2 toy bic pen sketches

[imported_Seek One]

heres my two toy sketches i did in class last week if you want to help me it would be much appreciated and if you wantto bash me what the fuck go ahead...they are both simialar new style i tryed th second one sucks more though and i know the Q is fuct...they say seque
[img]http://www.graffheadz.8k.com/seque.gif'>
[img]http://www.graffheadz.8k.com/seque2.gif'>

[imported_Seek One]

eh try the link forthe second one if it doesnt work for you http://www.graffheadz.8k.com/seque2.gif ('http://"http://www.graffheadz.8k.com/seque2.gif"')

[kid furie]

*start simple*

[imported_Fr@se]

does that say seque?

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[imported_Seek One]

yes

[Umpa Loompa]

its not that bad.. but just start simple... how long have you been writing?

[AeRoS0ul]

it dosnt look balanced to me

[Lazy Gringo]

The first one looks decent excepct for you s, fix that shit and you got my vote

[worthlessoner]

damn you suck.

[imported_dumpybottom]

i like the first one except for the top part of the s..... not that my opinion really means shit.

[platapie]

top ones pretty cool. run with it then paint it.

[imported_iamsowack]

I think it needs to be more balanced
its alright

I SUCK

[blunted]

the static lines makes the arrow look like a penis.

[Destruction by Definition]

just work at it...at least you have original style, which is lacking today with most writers...

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[uselessuse]

JUST MAKE YER LETTER STRUCUTE BETTER.PAINT THAT SHIT.WERK HARD AT IT.WITHIN ANOTHER YEAR U SHOULD BE ABLE TO ROCK NICE PIECES IF U PAINT ALOT ANDWERK YER STYLE

[SymonSays25]

Damn! How did you think of the name Seek!?!? I wish I would have thought of that!

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[imported_DoSeR]

just draw that same sketch like 20 times everytime notice small details you dont like and change them soon you will have a nice piece but dont try it with all your pieces you will die...

[Revel Devil]

Seque:

First, i don't like the arrow (or the top of the 's.' whichever) in both pieces. i don't like the fact that it is thicker and longer than your letters and that it sticks out, covering some of your letters. it might be okay to stick a bigger, longer piece on the bottom, the top, or running away from it on the end, but don't put it running into the middle of your piece from the outside. the fact that it covers up your letters and nothing else seems to overlap as much kind of bothers me, too: i think if you're going to overlap the arrow so much, overlap some other stuff,too.

Second, do more with your letters. i think they are slightly abstracted, but to roll with the style you're leaning towards, you need to push them farther. i'd suggest doing two things. one, abstract single letters and put them together. for example, make the craziest 'e' you can, 's' you can, and so forth. it might help creatively to do this as just written letters rather than blocked/outlined letters. the second technique is to sketch out the form your piece might take. right now, it's not very striking as an entire composition. so draw some kind of geometry and fit the letters into it.

Finally, make all your lines count. As an example, the bottom of the 'u' in the second sketch is kind of bumpy, and the lines that define the bump or elbow that you've put into it aren't working together. by that i mean, they aren't drawn in relation to lines in other letters around them, and the top of the elbow follows (at times) a much different curve than the lines at the bottom of the elbow. this makes it look toyish.

and with that, i've confused the whole fukkin board. goodnight gentlemen.

granny oner

[imported_TeckFiftyOne]

What Revel Said.
Sketch it over and over. See what dosen't look right and fix it. sometimes I use pencil, Just In Case

[knowlej]

i like it... but check your 3d...
and take revel's advice

[imported_Seek One]

Symon i dont write seek anymore i write it seque as in sequence because i found out alot of people write seek
Revel thanx for the advice i will try to fix the top of that S and thanks to everyone else who gave me advice....this sketch is from last week and since then i been doing it over and over and tweaking it here and there so i will try to improve this style.
-Seque

[imported_SecretAgentX9]

not feeling the "s". other than that, not too bad. have any more simple stuff? post that, i would like to see that.

