Toys post here...

[bears_with_knives]

eba. you stuff is sick :love2:. i love it...

[BIELS_ONE]

this is a before shot...

[BIELS_ONE]

diff angle....just so you can see it straight....

[DenceUno33]

dont mean to sound rude but can i get some feed back on my last 2 pieces on what i need 2 do

[CRUELone]

nice biels. i like your style

[DenceUno33]

i completly agree it is crazy and i would like to work my way up to somethin like that but i would like some imput first on what i can do as of now

sry im a lil blazed dont mean to sound affensive

[BIELS_ONE]

Originally posted by DenceUno33@Jun 16 2005, 06:55 PM
dont mean to sound rude but can i get some feed back on my last 2 pieces on what i need 2 do
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why dont you basic it down even more......i mean it is basic but im not digging the N thing and the D thing.....just do a basic D and a basic N.....just do a basic DENCE.....i mean thats my opinion....just until you master it....

[DenceUno33]

thanks biel ill work on that

[BIELS_ONE]

Originally posted by CRUELone@Jun 16 2005, 07:00 PM
nice biels. i like your style
Quoted post



thnx man....still working on it.....i like your sticks on that last page...i think it was the last page....well anyways....dope......

[THE STIX]

ya thats cool.. could of used better colors tho...... its kinda plain

[BIELS_ONE]

Originally posted by THE STIX@Jun 16 2005, 10:07 PM
ya thats cool.. could of used better colors tho...... its kinda plain
Quoted post



it was unplanned....i went and got two whites and a black...i was only gonna do throws....but then i did a free outline.....the homie threw me some orange and yellow..and thats what i did....i didnt have colors with me....i wish i did.....

[spicolli]

the best way to not be toy is to paint all the time
or talk shit and tell people about all your spots that got buffed before you got flix

[BIELS_ONE]

i guess.....i dont know......

[ElksOner]

simples

[Misery]

:five-o:
Feedback?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v614/bomberman/Cosapurple.jpg

[BlistaCompact]

EBA, I like your sketches but I personaly dont like the thinkness of the markers your using for your outlines. I think its fucking with some of the proportions of your letters.

[WORM806]

Hey guys I need some help :love2: Im realy gettin into graff and stuff but i need a tag name bcuz i dont want to bite and shit. Im open to anything 6 letters and under. Oh yeah please be serious i know im a toy but i dont want my name to b el toyo :haha:

[BlistaCompact]

That Wise is looking fresh for a freestyle.

[LEVEL 3 ASH]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/dakdrips/jesuspeice1111.jpg

says "Jesus"
XD
comments ?

[katz gregory]

hey, I'm new here on 12 oz, just wondering what you guys think of this sketch. the coloring is a little fucked and I hate the stars.. dunno why I did them. anyways, critisism is welcome, need to improve. thanks

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y293/Dabelow/creations/scan.jpg

[risin 519]

well if i may quote Rodney Dangerfield on this one " Hey!!! Your all right!!!

i like it alot

[emergONE]

looks pretty good... but your e has like four thungs comming out instead of three.. so that fucks it up

i think i would tone the swirls down a bit though.

but yeah.. its nice

[THE STIX]

that green shyt is crap! lol id rather see some simpler like mber or reable shyt thats good, then some old jus squiggly lined B/S wild stlye.. but sorry my man EBA still has this post locked and should be the only one movin on lol
happy farther day to all u toys not gettin laid, and i will no longer be referred as THE STIX im now...optimus prime :love2: oya.. keep it up tho... ul get better and out of that crappoy wild style wannbe stage

love.optimus :love2:

[youdontknowmyname]

http://img298.echo.cx/img298/2677/s30100664cg.jpg

[Uncle*Milton]

Calm down with the leters a little, you have to learn what the letters look like before you can bend them into weird designs. For instance, the 'R,' that is not what an R looks like, the hole is in the wrong place, you have a bar like | and another that is supposed to be curved like 2 (sort of) the connection of the |2 makes the R, you don't need an extra hole in the 2. And also, as a general rule, when you start out the bars that make up the letters shouldn't overlap, its a symptom of something being amiss. See yow on the M and the N the first bar overlaps with the second? On simple pieces it should either be one bar that is connect or two separate bars, it shouldn't be two bars going in almost exactly the same direction if that makes any sense. I'm not going to tell you to do cereal box fonts, because you wouldn't listen anyway, but look at a regular font if I type out M O R n none of the bars overlap... I don't know, keep practicing, and cool out with the tag, start simpler than that. Make letters first, then fix them up...

[fine, thank you]

..

[BIELS_ONE]

Originally posted by BlistaCompact@Jun 18 2005, 10:22 AM
That Wise is looking fresh for a freestyle.
Quoted post



thnx man......

[JuggaloRaden]

well whats ur opinion on this sketch. disregard the writing on the side i had 2 say some shit 2 some peoplehttp://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00523838f00000002.jpg

[Car2nist]

juggalos shouldnt do graffiti

end of story.

[Hokus]

amen brother!

[stoked22]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v350/stoked22/000_0065.jpg
the E isnt straight, oh well.

[risin 519]

well i tried my hand at some canvas painting any help would be appreciated!!!

http://img236.echo.cx/img236/5656/riverscanvas0024wk.th.jpg (http://img236.echo.cx/my.php?image=riverscanvas0024wk.jpg)

[CRUELone]

Originally posted by stoked22@Jun 20 2005, 05:02 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v350/stoked22/000_0065.jpg
the E isnt straight, oh well.
Quoted post

i like.

[JuggaloRaden]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 19 2005, 07:58 PM
juggalos shouldnt do graffiti

end of story.
Quoted post



LOL... well honestly whats your opinion tho.. i am actually the only Juggalo in the KMKrew and they didnt no even about the real kmk but still what is ur opinionon that shit

[Maca1]

i guess thats what it is

[Maca1]

Originally posted by risin 519@Jun 20 2005, 07:46 AM
well i tried my hand at some canvas painting any help would be appreciated!!!

http://img236.echo.cx/img236/5656/riverscanvas0024wk.th.jpg (http://img236.echo.cx/my.php?image=riverscanvas0024wk.jpg)
Quoted post

thats petty dope

[streetfactory]

Originally posted by CRUELone@Jun 13 2005, 01:10 PM
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/mygraffphotos89/somenewstickers.jpg
some stickers.
im down to trade with anyone.....................................
Quoted post

Im down with trading some stickers..i have some new ones ive been working on.get at me about this :chicken:

[MAR]

Ive been working on this throwie and i was wondering if i could get some feedback.
http://img203.echo.cx/img203/8651/peachy2va.png
Its a poor scan so bear with me. Thanks.

[THE STIX]

once again i like those cruels real nice... and this ZOG stuff.. for some odd reason the the G reminds me of a guy who has BALLS for a mustache lol if u took the eyes off... maybe it would work lol

[MAR]

balls for a moustashe?!?!? hahahhahhahhahaha :haha: thats classic!

[MAR]

oh right and hows this?
http://img144.echo.cx/img144/7668/peachy19xh.png

[THE STIX]

chnage the hole thing..just keep workin on it

[MAR]

ok took your advice and changed the whole thing (especially the ballstache) what do you think now?
http://img170.echo.cx/img170/3572/cavem8by.png

[rideli631]

hey guys, i got a nice fresh new book so whenever i do something new ill put it up for feedback. im welcome to negative comments i dont care i know im really toy. i know to stay simple so you dont need to go over that. thanks

[CRUELone]

Originally posted by streetfactory+Jun 20 2005, 05:43 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (streetfactory - Jun 20 2005, 05:43 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-CRUELone@Jun 13 2005, 01:10 PM
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/mygraffphotos89/somenewstickers.jpg
some stickers.
im down to trade with anyone.....................................
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Im down with trading some stickers..i have some new ones ive been working on.get at me about this :chicken:
Quoted post
[/b][/quote]
aight homes.
dufus,,lookin good.
new one for a battle.... i kno the E sucks
http://www.photodump.com/direct/CRUELone/IMG_1525647.jpg

[ces!]

http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/uploads/post-35848-1119382933.jpg
fuckin shit i like that

[ces!]

tell me how this is lookin..
http://img227.echo.cx/img227/373/throwieyellowwhite3ud.jpg
http://img227.echo.cx/img227/9026/throwieredpurpleorange2ap.jpg
http://img227.echo.cx/img227/6480/purpleandredcestag7fh.jpg
these are some doodles an shit
http://img220.echo.cx/img220/1298/doodlepage4dk.jpg

[Suicide Bomber]

I dont know if its just me but i swear ive seen those E's everywhere man.

[The Leader]

Originally posted by rideli631@Jun 21 2005, 12:42 PM
hey guys, i got a nice fresh new book so whenever i do something new ill put it up for feedback. im welcome to negative comments i dont care i know im really toy. i know to stay simple so you dont need to go over that. thanks
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it looks like you were staring at something virus.aa did when you drew this.

[The Leader]

dont write ces.

dont write wyse.

[Picture_TAKER]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v319/2enthusiast4/Dcisesketch.gif

:-(

[THE STIX]

ZOG.. MY MAN..U EVER TRY.. ACTUALLY USIN PEN AND PAPER... ITS A LIL EASIER THEN A MOUSE... KEEP TRYIN THO

THE NAME CES IS ALREADY TAKEN BY A GRAFF LEGEND

[rideli631]

it looks like you were staring at something virus.aa did when you drew this.
Quoted post
[/quote]

if you are implying i bit off virus.aa then i can say no i didnt because i have never seen virus. and i think the letters are pretty generic so why would i need to bite

[Maca1]

dufus i like ur shit keep t up

[MAR]

Originally posted by THE STIX@Jun 21 2005, 08:57 PM
ZOG.. MY MAN..U EVER TRY.. ACTUALLY USIN PEN AND PAPER... ITS A LIL EASIER THEN A MOUSE... KEEP TRYIN THO
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Dude I am using pen and paper it just I have an old ass scanner that makes everything I draw pixilated and ugly. In the real, on paper and walls, my stuff (even the ballstached throwie) look nice, in my humble oppinion. I do the best I can to get the advice I need. Being as I'm not yet near the level I want to be. I appreciate you putting up with my lack of computer hardware.

On the topic of my work what do you think i can do to improve the style and please be specific. Not asking you to do the work for me just for some pointers in the right direction.

[THE STIX]

lmao mar is a fuckin beast! kid keep doin ur thing man...

[THE STIX]

the OG are ok,, it reminds me og HOG tho he hits up jus like that... if u keep that ur def goin to get alot of heat for bitin... but the Z makes me wants to dump in my pants.. its horrible

[Maca1]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y114/Salem1/graff/DSC00510.jpg
comments?
i did this quick trow up
what yall thinkn?

[Maca1]

i did this h because.. i wanted 2http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y114/Salem1/graff/DSC00506.jpg

[estaked]

here is something im playign with on a few stickers.... comments welcome...


http://www.2and2.net/Uploads/Images/stickers.jpg

[Maca1]

i know my 3d is gay
and sorry my pics 2 big

[Mr. Peanut]

http://www.2and2.net/Uploads/Images/fresh%20as%20fuck.jpg

[THE STIX]

i dont understand..wat are those..snow men?

[MAR]

Originally posted by THE STIX@Jun 22 2005, 12:11 AM
the OG are ok,, it reminds me og HOG tho he hits up jus like that... if u keep that ur def goin to get alot of heat for bitin... but the Z makes me wants to dump in my pants.. its horrible
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Dude you read my mind I hate the "Z" too. I guess thats what I'm doing all day....haha.....I wouldn't mind making the "G" like I had that first one, though less testicular, and more liquid like my original drawings, and if I could somehow make the "O" have more style I would love that. Huh. I guess I dont like my throwie....damn...well back to the lab.

Btw I've never seen Hogs work....but thanks for the heads up.

[THE STIX]

YA GO TO THE PITTS THREAD.. HOG IS FROM THERE

[MAR]

Looked in the pitts thread didnt find anything. I googled him and found some pieces. I sorta see what your saying, but our "g"s are pretty different. I made the ballstached "g" look 20 times better. I will post the finished product once I work out my "z" problem.

[Maca1]

can somebody comment on my work?http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y114/Salem1/graff/DSC00510.jpg

[orek]

it's not so good
whate does it say?
saem?

[MAR]

kinda evolved though im not sure I'd call it a throw up anymore
http://img230.echo.cx/img230/1338/throw6bi.jpg
And yeh I do know my 3d is a bit messed up, particularly bottom part of the "g" but the whole thing was just a quick sketch anyway. Good news is I found a better scanner in my house!

[Maca1]

Originally posted by orek@Jun 22 2005, 03:38 PM
it's not so good
whate does it say?
saem?
Quoted post

yes saem

[earo 35]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v174/earo35/saem.jpg
if only every toy could see this.

