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TresOne
06-23-2003, 05:43 AM
Trying to keep it simple.. and tips/pointers are appreciated.

[img]http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2869939a.jpg'>
[img]http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2869943a.jpg'>
[img]http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2869940a.jpg'>
[img]http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2873685a.jpg'>
[img]http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2876030a.jpg'>
[img]http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2876036a.jpg'>
[img]http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2876041a.jpg'>
[img]http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2893429a.jpg'>
[img]http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2901849a.jpg'>
[img]http://www.seemesmile.com/photos4/2956488a.jpg'>

I know i tried to overshoot my skill level on a few of those, but whatever.

:o
Neskoner
06-23-2003, 05:54 AM
All i see is X's,sorry..
StockFresh©
06-23-2003, 05:57 AM
i see it all fine (MaKeItHaPpEn, u retard) and it all looks fucking phat to me, the handstyle is definately fresh. keep it up.
dork
06-23-2003, 06:09 AM
yeup, nice hands
dork
06-23-2003, 06:09 AM
yeup, nice hands
xwibxonex
06-23-2003, 06:44 AM
this upsets the shit out of me, your fine, you're on the right track with most of those, you understand what your'e doing wrong, and you'll take time to fix it in the long run, why can't the real toys be as smart as the ones who aren't quite sure of there work.
Neskoner
06-23-2003, 07:18 AM
Originally posted by StockFresh©
i see it all fine (MaKeItHaPpEn, u retard) and it all looks fucking phat to me, the handstyle is definately fresh. keep it up.
I see them now you little buster....And they are quite fresh,i dont see much wrong,they do need a slight bit of work,but not bad at all!!!:)
TerraRyzeR
06-23-2003, 03:34 PM
their alright;)
mogilny
06-24-2003, 04:08 AM
not bad.....
shor
06-24-2003, 07:48 PM
i dig that shit.

here is critique:
on your S in that 8th one the bar gets kinda thin and you cant see the R very well, i do that shit a bit too.. but just something to look out for.. the style looks like most the bars are the same width, you should keep it consistant unless you have a style where some of your bars get thinner and thicker than others.

but post more i like it
~DeNtOnE~
06-24-2003, 08:42 PM
well you seem to be on the right track.. work with letter forms some more like clean it up some .. and your hand is nice but dont be scared to make more crasy good job tho keep it up
hyrax
06-24-2003, 11:20 PM
bump for SARS!
nightagger
06-30-2003, 02:00 PM
I liked those a lot...and i dont think you tried to overshoot your skill level at all...the 3d work on all of them are tight... :stretch: