Messin around with styles

[Darkside]

Jus messin around with some different styles and was looking for some opinions

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[img]http://www.fatcap.co.uk/host/files/Sohl-thumb.jpg'> I did this one for a buddy of mine

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[el_why_en_E]

im hoping that last one doesent say acw.............

[DorkstaR]

you got alot of work to do... try to work with a more simple technique. dont put so many arrows and uneeded bars on your letters. your m on the first flik looks like a tampon. dont connect your letters. make sure they are done well as simples. then you can move on to connecting them. the way you connected them in the 3rd flik is just horrid. make sure to take your time and work on the character. dont even think about 3d's bro... thats even out of my league. the only one i see potential on is the 2nd one. but keep workin at it... whatever you choose. just work with making it simple yet appealing. and by appealing i dont mean a bunch of arrows and shit. sorry if im bitchy... its all constructive criticism... imma nice guy. im just on the rag. laters.

[dork]

yeup... go simple, plese

[xwibxonex]

Originally posted by DorkstaR
your m on the first flik looks like a tampon.

:lol: :lol: :lol:
everything else you said was on point as well, i used to love giving nice criticism, you'd think people would read more and take the advice given to other people who suck as much as them, instead of showing off their books and wasting space. i too am in a bitchy mood, sorry.

[TerraRyzeR]

do not mess around with those style. Go Simple

[StockFresh©]

Originally posted by TerraRyzeR
do not mess around with those style. Go Simple


simple, simple, simple, simple...

[mr_president]

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looks like a GREY bite...

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those who know... haha

[O Mei Shan]

ok while we are here and the critisism is being handed out...can someone help me out with this?

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[Vlad]

who mentioned style :confused:


:lol:

[TerraRyzeR]

i dont c ur letters:confused:

[O Mei Shan]

how cant you ? it says ks13. look i know i suck, im not looking for praise just help.

[Ckit]

Originally posted by O Mei Shan
how cant you ? it says ks13. look i know i suck, im not looking for praise just help.
because they dont look like letters. go simple.

[Scrabble]

:lol: at how cant you see the letters?

i see 'em, but try making them look more like letters...maybe

[TuffKid]

that second one looks like a Bite....here bite this.

[ScientiFik]

Originally posted by TerraRyzeR
do not mess around with those style. Go Simple

[EveryWhere]

Everyone here has given you all the advice you need

[Mr. Peanut]

that would be dope in israel;)

[EveryWhere]

Originally posted by Mr. Peanut
that would be dope in israel;)

haha, but serious dont hate

[melty]

Originally posted by O Mei Shan
ok while we are here and the critisism is being handed out...can someone help me out with this?

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SURE IVE GOT SOME MATCHES!;)

[test pattern]

yeah
the one you did for your bud is the best

[nightagger]

not to be a prick but a lot of people on this site are hipocrites...you tell people to go simple and if someone post something simple you tell them to stop wasting space on the simple shit that they posted...like i said im not trying to be a prick it just bothers me how a lot of people do that shit to rookies...

[mr_president]

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