[Maca1]

k rght on

[rideli631]

2nd page, tryed to fix up the d and f alittle, gimme some feedback on what you think i should work on,
peacehttp://img206.echo.cx/img206/6138/stickers0369fb.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

[THE STIX]

i like this shyt... good shyt my friend..good shyt

[Maca1]

ok ok... earo 35 ive been tring and this is what happened
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y114/Salem1/graff/DSC00511.jpg
now whats wrong

[rideli631]

thanks alot man

[MAR]

My new and improved throwie! what do you guys think?
http://img298.echo.cx/img298/4536/zog5by.png
yeh im back to the craptacular scanner...oh well.

[Maca1]

what happen to the other 1

[uephoric drips]

to that dufus peice, dont do that drippy thing, i do it all the time and i dont want it to get played out.

aslo to dufus, ima send out the stickersbefore friday. so dont think that i forgot, i just need to handle some personal buisness before i send them out.

-DRIPZ

[rideli631]

aight cool,same here

[risin 519]

Originally posted by rideli631@Jun 22 2005, 08:02 PM
2nd page, tryed to fix up the d and f alittle, gimme some feedback on what you think i should work on,
peacehttp://img206.echo.cx/img206/6138/stickers0369fb.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
Quoted post



thats real good!!! except for the mets... GO YANKEES!!!!

[THE STIX]

UEPHORIC DRIPS... LOL U NO HOW MANY POEPLE DO DRIPS? KIDS TELLIN DUFUS TO STOP DOIN DRIPS AS IF HES JUS SOO OFUCKIN GOOD DUFUS IS GOIN TO MAKE ""HIM"" LOOK BAD CUZ EVERYONE NOS..WHENU THINK OF DRIPS.. U THINK OF THE GRAFF LEGEND UEPHORIC DRIPS LOL :haha:

[THE STIX]

MACA..DONT TRACE LETTERS MAN... JUS DO UR THING AND KEEP PRACTICING.....

[CRUELone]

Originally posted by THE STIX@Jun 22 2005, 12:04 PM
YA GO TO THE PITTS THREAD.. HOG IS FROM THERE
Quoted post

heres hog...........
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y256/steelcitymfer/Hog2.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y256/steelcitymfer/hog3.jpg

[THE STIX]

YA THERES HOG.. I DONT FEEL HIS STYLE TO MUCH BUT THATS JUS ME.. BUT THAT GUY GETS UP.. AS LONG AS UR HAPPY WIT WAT UR DOIN, AND UR PUTTIN IN WORK... JUS KEEP DOIN WAT U DO, ONE DAY THIS GUY TELLS ME I SUCK.. IM LIKE OK.. U NO I DONT REALLY CARE IF U LIKE MY SHYT, YA NO SOME PEOPLE LIKE UR SHYT,SOME POEPLE DONT AND HES LIKE IF U SUCK THERES NO POINT IN GETTIN UP, THEN HE TELLS ME THAT THE FAMOUS..DISCO DAN GOT UP BUT HE SUCKS, AND NO ONE IS GOIN TO REMEBER HIM... AND IM LIKE.. DICK HEAD.. UR TALKIN BOUT HIM NOW.. SO OBVIOUSLY HES REMEBERED LOL ;)

[CRUELone]

yea. hog gets up like crazy.i haven't seen any pieces from him..so he might just be a bomber, but i have mad respect for him.
that bomb on the garage door is like almost 7 feet tall!

[rideli631]

that 2nd hog spot is illl

[earo 35]

maca1:

beleive it or not, those new throws you made are 10 times better than that original one. you still need plenty of work on it, but when you got letter structure down, its all downhill from there. try switching up the letters, uppercase and lowercase. try different fonts, try cursive, mess around with it man. graffiti is all about experimenting.

[earo 35]

keep working on it, and post more flicks

[Maca1]

yeah i will and i am
thanks

[MAR]

Thanks for the flix and words of encouragment. I pretty happy with my throwie right now so I'm going to stick with it. Maybe one day it will evolve, who knows. So I guess I'll rock the new work and see how it flies.

[TSAC]

i think that DUFUS stuff is pretty tight

[THE STIX]

ya i dont think hog pieces, but ya those kids out in pittsburg are killin shyt..

[THE STIX]

ya i dont think hog pieces, but ya those kids out in pittsburg are killin shyt..

[BIELS_ONE]

that hog throw is cool....zog needs work....dufus is basic and clean....yall stay up.....and i know wise is a well taken name.....but i dont give a fuck.....ill write wise wyse wyze yze whenever i feel likes it....thnx for the suggestion though....ill post up some stuff as soon as i can.....

[G_soul]

hey i'm new to this i guess... ummm... wanted to ask what do yah guys thing off the name GSOUL shitty, good , or is already taken?. just like to know.

[THE STIX]

its ur name man... if u like it, do it.. and no i dont think theres anyone writing gsoul

[Ecro]

my throwie...
http://img266.echo.cx/img266/236/truckbomb5gv2ao.jpg


tryin 2 make ma handstyle better cuz tha shit by my bomb is disgusting lol

http://img298.echo.cx/img298/2503/ecroha5wf.png

[*BIZMO*]

Hey i was wondering if anyone could help me with my tag im trying to get it to look good in Bubble letters ive tryed and i dont like a single thing i come up with if someone could give me an example and not like normal bubble letters like fat ass ones

[G_soul]

aight thanks alot.

[urbanvibration]

theres plenty on this forum....

[*BIZMO*]

affrmitave

[earo 35]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v174/earo35/bizmo.jpg

[earo 35]

lessons from the other page
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v174/earo35/saem.jpg
new lessons
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v174/earo35/bizmo2.jpg

[uephoric drips]

i do lower case letters all the time.

[G_soul]

hey iff post my sketches up here you guys will give me advise, right and not make fun of me

[register]

toys teaching toys. good shit kinda earo

[earo 35]

G soul:
post anything you want, i cant guarentee you wont be made fun of, but fuck the haters. all they can do is hate. you should be proud of your work, weather it sucks or not. if it sucks, hey, we've all been there. and i'll give advice fasho.

[Maca1]

earo where u from
ill post some pics later or 2m

[risin 519]

http://img172.echo.cx/img172/8831/1stblackbooksketch3nw.th.jpg (http://img172.echo.cx/my.php?image=1stblackbooksketch3nw.jpg)


first sketch in the new black book!
you like???

