check out this new work

[-m0us3b0t]

hey
ive been writing for almost 2 months now (only blackbook, because I dont want to stink up the walls in my city)
tell me what you think
thanks in advance-any criticism please - i would like some because i
need to improve

if the pics dont show up just right click and then click properties and then copy and paste the image URL in your browser

may take some time to load if you have a slow connection...


this first flick is my 4th try at graffiti
[img]http://www.geocities.com/mrbean146/1.jpg'>

[img]http://www.geocities.com/mrbean146/3.jpg'>
[img]http://www.geocities.com/mrbean146/4.jpg'>
[img]http://www.geocities.com/mrbean146/5.jpg'>
[img]http://www.geocities.com/mrbean146/6.jpg'>

the smudge marks on two of those is because i erased my name on the computer after i got a flick of the work

[ComicBookGuy]

x's.

[-m0us3b0t]

Originally posted by parasite
if the pics dont show up just right click and then click show picture

[TresOne]

Originally posted by parasite

if the pics dont show up just right click and then click show picture

Too bad that doesn't work either...;)

[-m0us3b0t]

dam

then try right clicking the click on properties then copy and paste the url of the pic in browser...

[colonisms]

since you have a geocities account you cant post picutres, but right click on the pic, go to properties, then paste the IMG URL into the address bar and put a question mark after it (?). It should work then.

[colonisms]

yeah that works, your graff it good for your first stuff, and i like the celtic knot things, those are pretty damn intricate, not to mention good.

[dork]

all i see is red x's

[virus]

Originally posted by ]:{o>
all i see is red x's

[fannypack]

Originally posted by ]:{o>
all i see is red x's

[HAZER]

well you have some artistic ability that shows on the whatever you call thems in the last pics... but you have no sense of a letter in the graff sketches.
Work on the Structure of a basic letter ie.
A

once you know the letter well enough you can start to add on to it however you want (connections, highlights etc)

I like the non graff work you did in pen a whole lot.
Where in Canada are ya from?

[-m0us3b0t]

thanx for the comments glow

im from toronto