graffffffffffffffffiti

[moshe one]

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[Vlad]

decent stuff

[HECZONER]

ITS COOL MAN, I LIKE THE STUFF YOU DO... BUT YOU POST THE SAME SKETCH OVER AND OVER THE ONE WITH THE WUTANG COMICS, STARTING A NEW THREAD EACH TIME... GO TO SEARCH FIND THE THREAD YOU STARTED LAST AND BOOM! THERE YAH GO.! PEAS;)

[moshe one]

and thanks 4 the reply

respect
:king: :king: :king:

[mr.VIRS]

yo moshe not feeling this new ones i think you should work on letter structure

[NOUM]

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HAHAHAHAHAH!!!! THIS IS SOOO FUCKING DOPE!! LMFAO!!:lol: :lol:

[Grimace]

on your second one i think the M looks too much like a capital N with a kick on the top right

[Dr. Dazzle]

Originally posted by moshe one
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This could quite possibly be the worst H I have ever seen.....

[DrSeusLives]

When the picture was loading and the only thing that you can see was the letters and half of the ninja, I thought this shit was going to be dope. I just hate that cartoon theme. I dont know... just isn't working for me. But the actual piece [the letters] in that first one is ok but not great. Better than some people on the boards. You just need to work on the 'O', it had that little extension on it so STUPID peole might think it's a 'Q'. That 'H' is hurting the whole thing. 'E' can be better. Keep sketching, nice colors on that piece.

Oh, that one with the bigheads made me laugh. Ha!



good stuff... keep posting
AMEK

[KiSe]

this thread is booty

[PHYNE]

Originally posted by mr.VIRS
yo moshe not feeling this new ones i think you should work on letter structure


:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: you got room to talk son.........

[mr.VIRS]

yes i do have the room to talk ... his letters are not proprtional and they arent that good

[PHYNE]

you have no room to talk man...your letters you 'draw' are from other people so enough with the shit talkingman.......go paint.......




;)

[KiSe]

Originally posted by KiSe
this thread is booty
what he said^^^

[phels]

the top one is bitten hard. all youve done is add an H if you can even call it that. funny how the M's all look like N's eh...

[Nomaq]

yo he wasnt playen about that bein the worst H in graffiti history... dam boy lol

[Overtime]

Originally posted by Dr. Dazzle
This could quite possibly be the worst H I have ever seen.....

which one is the damn h?

and virs, i talked to you about this, just because people give you advice, dosent mean everybody has the same exact problem. So you dont have to give them advice like everyone follows the exact same path as they start

[nightagger]

i dont see why everyone is badmouthing yur shit man....ive definatly seen a lot worse but like what they said work on the "h" homie ;)

[shaderator!]

too much too soon...
werk that letterstructure...

[Milton]

I was gonna say something to Virs but fine beat me too it...

[TranceStoner]

Originally posted by shaderator!
too much too soon...
werk that letterstructure...
The characters are dope

[cnd]

its good that ur tryin, but u should try flipin ur own shit. its cool if other people influence you, but u shouldnt copy the letters to the tee...i dont kno if people are just trying to be nice, or dont even notice, but when you have somewhat of a flow, such as the 'MOS' and which the M looks like a familiar looking lowercase 'N'.. and then you come to the 'H', which i hope is a lower case H, the structure of the letters break down and the H becomes a wobbly weak line with no posture, and a limp penis coming out of it to make the loop of the 'h'... and the 'E' is foogly and has too many extensions comin out for no reason and makes it looked cramped up.. charcters are good, but u should try throwing more shades with a colored pencil ontop of the marker, they will look better.

^ take that as advice, not as hatred. everybody's been through this.

[pesky]

well....

[swiss cheese]

Hey, I think they're pretty good.
MUCH better than another Israeli "writer" we all know who is now "Mr. Criticize".
Keep it up you could be top shelf.
Of course the letters could be worked on, but you have some skills, no doubt.
peace

[moshe one]

thanks for all youer response

i want to clarify something those sketch are very old
i did them a long time ago and since then i have larned a thing or 2.
about the "h" i think that all the latters are bad not jast the h
but it was one of my old sketchs. lets face the facts i had to
start somewhere :D

im sorry that i dont have anything new to show
becouse im very busy with my hip hop music albom
but im always come in here to see and learn

thanks again

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[Some1]

[QUOTE]Originally posted by moshe one
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i have seen that exact ninja charecter with the sword drawn on so many kids backpacks in my old high school in ct.

