Toys post here...

[OmenTFC]

Originally posted by bridge bum
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000060.jpg'>
your not a toy...really feelin' your style.

[BANK]

im been workin on my handstyle youing dry erase and my mirror...
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v245/nix_hex_205/seyz_tag.jpg'>

hows this......


oh and....... is SEYZ a toy name???????

[Talon]

These are the best of what I've been doing for the past 3 weeks. I think I'm finally starting to get it right. Sorry about fotango. I tried to register for photobucket, but my computer doesn't like it.

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00401408f00000017.jpg'>

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00401408f00000018.jpg'>
This one's my favorite, although I think the L should have been just a little smaller.

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00401408f00000019.jpg'>
Kind of an uncreative/ugly coloring job, but I think the letters are nice.

Anyways, can I get some advice?

[GnomeToys]

Originally posted by BANK

oh and....... is SEYZ a toy name???????

It wasn't until you asked that question.

[why write?]

talon...you have progressed a lot, that middle one..the brown and white, im really feelin that a lot..keep up the good work

[BANK]

Originally posted by GnomeToys
It wasn't until you asked that question.
um i only asked that because i have been told it was a toy name and im tyeing to stray from that..

[GnomeToys]

Here's a clue. Everybody on here will tell everybody else that nearly anything they do is toy. You should have picked up on this pattern by now. There is no such thing as a "toy name". If you get good and destroy your fucking city nobody will care what you write.

[moosepoopmat]

^true....if your asking if its toy....do you yourself think its a toy name?....if you have doubts....open up a dictionary....i found my name with a french and english dictionary.....and i love my name...

[BobotheHobo]

i tink seyz might already be taken

[BANK]

im lets see the z does look more like an a so its an a nowim gonan mess with it to make it to try to make it into a z but i did this word YESA
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v245/nix_hex_205/YESA_001.jpg'>
oh the "3D" on the end is where the ink bleed out ...still tryin to figure out how to use these prismas so they dont bleed so fuckin much....so i just tried to cover it up...... but over all??????????????????

[bridge bum]

that one looks like yesa I think you should take the s straight up and down again. and take the curve out of the z. that will make it stop looking liks an a.

[bridge bum]

woops I should of read what you posted before I started running my mouth

[Eksit1]

not too sure where to post so ill start here[img]http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid122/p9d2202fd3a97da24a36718c5f2fe6793/f83ef145.jpg'>

[Eksit1]

fuck

some one help me out with this picture posting thing

[StarzAbove]

Not bad;)

[bridge bum]

mr. above would you mind telling me what you think of my piece?

[InDY_500]

Nice work talon sir......Those colors are lookin good....Keep at that shit sir.....

[GnomeToys]

Originally posted by moosepoopmat
^true....if your asking if its toy....do you yourself think its a toy name?....if you have doubts....open up a dictionary....i found my name with a french and english dictionary.....and i love my name...

I don't think its a "toy name" if there is such a thing. And yes, it probably is taken, but so is everything else. Don't worry about it, do your thing, and start painting now. Find some spot where you don't have to worry about shit being up and seen forever if it comes out horrible and just paint it.

[BANK]

Originally posted by GnomeToys
I don't think its a "toy name" if there is such a thing. And yes, it probably is taken, but so is everything else. Don't worry about it, do your thing, and start painting now. Find some spot where you don't have to worry about shit being up and seen forever if it comes out horrible and just paint it.

word.....everyone in 12oz has been a great help to me... thank yall for the critisism and advice....

[MelleMel]

Bank ima tell you straight up... your shit looks like stuff from a font book
And Bridge bum keep your shit outta this thread bitch nigga

[ToPiKtEn]

yo yesa dont even waste your money on prismas your horrible still

[0RB1T0N3R]

the graff in here aint that bad

[0RB1T0N3R]

actually i like some of it

[BANK]

never said YESA was good .....and the prismas..i got em for free....

[Papa Smurf..]

Originally posted by BANK
anwyas here is an attempt at addin 3D to this i changed the Z cuz the last one was shitty...anyways hows this ...
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v245/nix_hex_205/seyz_w_3d.jpg'> quit while ur not ahead

[StarzAbove]

Originally posted by bridge bum
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000060.jpg'>
You have got way better than before but my opinion is it has 2 many extensions, the one you coloed on the page b4 is good but also would be better with out all the extensions.

[bridge bum]

yeah I guess I going a little overboard with that. its fun thanks

[BANK]

ok hows this.... constructive critisism please
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v245/nix_hex_205/YESA.jpg'>

[RuMplStilskN]

Its cool bank your letters are pretty bold and in the long run i think it will do you good..
-By the way how to you put up pics?

[seakr]

bank seems determined 2 get it down, hes gettin better keep it going.

do ppl post spray paint pieces on herE
?

[seakr]

Originally posted by bridge bum
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000059.jpg'>

haah i thaut it was the chair @ first. thats pretty good , therez alot of extentions tho

[bridge bum]

yeah but my letters still show

[FightTheBuff]

i like that one
but dont go too over board with extensions

[holycrapRUN]

yea, its not wether or not the letters show, its wether or not the extensions look good. and tons of extensions dont.