[Euro]

i bareley had enough ink to finish the fill. i had to take the marker apart to get some more ink at the end. but here it is, so far, thought that doesnt mean im gonna do more to it. i may just leave it as is.

http://img112.echo.cx/img112/2682/proxyfillcomplete2zy.jpg

also, where it looks like the fill is really dark, it isnt that dark, it is just the photo. oh well.

[insane30]

hey EURO sry to rain on ur parade but did you not look at the shitty lessons earo posted like 3 inches above ur own post....LETTER SIZE........if you did not get the concept i will tell you in str8 forward miami hatin style...UR LETTERS HAVE TO BE THE SAME FUCKING SIZE...i capatalized it cuz obviously from ur throw ur blind or u would never do that peice of shit.....try the letters on ur fucken keyboard...i know ur thinkin "aw thats boring, iw ana peice" but get that shit outa ur head for now....nobody can peice witout structure...my graff teachings here are done for the day, time to go beat down earo,peace!

[earo 35]

a little more for euro:

dont make your letters so wavy and whatnot, they need to have structure (veiw lessons for further info) and dont try anything hard until you got the basics down. you dont need characters (and i can tell you copied the top of the rose and added the bottom)

all is not lost though, youve got a really nice 3-d. everything's nice and even. but like i said before, you gotta have the basics down before you can add the details. you're not bad though, all it takes is a little practice.

[earo 35]

risin 519:

your picture's too small to judge, but from what i can see, it looks more like a handstyle than a piece. get a bigger picture and then we'll see.

[earo 35]

Originally posted by register@Jun 25 2005, 12:32 AM
toys teaching toys. good shit kinda earo
Quoted post


how bout you shut the fuck up and post flicks? stop talking trash in my threads asshole.

[risin 519]

Originally posted by earo 35@Jun 25 2005, 04:38 PM
risin 519:

your picture's too small to judge, but from what i can see, it looks more like a handstyle than a piece. get a bigger picture and then we'll see.
Quoted post




dude just click on it

[Euro]

actually earo--the rose was a stamp(i was volenteering at a summer school for less privlaged kids and i was with kindergarteners, and they had them), and it was like a stamp where you had to stamp the flower, stem, leaves and roots all seperate, and i kind of missed on the roots. but i stamped it at the summer-school and then started sketching there. and i did the top of the rose in black to make it pop out.

anyway, thanks for the advise. you too insane 30.

[risin 519]

the names are too similar earo euro... i cant follow this plot!!!

[DenceUno33]

aright im in the biggest slump right now ive been sketchin every night and nothing looks good ne ideas on how to get out of this?

[THE STIX]

shiii kid,, there aint no real way to do it.. u jus got writers block... u might come out of it after watchin a movie.. sleepin.. doin just about anything... jus chill it will come to u... somtimes il go a long ass time without doin a sketch and then.. ilwatch like THE WARRIORS or somtin lol and all a sudden im ready to get da decos... lol

[DenceUno33]

aright man thanks ahaa nowin my stupid ass ill go watch as many movies as i can ahaa no not really but thanks neways

[G_soul]

aight, now i got to find some way to get my stuff up here...

[earo 35]

Originally posted by risin 519+Jun 25 2005, 06:39 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (risin 519 - Jun 25 2005, 06:39 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-earo 35@Jun 25 2005, 04:38 PM
risin 519:

your picture's too small to judge, but from what i can see, it looks more like a handstyle than a piece.*** get a bigger picture and then we'll see.
Quoted post




dude just click on it
Quoted post
[/b][/quote]

sorry about that, i dont usually click on pictures to open them, im jsut used to having them appear.
anyways, like i said before, it looks more like a really big tag or handstyle. the only thing that'll set it apart from a tag is the blue outline. i'll post more help tomorrow, im going sleep.

[BIELS_ONE]

some quick stuff....kinda sloppy.....yups....

[CRUELone]

i like it. i like it alot

[BIELS_ONE]

thnx man....thnx alot....

[THE STIX]

i like that biels.. cept the one part sucks.... jus leave it biels

[Maca1]

yeh that biels is hella dope it looses its flow at the begining of the o

idk thats what u think

[Ecro]

Nice stuff biels

just a quick pen free i decided to color in cant see it well but w.e any comments/sugestions?

[Ecro]

N wut u guys think of my bomb? i personaly like it n im ready 2 start gettin up buh if any1 has any suggestions ill consider it

[scribbler]

I worked a little with CA CashRefund but his computer fucked up so im back on the toys thread. Heres what im workin on so far. I think there shouldnt be so many bars just loosy hangin around but I dont know....(sorry bout the size)

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a14/scribbler18/zutztztztuutzzt.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a14/scribbler18/ppppppppppppp.jpg

[CRUELone]

someof those letters look pretty good scribbler...
heres an experimentsal piece...tryin extensions...just testin something out...quick pen sketch..got bored and colored...
feddback pleas...i'm alos aware that my 3d is a little fucked
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y256/steelcitymfer/IMG_1541.jpg

[earo 35]

biels:

thats a nice production. i love the colors and the fill. the only thing i would say to work on is to keep the letters straight. after the E or the L the letters start to slant at the bottom. you should make all the letters stand straight like the B. overall, it came out really nice.

ecro:

you need a new camera. in that first flick, you need to work on your letter structure. you have a few extensions and curves in the letter that you dont need. that E seems bigger than the O and the other letters. those letters are a little too pointy and thin for my taste. you really need a better camera to be able to help you with your work.

that second flick, the E and the C are too round at the bottom for the R and the O. the R and the O are also slanted a little, keep your letters straight. work on letter structure.

scribbler:

i like your letters. the only thing i would say is, dont make all your letters squared, alternate and make some rounder letters. for example, your R in water. plus, dont add the little notches on the letters. the style is simple, so keep the letters simple. also, your E's, dont make them the way you do. make them whole letters instead of 4 different bars. the only ones i would say are good are WATER and the PIONEER woulda been good if you had different E's. the ones on that 2nd picture are too squared.

[CRUELone]

what about me??

[Maca1]

ur not toy so u dont need help

[CRUELone]

damn double posts :chicken:

[CRUELone]

ok..thatworks..i guess...but i would still like feedback

[earo 35]

sorry cruel, when i posted the help your picture wasnt there.

youre gonna need a better camera, or at least a better picture. youre really good, but you still need to work on some shit. your 3-d's way off. work on your 3-d and i'll post more later. (lunchtime)

[shone]

tell me what u think about this
i did it in about 5 minutes
ithink the top left is the best one
http://img33.echo.cx/img33/9741/camerapictures0514mb.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

[bears_with_knives]

cruel that's tight. and the 3d. were you trying to do the one-point perspective thingamajig?

