a sketch.......

[ratheruneek]

Please just give me some suggestions.... I don't mind criticism just please don't be assholes....thanks...http://www.freephoto-i.net/browse.php3?use...1&file=will.jpg (http://www.freephoto-i.net/browse.php3?username=illmatic54321&file=will.jpg)

[greedy mars]

its not bad .... needs some work though.. keep it up.. just draw everyday and paint everyday and trust me youll get better.. keep up

[ratheruneek]

nah it's my boy...i says dedicated to will right on it...

[swif1]

[img]http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/illmatic54321/will.jpg'>

[your all gay]

wizaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack, was that nigga watching king of the hill when he drew that, and tell your boy his quotes are gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. hahhahahahahahah "patience is a virtue" "live with regrets" hahahhahahaha slap that fool.

[Rhubarb]

imagine your looking at a picture of a half shitty girl naked then you get to the bottom of the picture and you dont find a nasty pussy instead you find an 8 inch cock looking at you. that was the feeling i got on that.

[ASER1NE]

that fuckin sucks , could be worse . but no sir .........i do not like it .

[ratheruneek]

Like I said before..you guys and your negative ass attitudes can all eat a dick....and if you knew the story behind it, you would not be saying the quotes are gay....so fuck all ya'll nd stop hatin...stp being jealous and just live your shitty little lives....hahahahahahahhahha

[ratheruneek]

your whole fuckin life is wiiiizzzzzaaccckkk you fuckin fake thug...have a good day because I know you work at fuckin Mcdonalds cleaning the fuckin bathroom stalls yo fuckin scrub....hahahahahah

[When]

dont post if you dont want negative comments, sadly thats the way it goes.

the letters need much work and the character lacks that certain something, it does look quite kingofthehillish

[ratheruneek]

the reason why I post is to get some constructive criticism. I don't mind that, becaue that is what I need. It's just when people start talking like assholes I feel the need to say something. I don't post my shit so people can talk shit about it. I post it to get comments on what I need to work on. As for that King of the hill shit..thats cool...the artist that makes that show makes some dough....

[Rhubarb]

i wasnt being an asshole. your letters are worse than the rest but the rest is not very good either. you made more posts defending yourself than nayone did attacking you. sorry no one got on your nuts for your 7th grade art project.

[dremster]

at first i thought it was a joke. the quote is lame, the city background is simplistic, the piece is way lame, and the face while it has artistic quality has no place in the drawing. it actaully is kind of scarry looking...

[ratheruneek]

alright, obviously you guys don't get it. I realize that his is not a masterpiece. I realize that. And no, I don't want people to get on my nuts. What I a looking for is some better artists to help me out and tell me ways to improve my sense of drawing. When I posted it I didn't expect anyone to like it and that's ok. Although you guys say the quotes are gay and such, they do have a lot of meaning between me and this kid. All I want is for people to tell me ways to improve and just help a brother out. I don't care if you like it or not, just let me know how to make my shit better. I'm a loner. None of my friends draw or even know what a good drawing is. That is why I come here for some help. Not for people to tell me what a shitty artist I am.

[gimic.one]

nah ... you cant say "help a brotha out" when your white...

and .. it seems you dont know what a good drawing is either... the 3d is shit... the face has no structure... it looks like somemone took a shit while watching king of the hill and it was the outcome. the drawing is pitiful... no im not just tryin to put you down .. but it is makin me depressed that someone actually draws something like that... and then ontop of it, and no i dont care what the fuck it means between yall, you have the gayest quote in it.

when someone tells you your shit is garbage then go draw some more or quit... one or the other dont bitch about the fact htat people dont like your king of the hill wannabe piece of shit.

[teister]

First of all, don't tell people to be jealous when you do lack a lot of skill. You asked for criticism so people are going to be assholes. Just take it in stride. You definitely need to work out some kinks in your stuff. One thing that happens a lot is when people draw portraits and things they kind of look at the subject and then draw what they think they see instead of drawing whats actually there. So your thing might resemble your boy, but it definitely is not realism. You need to find a picture and then very carefully draw exactly what you see. Go slowly and pretend like you're tracing the photo or like you're a machine that follows the contours on the picture and replicates it on the page. It takes a lot of practice. You need to work on your letters too. Just keep it up and you'll get there.