[moshe one]

Originally posted by Some1
[QUOTE]Originally posted by moshe one


i have seen that exact ninja charecter with the sword drawn on so many kids backpacks in my old high school in ct.


the charecters are taken from the wu tang clan comics!!!

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[cømmunist]

Post some more sketches man!

[moshe one]

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meet the CAP-HEAD CREW

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[Propaganda]

Keep on the track I guess. You can draw.

[Philth215]

feelin it.........

[albinomonkey]

you can draw good ass characters...

[moshe one]

i think i will make them my main characters !!
like can 2 he puts his character everywhere :cool:

[cheps]

Good stuff, except in the second one, the M kinda looks more like an N, but the characters are real nice ...

-cheps oner

[moshe one]

i did some hats

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[pesky]

easy mosher.* one thing what pens did u use on the caps? any part type of marker or jus any permanent? let us kno coz i can finally finish one off that i got a while back...

one..:lick:

[albinomonkey]

moshe

i like that old english style lettering on that white cap

work more on your letters , as i should also


keep it up


-syst one

[moshe one]

Originally posted by pesky
easy moshe.* one thing what pens did u use on the caps? any part type of marker or jus any permanent? let us kno coz i can finally finish one off that i got a while back...

one..:lick:

the black is a fabric marker
i used liquid copper, liquid gold and liquid silver markers
and i used penton markers

:cool:

[TEE_rase_war]

well to be honest man, i wouldn't wear either hats if you were even paying me. But, the only thing you should do and consider doing, is more work, more practice, and the rest should follow. it's a long road. so keep the shit up, keep posting

[laybeuh]

Originally posted by moshe one

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i am assuming these are old.. and i must say, these along with your sketches, are the wackest pieces of garbage i have seen in a while.. same with your lame as fuck attitude, what the fuck are you putting crowns for?? JESUS FUCKING SHIT ON MY FACE YOU SUCK I BET YOUR HIP HOP ALBUM SUCKS TOO FUCKER. learn to flow bitch, learn to flow.

[moshe one]

Originally posted by laybeuh
i am assuming these are old.. and i must say, these along with your sketches, are the wackest pieces of garbage i have seen in a while.. same with your lame as fuck attitude, what the fuck are you putting crowns for?? JESUS FUCKING SHIT ON MY FACE YOU SUCK I BET YOUR HIP HOP ALBUM SUCKS TOO FUCKER. learn to flow bitch, learn to flow.

here is a grumpy israeli writer
that cant gaff so he becomes jealous
hahahahahahah
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

[moshe one]

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[AORAone]

moshe, you got aim? hit me up.

[drunken fool]

you seriously gotta work on your handstyle man.. I hate when mother fuckers neglet there tag.... you got some nice ass charaters though dude..

[BobotheHobo]

Yo man i agree with laybeuh. But u do have some raw characters and u do color inside the lines so u get points for that.

[MiLe StoNe R]

moshe, the char. are def. dope, but the handstyle is garbage, and most of your letters are off balance and have no flow, practice,practice,practice.

[o0[ecto]0o]

you character on the right in the first picture reminds me of this junior character....

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[moshe one]

israeli graffiti style

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[mr.VIRS]

you can paint but your letters still suck

[moshe one]

Originally posted by mr.VIRS
you can paint but your letters still suck


shut the fuck up virs
stop being so jealous
i dont think you got room to talk!!!

go write instead of
telling other people what to do

:rolleyes:

[HOVIE]

"what the fuck are you putting crowns for??"

thats what i was thinking...




*burp*

[pesky]

to be honest mr virs comments arnt wrong.. u can paint it looks cleanish, but and yes the butts the size of lil usa kids rolling thru mcdonalds.. ( )( )

not wanting to call u shite or wotever..dont get fused on this shit but ur first outline had real potential but then it slipped its disk or summin....

but once u added the 'not so good looking' red background....try to actually shape your shadow with the black letter outline (this will strengthen ur shapes).....i recommend not jus blocking it in....coz unless done correctly and intentionally it wont help ur letter structure and will look 'lazy'

anyways looks like a nice quiet spot? so take some time on the final outcome of it...

anyways hope this helps..peace..