[bridge bum]

I see what your saying
thanx

[*SPACEPOPE*]

bump for wood.

[bridge bum]

wood?

[OmenTFC]

Originally posted by bridge bum
wood?
Do you write in detroit or ann arbor by any chance? I see some similar if not exact styles to yours in those cities... keep the good work up!

[nozaki]

Originally posted by GnomeToys
It wasn't until you asked that question.

just about to say that shit, haha

[brasse hed]

[img]C:My DocumentsMy Picturesdevows.bmp'> [QUOTE]

nope not a toy just never tried a wildstyle b4 feedback plz

[P0rn0KinG]

Originally posted by brasse hed
[img]C:My DocumentsMy Picturesdevows.bmp'> [QUOTE]

nope not a toy just never tried a wildstyle b4 feedback plz

lol.
by the post tells me it is...

[StarzAbove]

More flics...

[anywho]

for real...

[bridge bum]

Originally posted by OmenTFC
Do you write in detroit or ann arbor by any chance? I see some similar if not exact styles to yours in those cities... keep the good work up!
yeah i write in ann arbor

[bridge bum]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00314468f00000078.jpg'>

[brasse hed]

Originally posted by P0rn0KinG
lol.
by the post tells me it is...
yeah fotobucket aint workin dumb ass. lol and no im not a toy

[seakr]

Originally posted by brasse hed
yeah fotobucket aint workin dumb ass. lol and no im not a toy


dont say ur not a toy prove it with some of ur work

[BANK]

um here somethin....i didnt really do an A i just put it there cuz i was tired and not payin attention...just try to look at the VES part for now but what do yall think...
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v245/nix_hex_205/vesa.jpg'>

yeah sorry about the erase marks too....

[bridge bum]

fix your v and e

[StarzAbove]

Yea eliminate the extensions

[bridge bum]

Originally posted by bridge bum

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000028.jpg'> [img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000029.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000030.jpg'> [img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000039.jpg'> [img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000040.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000047.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000034.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000036.jpg'> [img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000051.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000053.jpg'> [img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000054.jpg'>
[/b]
I can do simple's as shown above I want to make my stuff more complex, so if you dont have anything constructive to say about what I'm trying to do, dont say anything at all

[why write?]

that ahab stuff is pretty good...keep it simple, looks better like that, when i was lookin at your more complex stuff i was thinking you were some big toy, but when i see this simple stuff im feelin it....

[PAID:one]

Originally posted by bridge bum
I can do simple's as shown above I want to make my stuff more complex, so if you dont have anything constructive to say about what I'm trying to do, dont say anything at all

You're moving in the right direction. Buts since wilds are based on straights, you gotta work that intermediate stage called semi's for a while.

[brasse hed]

Originally posted by seakr
dont say ur not a toy prove it with some of ur work

look yeah
1..the flik wouldnt upload to foto bucket
2..im sayin im not a toy cuz the thread is called toys post here
3.. just to start off the proving (london heds will no)......1.T ever heard of it... u shouldve cuz its one of the biggest crews in london and yeah im in it
4..im not pissed just tryin to sort fings out

safe

[brasse hed]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v295/nicegi/diza1t.bmp'>

diza 1.t not sayin its the best and if ur from the u.s u may not appreciate uk style but if u decide its toy then prrrraa

specially 4 seakr

[smits]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v256/whatsmyfeauture/family_001.jpg'> i got board and did this on some ply wood i had lyin around...i post more when i get the time to take flix...please give me feed back...

[smits]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v256/whatsmyfeauture/black%20book/mise3.jpg'> [img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v256/whatsmyfeauture/black%20book/mise4.jpg'> [img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v256/whatsmyfeauture/black%20book/miser.jpg'> ..ight heres some more...doin alot of straight letters...get letter struckture down...tell me wat you think...i know theres a mize in san fran or watever...dont worry about it...im gonna change my name before i get up big

[why write?]

^ on that last post, im feelin the 1st one, nice work...keep it up

[smits]

thanx man....its always good to get some kind words about my "work"...im thinkin about paintin that one

[akrbone]

[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/Newest.jpg'>
Newest n greatest sketch

[Sycko]

go for a little less and ull get more








the fat man walks alone

[why write?]

akrbone - thats decent, keep everything at one level like use the bottom of the paper as a guide as when you did on the R + B, keep everything consistent and porportioned correctly, try to clean it up a bit, dont do that little curl thing at the bottom of your K and try and make all the letters flow together correctly, the fill is okay...im not feelin the silver bubbles....well re-sketch that and color it in and flick it and post it, i wanna see what it looks like....