[Maca1]

earo 35
this is what ive done lately tell me what im doin wrong and right
ifu canhttp://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y114/Salem1/graff/DSC00514.jpghttp://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y114/Salem1/graff/DSC00513.jpghttp://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y114/Salem1/graff/DSC00512.jpg

[Maca1]

sorry theyre big cant do shit

[THE STIX]

MAN THAT CRUEL REMINDS ME OF CREWK.... THE FR8 PAINTER

[CRUELone]

Originally posted by CRUELone@Jun 27 2005, 01:19 PM
someof those letters look pretty good scribbler...
heres an experimentsal piece...tryin extensions...just testin something out...quick pen sketch..got bored and colored...
feddback pleas...i'm alos aware that my 3d is a little fucked
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y256/steelcitymfer/IMG_1541.jpg
Quoted post

my 3d isn't way off...there are just a few lines that aren't perfect...like the extensions up top the U...

[shone]

gimme some tips plz it was the shoc throwie and the square shit

[Ecro]

A better pic of my 1st sketch

http://img9.echo.cx/img9/2048/ecro5ma.jpg

now that people can see it better any sugestions? lol

[Ecro]

This is sum of my old stiff from wen i used 2 write adequit <-stopped writing it cuz it was to long lol

http://img205.echo.cx/img205/3060/adequit3jg.jpg
http://img205.echo.cx/img205/9894/adequit27lj.jpg
http://img78.echo.cx/img78/7896/adequit34aj.jpg

n sum more ecro pen shit

http://img78.echo.cx/img78/2834/ecropen6qg.jpg
http://img78.echo.cx/img78/1315/ecropen28oz.jpg

[bears_with_knives]

yo shone. the one on the upper left would make an okay throw. but you should work on another one because a lot of people(including me) have used an uncannily similar style.

[Maca1]

ur old shit is beter than ecro

[THE STIX]

man that cruel looks like crewks shyt...

[bears_with_knives]

I drew this first as a pen sketch, but i though it looked cool so i added the fill and all that other stuff. i don't have a shaky hand... i drew this on those bumpy tables made out of that funky recycled wood. didn't have a black pen nearby.
http://img79.echo.cx/img79/5194/toy20bg.jpg

[CRUELone]

Originally posted by THE STIX@Jun 27 2005, 06:17 PM
man that cruel looks like crewks shyt...
Quoted post

wanna elaborate???

[THE STIX]

crewk is a fr8 painter from the south...

[THE STIX]

man.. my nephews birthday was like 2 days ago.. and mother fucker is liek 3 and had a huge ass cake.. and man.... my stomach is fuckin hurting lol...

[Maca1]

why the fuck do we want to know this 4?

[earo 35]

i'll post more shit tomorrow. im not gonna be on right now.

[Ecro]

i think i might change my name to aero...im workin on the bomb this is wut i have so far

[CRUELone]

Originally posted by THE STIX@Jun 27 2005, 06:28 PM
crewk is a fr8 painter from the south...
Quoted post

r u saying that i bit him???cause if thats what ur getting at...ive never even heard of him

[*BIZMO*]

hey hows this im still working around with it the leters are the same size i just need to work around with structure
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v128/flipsk8er1925/Top.jpg

[EKSOxo]

tear this crappy shit up
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019479.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019478.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019476.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019471.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019470.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019469.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019473.jpg

[DenceUno33]

bizmo if u work on that u can get it to work good but right now its not to hot but keep workin at it..it will work out

[Maca1]

can somebody comment on my shit is on the top of the page
i like bait

[bears_with_knives]

^^ditto^^ except mine is not on the top...

[THE STIX]

cruel.. saber and revoks shyt looks alike somtimes,, dont mean its bit,, i was jus sayin wat i saw when i looked at that, but u must be guilty of somtin... its like sayin.. ""man i lost 50 bucks"" and somone jus out rite sayin "" i didnt take it!" obviously they did... i never said u bit him, u practically just told me lol but its coo crewk is a good writer.. ;)

[THE STIX]

the bait shyt is pretty nice.. keep it up man..

[DenceUno33]

ok exsoxo starting from top to bottom

im not likein this first one im not quite sure yet y but ill get back to u on this one.....2)looks like the first one except a closer pic...3)im likein the b,a, and the body of the i the dot im not likein that much i think it needs to b bigger and the t i like the idea but u need to work on it some more...4)i like the b and the a alot!! the i is better needs some work and the t i dont like at all make it a lil more simpler...5)im lovein this alot except the t needs some work and the dot fer the i needs to b bigger...6)i dont like this at all to many bubbles goin on...7)and finaly this one is an amazing idea but everything flows except fer the t give that a lil work and ull b set.

im sry fer everyone else that has to scroll threw this

[DenceUno33]

maca it seems like ur tryin to do shit that is to complicated fer u just try to go simple but not to simple if u know what i mean

[DenceUno33]

bears ur idea fer the n is sick but u need to work on it the a is tilted when the others rnt? i dont quite get that and the... but other wise lookin good

[EKSOxo]

maca1 the best advice is to listen to ADVICE .
DRAW BLOCK LETERS AND ONLY BLOCK LETERS!
your goona find what is basic structure for all your leters.

[DenceUno33]

its fuckin hot here in buffalo ny

[Maca1]

the 1 one thats complicated 4 me is the third but i guess yeh
but the other ones are not complicated
and thanks
eksoxo
and
denceuno33

[THE STIX]

THE BEST ADVICE IS.... DO UR OWN THING.. UL GET BETTER IN TIME.. SCREW DOIN STRAIGHT LETTERS FOR 3 MONTHS SCREW THE HOLE GRAFFITI EXCERCISES SHYT.. FUCK SIMPLES,, IF U WANNA DO WILD STYLE SHYT,DO IT.. U WANNA DO SIMPLES SHYT DO IT,, JUS DO W/E MAKES U HAPPY...MAIN THING IS ONCE U FEEL UR READY TO START HITTIN WALLS.. GET UP AND PUT IN WORK, DONT COP OUT ON SHYT ,GO BIG,,, THATS ALL THAT MATTERS..