[972...]

HAhaha don't talk about Virs, Moshe
he is writing like 1/4 the time you write and can still burn you..
Work your letters instead of wasting spots and talking shit...

[Overtime]

looks like you got char's and coloring skills, but no letter structure or letters really

[Bless561]

there are like 50 writers in allllll israel and even not 50 that can say they can write
but nooooooo afk needs to fight with everybody
if its not ur way its no way rite?
if you dont like moshe fine but y be a bitch and anounce it all day?
so plz for the sake of our beloved israel calm the fuck down

pz (litarally)

[Overtime]

Originally posted by 972...

Work your letters instead of talking shit...

drop that info to virs too, he needs it as well

[972...]

Bles STFU.
Its not about fighting its about improving the scene...

ONE - Virs knows that he has to work on his letters. He even wrote it in the last thread..thats why he isn't putting so much work on walls untill he gets all of the shit down 100%...




Its not about our way.. its about WRITING... If you don't have letters you don't have SHIT... Charachters are all nice and all, but fuck it...

Thats why I said it...without dissing... Its for him... I will sleep tight even if he won't have letters...


Thats why Israeli writers are so godamn whack...
Israeli people - so lazy they won't put effort on working...
And afterwards get surprised why they get negative critisicm...And when they do get it they wonder why everyone didn't like it and start dissing everyone....
If you want people to like every thing you do show it to your mom or start paying attention to stuff people say to you...

Peace and think about it...
Its not for AFK, its for our "scene" or w/e you wanna call it...


-------------
EDIT - I was kinda pissed when I wrote this after Bles's post, so just to clear it out...

AFK need to work as well... We aren't good and not even close to it..
But atleast we don't start dissing everyone when people that KNOW stuff tell us what we should work on...

aight Im out to the Seder haha.. PEACE and God Bless

[Bless561]

but non of us are even close to good
moshe is a special case there is a lot goin with him
there shoudnt be this mucj rivalary between such a low number of "wrirers here"
we need to treat each other with respect and im not feelin much from u
thats all

happy seder
îé éúï åäìçí áî÷ôéà éùàø èøé éçñéú ìîòï éæììå áðé éùøàì äçîõ áçâ!

:lol: :D

[GnomeToys]

Welcome to the Israeli moron battle!

Watch as a bunch of kids argue over which of their bitten styles is better than the other!

For the main event, Virs will paint some bitten Virus letters on a wall using one color, then add the highlights and outlines in MS Paint. During this time, moshe will paint a clean piece with unreadable letters! ITS FUCKING CHRISTMAS IN MARCH>

[ENO ELPMIS]

this thread is gay

[why write?]

:lol: :lol: :lol:

[mr.VIRS]

dude wtf do you want from me?!
and when the fuck did i bite virus's letters?:confused: :confused:

[moshe one]

Originally posted by GnomeToys
Welcome to the Israeli moron battle!

Watch as a bunch of kids argue over which of their bitten styles is better than the other!

For the main event, Virs will paint some bitten Virus letters on a wall using one color, then add the highlights and outlines in MS Paint. During this time, moshe will paint a clean piece with unreadable letters! ITS FUCKING CHRISTMAS IN MARCH>

i didnt know you are retarded and a idiot 2
my condolences to youer family

:rolleyes:

[PAID:one]

This fill is nice!

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A black 3D was really all you needed on top of this. Maybe use the red for just a force field.

And your letters are getting better. Keep on it.

[HECZONER]

Originally posted by mr.VIRS
dude wtf do you want from me?!
and when the fuck did i bite virus's letters?:confused: :confused:

a while ago actually...!! You forgot>???


either way virs... you're better now and you're developing your own style one you can actually say is legible.... one way to settle it between ya'll too is take it to the sandy streets of ashababenga-benga and snap off there... just dont bomb eachothers houses.... (seriously, dont bomb eachothers houses):burned:

[Overtime]

Originally posted by moshe one
i didnt know you are retarded and a idiot 2
my condolences to youer family

:rolleyes:

you are retarded. I would suggest if you are going to diss someone, you at least spell everything you are saying to the correctly. So, you are the "retarded" and "a idiot".

[Propaganda]

:lol: :lol:

[GnomeToys]

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