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enime
08-14-2002, 07:39 PM
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peace
iloveboxcars
08-14-2002, 07:53 PM
some of your letters are alright.. but keep in mind.. by adding a bunch of dodads and do hickeys to your letters dont make them look any better.. try simples and then SLOWLY work your way into whicever style you want for yourself.
WALE!pd
08-14-2002, 07:58 PM
its not bad its not great either...like he said your letters arent that great its also doesnt have that smoothin feeling to it either it looks like you added to much stuff just trying to make it more than it is.. your also past the stage where you do simples just fuck around with letters doing that style they will come cleaner and better with time
DorkstaR
08-14-2002, 08:04 PM
a couple of those letters look like sumthin dare would do.....just a thought. i like it altogether tho. keep postin. its a big improvement over some other stuff youve posted.
tears*uno
08-14-2002, 08:09 PM
none of your lines are even

sorry, try again
imported_leakbreath
08-14-2002, 09:35 PM
naaah...
melt
08-14-2002, 09:55 PM
the e is alright, i dont really like the rest.
iloveboxcars
08-14-2002, 10:11 PM
yes, the e is ok.. but it looks like so many other e's that my guess is you got it from some where.. but that doesnt matter..

first off.. wale said you are past simples.. trust me.. other than your e.. you are no where near past simples. go back to simples, all of you kids need to stop trying to do something that you just cant do, its like a kid in a wheel chair trying to mountain climb, one thing at a time.
**learn to make your letters flow.. your letters.. well.. actually all the little things that come off your letters just dont flow.. i guess this is just another way of saying just do simples.

get your standard letter form down.. you cant conquer the world of graffiti in one day.

look at different fonts so you can get the basics of what letters you are trying to use...

thats it for now.. until someone else brings up a better point.
enime
08-15-2002, 04:23 AM
thanks i do agree thats its pretty rough this is my first time trying this style thanks for the input. its def. better than what i have done before search my post and you will see

peace
~DeNtOnE~
08-15-2002, 04:48 AM
hey i dont wanna start stuff? but sad to say looks bit!:D sorry just e looks like sew... kinda? and nothing flows to well
Arson.85.ATG
08-15-2002, 04:29 PM
mmmm..no comment:cool:
greedy mars
08-15-2002, 04:37 PM
yo.. alright.
ElectricitySucks
08-15-2002, 05:55 PM
work on the lettering and the extra lines and stuff
dork
08-16-2002, 01:21 AM
sorry but i think it sucks...keep practicing i can see where your going with it