[THE STIX]

MACA JUS KEEP DOIN UR THING MAN

[asa vada]

extreme! :yuck:

[CRUELone]

Originally posted by THE STIX@Jun 27 2005, 10:13 PM
cruel.. saber and revoks shyt looks alike somtimes,, dont mean its bit,, i was jus sayin wat i saw when i looked at that, but u must be guilty of somtin... its like sayin.. ""man i lost 50 bucks"" and somone jus out rite sayin "" i didnt take it!" obviously they did... i never said u bit him, u practically just told me lol but its coo crewk is a good writer.. ;)
Quoted post

aight man..i gottcha..just the way u said it..it seemed to me like u were accusing me, ya know..but its all good...just misunderstood ya...any fedback other thsn that???like on how the piece is in general???

[Ecro]

my enrty for "fake" battle

[causinpanic]

:gaga:

[speak]

Originally posted by EKSOxo@Jun 27 2005, 09:02 PM

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019473.jpg
Quoted post


that is hot

[speak]

Originally posted by Ecro@Jun 28 2005, 01:51 AM
my enrty for "fake" battle
Quoted post


personally, i dont like it, the marker streaks make it look cheesy, and the monster is kinda, well i cant think of a word so ill say fucked up...
the edges of the letters are WAY overshot, and i just dont like that.... just my 2 cents

[scribbler]

I did a rounded one. should it be that rounded...And I made the the"E" a whole piece.
sorry bait but i bit the "lines"....but i saw them a few times some where else anyway...
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a14/scribbler18/tfjfvfvfvv.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a14/scribbler18/zbzgbzgzbbz.jpg

[EKSOxo]

those lines is basic outline. its been around for years its a simple way to add some flash.

[bears_with_knives]

nice and simple. the only thing i don't like is the "P." i like how the "worm" looks... work on that one. i like where that's going.. add some flash like what EKSO said. also check out the "ultimate guide to wildstyle" thread or something like that :haha: . throw some arrows on that and it would be the shit. ;) ;)

[earo 35]

cruel:

i didnt mean that your 3-d was THAT far off but im not saying its perfect. when you really look at it, its not bad, the only thing is that the lines are too thick and you cant tell where theyre going. the lines need to be in more detail. instead of doing the 3-d with a sharpie or whatever marker you used, use an "ultra-thin sharpie" or a pen works just as good.

another thing that you could start working on is flow. when you develop a good enough style, the letters start to work together and when you read the name, it seems to just flow.. its hard to explain but you'll understand what im talking about. to get your letters flowing, curve the letters a little (im not saying to put pointless curves in the letters, but enough that the peice doesnt look stiff)

your peice looks real good for a toy (no offense). you have a few useless extensions in there though, i'll point them out:
the 2 coming out of the C, the one going to the bottom left between the C and the R, that line that goes toward the right on the bottom of the R. the one on the E (to fix that one, you could make the top bar of the E real long, and that'll look a little better. i'll post an example in the image), the sidways L at the bottom of the L, and the other extension coming out of the L. (dont put the Arrows at the end, they look a little awkward) i'll post this image to help a little.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v174/earo35/cruel.jpg

saem:

you need to just keep practicing. youre getting better. youve got a little flow in your letters, but the letter structure is kinda killing it. the S looks good, its just a little sloppy. the little thing at the top of the S needs some work, its a little too small. the A has the same little thing on top like the just like the rest of the letters. work on that little bar at the bottom of the A. the middle part of the E looks like a tumor or something (waaaaay too big) and take off that extension on the M. i'll show the suggustions on the photo.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v174/earo35/saemhelp.jpg
you posted like 3 other pictures, but they all have the same problems. all this can be fixed by practice. look at other people's throws and copy ideas but before you do that, just practice. soon enough, you'll know what youre doing and you wont need help.

euro:

dont write aero. you have no idea how many people have that name. artcrimes alone already has 2 aeros and ive seen plenty more. try something original or something with weird letters. challeng yourself. tag names dont always have to be 4 letters and they dont even have be a word. make something original. and that AE you posted is too simple and not complete. this is graffiti, not girly bubble letters.

bears with knives:

work on letter structure. view my lessons on page 91 and try not to make your letters so stiff and slanted. start simple, dont worry about fills and outlines.

ecro:

same thing i said before. go simple and some of those are too thin. the adequit was pretty nice. the name is original too.

bizmo:

your letters are starting to even out, but theyre still too round and bubbly. use bar structures not circles. the B needs some work and so does the the Z. dont do the overlapping thing on the Z and B, it doesnt go with the style.

bait:

good shit.

scribbler:

it looks better already, dont make EVERY letter rounded. looking good though. your M's and W's need work, and the top of the R's are too pointy for the style. besides that, its looking good.

[earo 35]

ive been giving everyone advice on their flicks and everything, but theres one thing that everyone needs to be aware of:
im sure everyone's heard this 100 times but here goes 101, PRACTICE PRACTICE PREACTICE. i dont know how much more i can stress this. im sure it gets annoying and repetative after a while, but if you wanna improve, there's nothing else i can reccomend. ive been practicing and practicing for almost 3 years now, and look where i am. ive got my own thread in paperchase, *HELP NEEDED*, when i started, i was just as bad as everyone in here (no offense). if you dont beleive me, look through my shit. theres a few pages for you to look through. you can see my improvement on every page.

http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/index.php...ic=52478&st=320 (http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=52478&st=320) <theres the link

[THE STIX]

ya its coo cruel i was jus sayin....

[risin 519]

Originally posted by CRUELone+Jun 27 2005, 01:26 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (CRUELone - Jun 27 2005, 01:26 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-CRUELone@Jun 27 2005, 01:19 PM
someof those letters look pretty good scribbler...
heres an experimentsal piece...tryin extensions...just testin something out...quick pen sketch..got bored and colored...
feddback pleas...i'm alos aware that my 3d is a little fucked
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y256/steelcitymfer/IMG_1541.jpg
Quoted post

my 3d isn't way off...there are just a few lines that aren't perfect...like the extensions up top the U...
Quoted post
[/b][/quote]


ill agree that maybe the 3d does need a little work but i dissagree with what earo says about the extensions... keep the extensions but perhaps spend a little more time on em, there is no such thing as a useless extension in my opinion, and i stress "MY OPINION" i just suggest spending a little more time on em cause a couple arrows are a lil crooked...