[imported_Comp]

ok, well your handwriting in the background is lame, the outline around it doesn't look good. personally i hate outlines like that because it looks like handwriting that those girls use when they signed your yearbook in 3rd grade. the city background is cheesy. everyone has done it, and unless you can make it original then i'd say pick something else. if you wanted to stick with it, add color. it doesn't make sense that everything else has color and your city is just white. i hate king of the hill, i hate the way the characters look i hate that show soooo much. as a result of that i don't like your character, maybe i'm being unfair but i just don't like it. there's too much detail to keep it simple and there isn't enough detail to make it good. the shaping is all off to make it realistic and there's not enough distortion to make it abstract. your drawing is hovering in this grey area where it has no style and is just really bland. there's my constructive criticism.

[dremster]

i already left my criticism above, but then i just realized, why are you drawing your boy? thats kinda gay don't ya think!

[forest gump]

i dont see the whole king of the hill shit but what ever

[ratheruneek]

First, that is what I am talking about. I really honestly appreciate all the feedback. That is what this is about.I just wnted better artists to help mea little you know. Second, the whole brother thing is not abou being blak or whit r chinese. It's that we are artists or trying to become artists. We are all in the smae boat. Some better , some worse. My point is that we should all try to help each other get better and not just degrade the work. Finlly, the reason why I drew him is because I wanted to dedicate a little drawing to him. He's been locked up for 4 1/2 months of a 15year bid. And I honestly don't care what you guys think of the quotes because if you knew the story then you understand........thanks again...

[ratheruneek]

here is the story..maybe it will help you understand the quotes.....and also..you must hear the song,because it has a hell of a lot to do with this...http://ithacajournal.com/news/stories/2002...al/1482022.html (http://ithacajournal.com/news/stories/20020117/localregional/1482022.html)

[imported_Comp]

hahahahahahaha that story makes the drawing so much funnier. 3.5 lbs of coke. hahahaha.

[ratheruneek]

thats fucked up man...you have no fuckin heart at all...I don't know if you've ever lost one of your best friends...but it's a fucked up situation to go through..it's not a fuckin joke ......seriously

[dremster]

so your boy got busted selling ya-yo...so you drew a portrait of him. i don't care if my friends in jail for 50 years, i wouldn't draw a pic of him. or maybe i would, who knows...but your rendition makes him look real gay....

[focus]

the quote is also from Muppets in Space, this freaky shrimp sings it. Anyone who hasn't seen the movie I heavily recomend it. Dope sountrack, lots of funk and soul. For real.

[desired]

Yo dude stay sketching on the can until u got some really oringinal stuff

Yah that white dude does look like hank from king of the hill???how original

ps don't copy FoX tv cartoon characters

[ratheruneek]

ahhahahahahah...desired, you piece of shit..the only thing you burn is the fuckin warts off your nuts you homo thug....ahahahahaahahah

[NinjaStar]

it's basically funny because you drew a shitty picture of a drug dealer and you want us to feel sorry for you because your bad at drawing and for him because he's bad at life. Neither of which are going to happen. Get over yourself.

[Rhubarb]

wow your friend is a complete moron. stop trying to get sympathy. how many times does he have to get caught, and why would you have 3.5lbs of coke in a dorm room.

[fire crotch]

Originally posted by ratheruneek
alright, obviously you guys don't get it. I realize that his is not a masterpiece. I realize that. And no, I don't want people to get on my nuts. What I a looking for is some better artists to help me out and tell me ways to improve my sense of drawing. When I posted it I didn't expect anyone to like it and that's ok. Although you guys say the quotes are gay and such, they do have a lot of meaning between me and this kid. All I want is for people to tell me ways to improve and just help a brother out. I don't care if you like it or not, just let me know how to make my shit better. I'm a loner. None of my friends draw or even know what a good drawing is. That is why I come here for some help. Not for people to tell me what a shitty artist I am.

dont draw big fucking heads of your boyfriend over your letters. theres a start.

