Let me know what you think

[Opus]

Alright dudes, let er rip

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Ego

[DBMstyles]

not bad at all, i'd say continue the black around the 3d and maybe a different color for a force field

[JUWSE]

ok. the "o" is kinda fat though. good start.

[cazper]

simple yet pretty good, like guy above me said, continue the the black on the 3d.......also, get some better coloring utencils, it'll make it look a whole lot better, but overall, pretty nice, im feeling the E.....

[tears*uno]

the E looks like a Z to me

[toys#1fan]

lloks like yu colored it w/ a crayon

[imported_FROSTY]

I cant beleive there have been 5 replies and not one person has dissed it.

looks like a hugh pile of fresh dog shit.

but keep practicing

[decu goldyn1]

uhh
the D i guess on the end does'nt really work with the other letters
try to balance the whole thing more and make the D rounder cuz the sharp point on the end doesn't look good
rice and peas

[seno.oner]

use markers next time..work on your letter formation
keep practicing

[-sudz-]

Originally posted by tears*uno
the E looks like a Z to me

and the O looks like a D

[THEdude]

i think its good because it's simple and you can read it, the E needs a little kick at the top
and the 3d block needs some work inside
just keep doing it for like a couple of weeks and post it again

[Ser3adc]

i'd have to agree with what everybody said except for frosty...i dont think it is shit...but could be made better. the e looks like a z, and the o looks like a d. also, that color skeme would look dope if u used prismacolor markers, or even prisma pencils. i really like how the letters overlap but are sort of transparent. also try to keep the 3d the same thinkness, like inside the o and the g, if the 3d did not go all the way down, and was cut off at the same thickness as on the bottom of the letters, it would look alot better. you dont have to do anything i said but in my opinion it would look alot better that way. anyways...give it some work and post it again.

[platapie]

your 3d is way better then i thuahg it was goign to be. try and do it a little simpler tho. slow down on the wild style and hsit just take it slow.

[binaryheresy]

thought a little of the subject, we need to create some new words in the english language that we can start writing. i mean, considering the list of 15000 artists around the world, and sooooo many multiples, like ego, for instance. we should really start putting some new words into websters good ole' dictionary and then start writing that shit on walls and trains and etc. sorry. old school isn't my style, but decent. get markers.

[Pilau Hands]

my best advice would be to keep working on letters
and keep the color scheme to two choices
black fill white outline and so on

this will better teach you how to shave lines and clean
up overspray without worrying too much about messing
up the fill as you work.

[uncle-boy]

Originally posted by platapie
your 3d is way better then i thuahg it was goign to be. try and do it a little simpler tho. slow down on the wild style and hsit just take it slow.

:idea:

[xUrbanWastex]

Originally posted by tears*uno
the E looks like a Z to me

also the O looks like a D

[mizx]

lol.. is this a joke?

[Blizzard]

This isnt bad at all but i am not feeling the coloring.

[teister]

Yeah, the letters are decent, but the fill needs work. Try with some nice markers, or make the pencil darker and more solid.

[Poiuhgd]

FROSTY I cant beleive there have been 5 replies and not one person has dissed it. looks like a hugh pile of fresh dog shit.

your gay frosty
thats bad but you also suck

[Poiuhgd]

you too nak

[xx..nFer..xx]

ey if you use colored pencils, use them correctly. that is the straight sloppiest ugliest fill in i ever saw but the outline is pretty nice... learn to use colored pencils correctly though man... you held the pencil at different angles in different places and its really distracting... especially on the 3-d...

i suggest you redo the outline a little neater, and adjust it a little so the letters look like the letters they actually are, and fill it in with marker. if you're completely new to wild fill ins, use sharpies and make it simple... then start using prisma colors; you can be real creative with prisma colors cuz you can go over one color with another without it turning to shit brown. :crazy:

[Jetz]

sloppy but a nice start...

[seno.oner]

nak are you dissing him?

[Delta-9]

good concept but could of been a whole lot better with some better color or something...forms are so-so...I dunno....keep at it

[CRone]

Originally posted by decu goldyn1
uhh
the D i guess on the end does'nt really work with the other letters
try to balance the whole thing more and make the D rounder cuz the sharp point on the end doesn't look good
rice and peas


:D :D :D :D Thats an "O"

[cdz]

heres my opinion...it sucks...bad.

[ASER1NE]

ohh sweet jesus , youre a brave brave fellow.........

[DETO]

Originally posted by -sudz-


and the O looks like a D

it looks like shit, i don't know how yall are sayin its good look at it its wack! :mad: toy! toy! toy! :mad:

[DETO]

why don't you "dudes" tell him how great his hand steez is too!! :mad: :mad:

[ego trippin]

Okay deto, you seem really eager to put this kid down when he was just looking for approval. So burn him. The way you're talking makes it sound like you're a "king" next to him, so prove it. Prove you have the ability and the right to call him toy. Bitch

[deadlydnut]

Originally posted by ego trippin
Okay deto, you seem really eager to put this kid down when he was just looking for approval. So burn him. The way you're talking makes it sound like you're a "king" next to him, so prove it. Prove you have the ability and the right to call him toy. Bitch people like you make me want to kill the whole human race, if he knows whats wrong with the peice than wouldnt he better? and if he isnt, he's still speaking the truth..

[dELiSs]

Originally posted by Aerosoleil
sloppy but a nice start...

if by nice you mean bad..then yes nice... naw im kidding.. i really have no comment that is worth reading

[~DeNtOnE~]

i like it just soft colors dont cut it hit that hoe hard with sharpies or paint markers good job~~ one~~

[SEMIFOUR1TWO]

it's not bad, just use markers next time:D

[ReLuNo!]

KEEP ON PRACTICING..... THAT SHIT MAKES YOU ILL

[JoeHatesCops]

yo i dig it, but frosty someone (sudz??) posted some of your pieces, and man they looked horrrible, cause i remember this sketch you did (enzo?) and it was alright, but thenin that post i saw it painted and it was gay, you have no room to talk, no beef. the dudes sketch is alright, altho i thought the e was a 2. frost your piece looked like dog shit

[pekrock]

practice makes perfect dude.