whack sketch

[newjersey]

[img]http://www.freephoto-i.net/users/sisold01/skin5.jpg'>
post feedback..... please...

[SerOneADC]

hmm...that looks strangely farmiliar...nice!

[binaryheresy]

same advice as anyone else will give you... start simple and work your way up. addons should come later after you have the basics of letter styling down.

[MrMajicMarkker]

correct me if im mistaken, but do i see 4dc on there?don't tell me you are reppin 4dc....

[newjersey]

nope adc....

[Zack Morris]

i agree witht he simple kick advice. Look at most wildstyles and you will see that the foundation for them is just really trong simple letters. Without a good structure your letters look weak as shit. Keep it simple for a while and you will get the hang of things better.

[Yabityabo]

why waste our time if you already know its whack?

[i'mlost]

at least you know it's whack

[Wilt]

Originally posted by JumpOffStuff
at least you know it's whack

[newjersey]

I dont think its that whack. i just said that cause whenever i used to type in how long ive been doing it for.... people are like yo it doesnt matter how long you have been in the game that dont mean antihng.... also im always getten hated on.. i personally like the piece...... and im not sayen its wild style... its just my style....

[DEFCON2.0]

Jus remember kid ya gotta crawl before ya can walk work on letter style first keep it simple sooner or later you'll see ya self gettin the style element out of it then add effex (arrows,3ds,etc...) keep it up dont take creative criticism as hate take it as new learning from old.....:king:

[--zeSto--]

you put a layer of purple all along the bottom,
and it makes the white on top feel empty.

I order you do use nothing but
1 sharpie (black)
1 sharpie (red)
1 Fine tip Black pen
1 HB pencil

real style needs to stand on it's own. Colour is just a bonus.

[Mr. Mang]

he's not bad. just give him some time.

[Smok]

Originally posted by --zeSto--
you put a layer of purple all along the bottom,
and it makes the white on top feel empty.

I order you do use nothing but
1 sharpie (black)
1 sharpie (red)
1 Fine tip Black pen
1 HB pencil

real style needs to stand on it's own. Colour is just a bonus.

[Delta-9]

Ya make sure you got some solid letters b4 addin the color...decent but kinda sloppy:huh?: :huh?: :huh?:

[Rym'N Simon]

i dont know what the fuck that shit is.....start off basic:D

[Stoney Blaze]

not bad. it should look nicer if it was cleaner.
add-ons and extentions look better when the letter can be clearly defined.

you're gettin' there...keep it up.

[-MOE LESTER-]

i have no idea what the hell that is....just start simple buddy.....that looks like something off of bboys.com

[newjersey]

i write skin..... and the piece was a double pager..... i fucked up the top portion of it..... so i cut the top of bolth pages off.... so its just like a hanging piece in my book...lol

[fire crotch]

imnot trying to hate, but why do people start a thread with a "wack sketch". just doesnt seem logical.

[swif1]

"whack sketches" are welcome in the "toys post here" thread [img]http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon12.gif'>

[CRone]

Originally posted by fire crotch
imnot trying to hate, but why do people start a thread with a "wack sketch". just doesnt seem logical.


Why should it even matter? If you are gonna criticize something, criticize the sketch, not the name of the topic.


I think the piece is pretty dope if you changed around the colors a bit.

[fire crotch]

u just said the sketch is wack. the title of the sketch says wack sketch. pointers- new color scheme still wouldnt make this sketch dope.
at least its an original though.