[IBCandcheezitz]

new sketch

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y248/krylonkhaos/kerm10.jpg

[earo 35]

^^ good shit, nice and clean

[fuckum]

the big lines goin up n down are way useless but tis real clean...maybe make the E a lil shorter

[CRUELone]

thanks for all the feedback...i'll keep it in mind

[Maca1]

yeh thats clean i juss dont like those lines

[IBCandcheezitz]

Thanks for the feedback. As for the lines.. yeah they were basically just space fillers.

[uephoric drips]

yeah, nice waste of space.

[fej]

Okay, I've been cruising this thread and decided to give graff a go. I'd never attempted anything before, and after reading the tips given to other writers this is what I came up with:
http://img37.echo.cx/img37/8203/fej6pb.jpg

Looking at it now, I can already see there are very simple mistakes. My letters aren't the same size, and are all pretty much whack.
Please, give me some advice? :huh2:

[runci]

quik somethin on paint for a battle on bs

http://img189.echo.cx/img189/5060/ricebattle1ul.png

[uephoric drips]

nice shit as usual bro

[insane30]

Originally posted by risin 519+Jun 29 2005, 02:49 AM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (risin 519 - Jun 29 2005, 02:49 AM)</div><div class='quotemain'>Originally posted by CRUELone@Jun 27 2005, 01:26 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-CRUELone@Jun 27 2005, 01:19 PM
someof those letters look pretty good scribbler...
heres an experimentsal piece...tryin extensions...just testin something out...quick pen sketch..got bored and colored...
feddback pleas...i'm alos aware that my 3d is a little fucked
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y256/steelcitymfer/IMG_1541.jpg
Quoted post

my 3d isn't way off...there are just a few lines that aren't perfect...like the extensions up top the U...
Quoted post



ill agree that maybe the 3d does need a little work but i dissagree with what earo says about the extensions... keep the extensions but perhaps spend a little more time on em, there is no such thing as a useless extension in my opinion, and i stress "MY OPINION" i just suggest spending a little more time on em cause a couple arrows are a lil crooked...
Quoted post
[/b][/quote]

did i just hear that there is no such thing a useless extension...im not tryin to cause beef or haterism or nutin but bro cmon...if somebody has 29585845 arrows cumin outa their peice trust me...at least 395838 are useless......and something that im jus starting to undertsand is that most of the extensions people use(INCLUDING ME) are pointless..they serve no purpose in the flow, structure or anything else important....ive already talked to earo about this before with my peices which are starting to change due to the excessiveness of big penis lookin things in my peices.....sry if anyone disagrees but in MY OPINION knowin some extensions are usless is as basic knowledge as knowin CAP is gay and SEEN owns..........lol........peace

[suretwo]

New here, done some stuff lately, wanted some feedback, and tips on development if possible:

(3D colour is shit)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v501/artful_junkie/desertsure.jpg

(a couple of useless extensions...)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v501/artful_junkie/SU22.jpg

second ever attempt at wildstyle - it didn't go as planned but it's as far as I've got:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v501/artful_junkie/sure22.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v501/artful_junkie/SURETWO2.jpg


All constructive criticism and tips appreciated

EDIT - I'm gonna change my name as I just looked at the memberlist and "SURE" is unoriginal as fuck. Should be "SURETWOHUNDRED" :haha: :dozey:

[scribbler]

I worked on the r and on the p. the m and the w are hard to change. I could make them mcdonalds like but I dunno. Anymore feedback?

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a14/scribbler18/qwwqeewqweq.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a14/scribbler18/dfgfgddfggdf.jpg

[earo 35]

Fej:

you shoulda really read through those tips and advice some more. the lines you have are too thin, and you have a few things you dont need. like that exra bar on the F and that little thing coming out of the E. i know theyre small and insignificant, but you wanna start simple. get your letter structure down before you can add some extra bars. i can tell you to "do this" and "do that" but if you dont practice, youre not gonna know why youre "doing this" and "doing that"
make thicker and rounder letters with structure. and dont make the ends of the letters look like bones, round it out some more.

whoever beleives there's no such thing as a useless extension:

stfu please. anything that isnt found in a basic letter is an extension. these extensions ARENT NEEDED, thus: USELESS.
now dont get me wrong, just because an extension is useless doesnt mean its bad. the only bad extensions are the ones that take away flow and plain out look bad. extensions are meant to add flow and sometimes help structure. pointless extensions take away from the flow and make certain parts of the peice look awkward.

[runci]

heres soemthin i did wen bored... ses hundred proof...

http://img148.echo.cx/img148/7490/100proof0rl.png

[EKSOxo]

some simple stuff
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019485.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019490.jpg
more style
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019488.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019489.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019493.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019491.jpg

[jeno]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y38/manazero/manastickies.jpg

alright, i wrtie mana, i was here a while back and left and came back, if anyone wants to see any painted work, tell me, its justr about aas god as paper shit, ill probably post it up, the first sticker says MANA up and down, the second is like my straight letter of mana and the third is a throwie that i throw up everywhere.

TEAR EM UP.

[PINK DOT]

bait, thats one of the best ideas ive ever seen as far as practicing your styles. might want to step back a little bit and go simpler but you have the right idea.

[fej]

http://img167.exs.cx/img167/770/dol4tl.jpg
Okay, second ever graff try. Went for something completely different here.
Help please?

[EKSOxo]

keep every thing consistent and the same also what are you writing? OOL???
pick a name and start simple

[scribbler]

I worked on the r and on the p. the m and the w are hard to change. I could make them mcdonalds like but I dunno. Anymore feedback?

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a14/scribbler18/qwwqeewqweq.jpg

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a14/scribbler18/dfgfgddfggdf.jpg

[fej]

http://img274.exs.cx/img274/382/kip3ri.jpg
KIP.
I'd stick to one name, but I'm trying to get a feel for what letters I like.
Help appreciated, and thanks to everone who has given advice so far.

[215 hero]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y77/215hero/Scan10019.jpg


This was done ine the beging of 2004 just wont to see what people think of it

ska & poles

[runci]

Originally posted by runci@Jun 29 2005, 11:59 AM
heres soemthin i did wen bored... ses hundred proof...

http://img148.echo.cx/img148/7490/100proof0rl.png
Quoted post

bump... any comments

[CRUELone]

i'm liking it...u really have that style down

[suretwo]

Can I grab some feedback? My post is up there^^

Thanks

[Maca1]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y114/Salem1/graff/DSC00515.jpg

[bears_with_knives]

i like that handstyle...

