungle cat]

try something else.. that has nothing to do with drawing or art.. and you will be set.

[imported_BATMASTERSON]

JEDA = TOY

[imported_JedaOne]

bat loly ou are a loerss say it to my face

[imported_BATMASTERSON]

wtf is your problem jeda its only a joke [img]http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb//mad.gif'>

[imported_fame]

Originally posted by jungle cat:
try something else.. that has nothing to do with drawing or art.. and you will be set.

FINALLY!...someone gave the best advice you could give to a toy who has no potential. THANK YOU...and yes, go find something not related to art...and get good at it.

[imported_dumpybottom]

are you the moses from cincy?

[imported_Xeroshoes]

I'm sorry dude but you need to stop tagging. If you've been writing for a year and your shit still dont got any skill, you just arent an artist. People think of tagging like they think of, say, rolling joints, that its an acquired skill. But I think, if they dont got any artistic ability, what the fuck makes them think you can be a good writer? I guess its ok to try the shit for a while, and see if you discover some talent you never knew you had, but if you still suck this bad after a year, you really need to drop it. If you really cant give up tagging, just do handstyles. But do us all, especially yourself, a favor and dont waste your time drawing pieces or characters ever again. Peace.

[Modizy]

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[Modizy]

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[RSZ_BOYS212]

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