[imported_JedaOne]

keep trying it i liek the style

[This message has been edited by JedaOne (edited 05-17-2001).]

[imported_SleepOnIt]

uhhh the sneaky trik for eh kinda sketches...put some 3d on it ...but that is only if you want to disguise it. ahhh forget it...i cant offer constructive advice...

[2pac]

SEEK
You are the biggest sucker. You have shitty ass style, and you eat testicles like meatballs

[worthlessoner]

I think red devil is a big ass toy, and so is seek.. you both should be hit by a car..

[Ouija]

I like them both. The S on the first one is cool.

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[imported_Sirca]

seque,
nice shit dood keep it up

[imported_JedaOne]

post some more shit seque

[imported_i sketch sace]

2 pac i think its time you shut the hell up man...i have seen other work from him and he is mad good keep up the good work man-


nick,...im joshes cousin

[imported_Seym1has2no3fiends]

Originally posted by i sketch sace:
2 pac i think its time you shut the hell up man...i have seen other work from him and he is mad good keep up the good work man-


nick,...im joshes cousin


kewl, I'm assuming that seque's name is nick. I see how it is, all of these toys, seque (seek), jeda, and jica, they're all connected! Nobody is safe anymore!

[bigpac]

hey! why don't you suck my fucking nuts!

[imported_Seek One]

ok no my name is not nick no i am not good and yes i know jeda and sirca i am trying to help them get started its fucking tough as hell to teach people errr. sace just dont give out names over the internet please..

[imported_urine]

there needs to be a bic pen battle that would be the shit

[imported_Colt]

Seek, where are you from? I would love to see you battle Seak from Boston...it would be amusing......

Colt (45)

[imported_BATMASTERSON]

YES I WOULD ALSO FIND THAT HUMOROUS. HA... HA... IAM SO AMUSED...... [img]http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb//rolleyes.gif'>

[imported_Seek One]

Originally posted by Colt:
Seek, where are you from? I would love to see you battle Seak from Boston...it would be amusing......

Colt (45)

and this is exactly why i write seque totally different name and meaning seque as in sequence ok i would like to see seak of boston battle all of the other seak,seeks out there seek new orleans, seak germany, and a million others....

[This message has been edited by Seek One (edited 05-24-2001).]

[imported_JedaOne]

hell yea they think that your name is gay its awsome nad you are good and origanal for making it lek that so screw them lata

[imported_BATMASTERSON]

GO JEDA ITS YO BIRFDAY

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[imported_Seek One]

Originally posted by JedaOne:
hell yea they think that your name is gay its awsome nad you are good and origanal for making it lek that so screw them lata

you sound like a herb...dont worry i can cover myself.

[arsenal]

seque, at least your trying!

[im a big toy oner]

Originally posted by kid furie:
*start simple*

start simple??? whats wrong with them??? personally i think they were most definitly copied from somewhere but thats just me i sware ive seen that before. those sketches are good if they were on a wall with some color theyd be nasty

[imported_BATMASTERSON]

^BUMPSLORANIA COUNTY CANADA^

[drewWrite]

its all good. hatin's for the weak

[im a big toy oner]

Originally posted by Colt:
Seek, where are you from? I would love to see you battle Seak from Boston...it would be amusing......

Colt (45)

you mean seek from boston?? this kid would burn him if he has good can control seeks pieces that ive seen are wack hes more of a bomber.

[imported_Seek One]

wtf? this thread is mad old o well heres something newer but still old if anyone cares, i might try painting it [img]http://yourphotos.com/users/2190/seque.jpg'>

[imported_the last slave]

t looks nicer..its more balanced and the letters aren't as "odd" as before.....props on the improvement

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[im a big toy oner]

id definitly fuck that sketch its kinda cute how its got that hole in it.. i like it now put it on a wall

[imported_Cyber Optx]

are you still in preschool..