[!CEBERG]

Originally posted by ratheruneek
Please just give me some suggestions.... I don't mind criticism just please don't be assholes....thanks...http://www.freephoto-i.net/browse.php3?use...1&file=will.jpg (http://www.freephoto-i.net/browse.php3?username=illmatic54321&file=will.jpg)

as my man tease would say "shake the haters off"

keep your head up dude, 99% of this board is all talk

put the head behind your letters for a start

the hand writing is just cursive thats all done up to look elegant. if thats what you were going for then clean it up. if not, then work on your handstyles so you can replace that writing...

the shading shows promise but i mean theres different forms out there to use because they look good...

go to www.google.com (http://www.google.com) and look up linear shading, or crack a comic book open and try to duplicate that type, their both the same thing...

or look up cross-hatching, theres a few different types you can use...

but things to start with are common sense. practice makes perfect. just practice, if your drawing a straight line, dont stop working on it untill its straight know what i mean? dont leave half assed lines an what not around the picture it will make it come out sloppy as a whole.

it looks like you could use a lesson in using light sources when you shading also, learn how different textures or shapes affect the shade...

if your doin characters learn the human form

this will get you started on learnin how to draw your homeboys head the right way

http://www.anticz.com/heads.htm

just in general clean it up, use colors that look good together, pay attention to what your doing, do one aspect of it at a time, dont jump around on the picture, learn from example and keep your head up

fuck these bitch ass dudes, 1 outta 10 of em got somethin intelligent to say, the rest are to busy acting like their better than somebody

[imported_FROSTY]

you gotta know what not to post!! add that to your little sentance.

that looks like a shit i took an hour ago. practise practise practise, ya I know im a cruel guy but I just say it like it is. ill give ya some advice just to help out though.

the part where the neck goes into the letters at the bottom looks horrible. make it go behind or something. also why the lines on the dudes face. looks like a cat scratched the shit out of him

[Poiuhgd]

You two little coke heads have a nice honeymoon.
You should mail that to your friend when hes in prison. Then when he gets out you may get some of his 3.5 pounds of coke for free,one of his 40 extasy pills, part of that pound of weed they found on him or something else from his sex starved drug dealing ass. Your letters are weaker than your friends aliby. Eat a dick and quit graffiti, your not an artist you are a fool.

[!CEBERG]

Originally posted by Poiuhgd
You two little coke heads have a nice honeymoon.
You should mail that to your friend when hes in prison. Then when he gets out you may get some of his 3.5 pounds of coke for free,one of his 40 extasy pills, part of that pound of weed they found on him or something else from his sex starved drug dealing ass. Your letters are weaker than your friends aliby. Eat a dick and quit graffiti, your not an artist you are a fool.

aha why are you so concerned about him or his boy? :lol:

[Max Powers]

you really do suck.

[decu goldyn1]

damn somebody defaced ur drawing there's a huge ugly head in the middle of it
an there's no sympathy for you did u ever see that commercial
DRUGS SUPPORT TERRORIST
ha

[dELiSs]

oh my gawddddd dear lord the guy's cut off at the neck . oh holy shit
it looks like hes saying "har dee har "

[dremster]

Originally posted by decu goldyn1
damn somebody defaced ur drawing there's a huge ugly head in the middle of it
an there's no sympathy for you did u ever see that commercial
DRUGS SUPPORT TERRORIST
ha

i'm fucking sitting at work laughing out loud at your response..."huge head" thats funny as shit

[Jetz]

the 3d was shit...the face was really really crappy too, no offense man

[bodice_ripper]

Originally posted by decu goldyn1

DRUGS SUPPORT TERRORIST



I would love to do a commercial on where a lot of these terrorists are buying their shit from...
AMERICA SUPPORTS TERRORISTS

[aerosoled]

[img]http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/slystonepart2/came3.jpg'>
[img]http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/slystonepart2/came2.jpg'>
[img]http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/slystonepart2/came.jpg'>
this is came from MA, from evilgraffiti. the name is taken, unless that sketch says game.

[imported_Comp]

it says "game over" because the kid in the picture is a drug dealer busted for 3.5 pounds of coke and is in jail for 15 years, so his game is over.