[THE STIX]

that handstyle looks like normal typical sloopy handwriting.. and yes, i did use a double negative ;)

[THE STIX]

wood kids, and 99 cent paint, the best way to practice...

[earo 35]

fej:

we cant give you help when all youve done is 3 sketches. instead of doing 4 sketches and showing off 3, do 100 sketches and show us your best ones. you cant judge your stuff, its too fucking simple. add more letters, try more words, add color, add some 3-d, add some shaddows, TRY ANYTHING! you havent developed a style yet, keep practicing. if you think youre gonna get somewhere with 3 sketches, you can stop cuz youre not gonna get anywhere.

suretwo:

your shit's good, and i like the colors. the first one is fine, its little too simple to add so much color but it looks good, so who cares. 2nd one, too many extensions and too simple. nice colors though. 3rd one, good shit. i like that idea. if you keep working on that, youve got yourself an original style. 4th one, fucking awesome. the only thing that pissed me off was the R. try a lowercase R. besides that, awesome.

runci:

your shit's too good to be posting in this thread. youre not a toy, post in a better thread and do some battles. youve got a nice style.

215 hero:

keep practicing. work on letter structure. youve got potential.

scribbler:

try a different style man. dont get stuck on the same style. experiment.

[THE STIX]

ya sure2 would be a king if this was uhhhhhhhhh 1992, cats straight but i used to see shit like that back when i was a kid in california

[THE STIX]

and the colors on the first one... man that colo skeme is sooo ol skool man.. god sorry sure im jus stating the facts...

[jeno]

NObody comented on mines.

[THE STIX]

... it sucks, and u need to get a wider selection of markers, pens or wat ever the hell ur usin...happy? keep it up kojack(this message is entended for jeno)

[*BIZMO*]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v128/flipsk8er1925/biz.jpg
hows this
i kno i messed up some places but try and be nice about it =P

[*BIZMO*]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v128/flipsk8er1925/biz2.jpg
my first ever attempt at wildstyle please put your 2 cents in

[*BIZMO*]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v128/flipsk8er1925/biz3.jpg
just a random one

[Maca1]

bizmo dint bite the letters wiggles
http://www.mrwiggles.biz/graffiti_alphabets.htm
http://www.mrwiggles.biz/graffiti_alphabets.htm

[EKSOxo]

sold old bait stuff
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019474.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019472.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019466.jpg

[EKSOxo]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019492.jpg

old ekso throwies
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3011014.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3011005.jpg

[*BIZMO*]

i did im need something to work with

[pink__DOTS]

fuck it kids

break all the rules, do your own shit, and learn from your mistakes!

[fej]

Originally posted by *BIZMO*@Jun 30 2005, 08:40 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v128/flipsk8er1925/biz2.jpg
my first ever attempt at wildstyle please put your 2 cents in
Quoted post

Those letters are a rip off from graffiti creator.net.

[CRUELone]

mr wiggles=nono

[EKSOxo]

bite that shit hard and make it your own take the idea of the structure and change it up dont do the exact same shit that a little to much just nibble and borrow

[uephoric drips]

hey cruel, dont hate on wigz, he made those alphas for toys to get some insperation, no need to hate, hes also got some really crazy 3d ones, hes been graffin for 20 years now. dont hate.

[suretwo]

Originally posted by earo 35+Jun 30 2005, 08:36 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (earo 35 - Jun 30 2005, 08:36 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'>suretwo:

your shit's good, and i like the colors. the first one is fine, its little too simple to add so much color but it looks good, so who cares. 2nd one, too many extensions and too simple. nice colors though. 3rd one, good shit. i like that idea. if you keep working on that, youve got yourself an original style. 4th one, fucking awesome. the only thing that pissed me off was the R. try a lowercase R. besides that, awesome.
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Yeh I posted these somewhere else and you're not alone in disliking the R.
Cheers for the comments though, I'm gonna go sketch now. :)

Originally posted by THE STIX@Jul 01 2005, 12:33 AM
ya sure2 would be a king if this was uhhhhhhhhh 1992, cats straight but i used to see shit like that back when i was a kid in california

<!--QuoteBegin-THE STIX@Jul 01 2005, 12:36 AM
and the colors on the first one... man that colo skeme is sooo ol skool man.. god sorry sure im jus stating the facts...
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Yo Mr Stix, thanks for commenting, but - old skool is a bad thing? :huh2:

[metropolitanmayhem]

biels that fill is fuckin mad ill give you that, i think the one slanted looks better than if it was straight.
cruel u hardly need feedback maybe work on the arrows they are the only thing that puts it down

[metropolitanmayhem]

you guys have 99 c paint? fark the cheapest shit us aussies have is aussie exports for 3 bucks a can

[faze 1]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/AlexPavlakis/lunar.jpg
[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v649/AlexPavlakis/507a0a32.jpg[IMG]

[faze 1]

CRITICIZIM PLIZEZZZEEE

[earo 35]

faze 1:

-your photo's way to small.
-your photo's upside-down.

[fuckum]

wow

[THE STIX]

YA, TRY LEARNING, WHICH SIDE IS UP AND DOWN BEFORE U POST KID LOL

[CRUELone]

i hated when???i dont recall. all i said was i don't think its a good idea to use that shit...but u know what???fuck it...i could give 2 shits how long mr wiggles has been writing.if i don't feel his shit, oh well.i don't tell u not to hate on anyone.

[THE STIX]

:haha: :haha: bizmo...#1 rule man dont bite cats man.. gettin ideas,,ya ok.. u like fuckin traced those letters lol man....

and if mr wiggles made an alphabet to help out toys.. thats fuckin weak.. thats wat the problem is nowdays... shyts way to easy to get into...

[lay low]

how do you upload pictures
so i could post my shit here

[jeno]

can someone please comment more on my shit please?

[earo 35]

jeno:

how about you post your work on this page so we dont have to look back 3 pages

lay low:

look in the frequently asked questions forum

[SOW<---]

what do i need to work on;
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/3062/sowgreyandorange2bf.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
and
(by the way ignore all the dots on this one i was sketchin on a page which was on top of it and the markers soaked through :mad2:)
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/1314/sowgreenstrips8iq.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

[Ecro]

trying sum new shit...quick pen sketches

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7620/ecro21gq.jpg

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1189/ecrooo2bl.jpg

[Mr. Chad]

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00487093f00000047.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00487093f00000048.jpg

i havent sketched anything in about tow months but here ya go.

[Mr. Chad]

god that second one is horrrible