[akrbone]

why write: wat if i tried2 even the curls out by puttin on on the left side of the A so then there r not just one curl but2? that way it is like equal

just a idea
other than that i will do wen i get some time

[why write?]

nah, i dont think that would look good...heres some help, i tried:

[img]http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/illrati/deeeeeeess/Newest.bmp'>

[why write?]

green says -> keep everything same size and same slantness, keep everything straight
blue says -> fix 3d, do it same direction
pink says -> cut it off here


you dont have to take my advice, im just trying to help you out, im not no ILL writer or anything

[akrbone]

[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/Newest1.jpg'> some other stuff i "fixed" up to make it look better, wat u think?

[dreamt death]

[img]http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/8273/CrowningBuckKreationz.jpg'>

sketch by Konk for Crowning Buck Kreationz soon to be website

[img]http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/4182/MonkeyseeMonkeydoo.jpg'>
sketch by Konk .. Monkey see Monkey Do

[why write?]

that one is looking better cause of 3d and slope....dont color in your sketches just yet, its making them look sloppy.....try and do the same style as the first one you posted that i critiqued and just make it less sloppy and fix the slope on it, you dont needa make up new letters because i like the first set of letters, i mean the 2nd sketch is decent...you can work on those letters if you like but i think that if you work on those its taking a step back...so start with the first sketches letter structure and work off that, but keep it up..you'll definatly get there, you got potential and you can tell....-seih

[StarzAbove]

Not Bad!

[akrbone]

[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/AkrbNew1.jpg'>
over did the fill, nothin i can do now...dammit

[akrbone]

Originally posted by dreamt death
[img]http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/8273/CrowningBuckKreationz.jpg'>

sketch by Konk for Crowning Buck Kreationz soon to be website

[img]http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/4182/MonkeyseeMonkeydoo.jpg'>
sketch by Konk .. Monkey see Monkey Do

sick stuff

[bridge bum]

is that konk from alaska? if so my boy says he knows you.

[brasse hed]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v295/nicegi/diza1t.bmp'>

diza 1.t (onetime) new style hopin for some feedback sorry its a bit small

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v295/nicegi/lefa1s.bmp'>

[P0rn0KinG]

Originally posted by brasse hed
look yeah
1..the flik wouldnt upload to foto bucket
2..im sayin im not a toy cuz the thread is called toys post here
3.. just to start off the proving (london heds will no)......1.T ever heard of it... u shouldve cuz its one of the biggest crews in london and yeah im in it
4..im not pissed just tryin to sort fings out

safe

QUIET YOU.

[why write?]

Originally posted by akrbone
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/AkrbNew1.jpg'>
over did the fill, nothin i can do now...dammit

this is better, except the fill....keep your fills simple and maybe you should try to do some more simple letters at first and find out where your lines should be and transform that into the style you are trying to do now, i think it would look good....keep the work up, im proud that your actually concerned and trying hard on trying to get better instead of just slacking off....keep that shit up and you will get better quick, keep posting

[Evoke_Me]

this is something i did and just looking for feedback, lettme know what you think....tried to keep it simple...and i'm just started using color...but i'ma stick to outlines....

"evoke"
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v294/Evoked/c130acda.jpg'>

[bridge bum]

darken up your outline

[holycrapRUN]

goofin around on the computer

[img]http://img73.photobucket.com/albums/v221/holycraprun/hellomomma.jpg'>

[CrazyLazy]

Good stuff, Rune.

[paister]

[img]xxx'>

[paister]

[IMG]cap_007'>

[paister]

crap man..how do u post pictures?..................... i have pics in MY PICTURES ..............but i dont know how to transfer em....anyone know?

[holycrapRUN]

www.photobucket.com (http://www.photobucket.com)

[CrazyLazy]

Upload your pictures in photobucket or some image hosting site. Then, after they are all uploaded, highlight the address, or url, of the picture and copy it. In your message on 12oz, press the "IMG" button and it pops up a little window. In that window, paste the url of the picture you want. It sounds complicated, but when you get it, it's really quite simple.

[Angry Kids]

that konk don't belong with this bull, he's actually got skill

[bridge bum]

i'll agree konk is dope and needs to be in another thread. but why the hate angry kid did you make your girlfriend a lesbian or somthing? or do yo get pissed at seeing kids get better and your not or somthing.

[brasse hed]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v295/nicegi/lefwild.bmp'>
new outline feedback plz

[bridge bum]

fix the a, I like the handstyle

[yeaaaah baby]

not bad. just darken your outline and connect all the lines.

[brasse hed]

Originally posted by yeaaaah baby
not bad. just darken your outline and connect all the lines.

yeah safe its a sketch and thats why the lines dont all connect but thnx ne wy

and can u elaborate on fix the a

[El Producto]

Originally posted by CrazyLazy
Good stuff, Rune.

im hoping that was sarcasm...

[bridge bum]

your trying to writhe sefa right? anyway thats what it looks like. the a is off balance and it dosn't flow with the rest of the piece.

[holycrapRUN]

Originally posted by El Producto
im hoping that was sarcasm...

Thanks for that lil' bit of constructive criticism, bro. And yes, that was sarcasm.

[CrazyLazy]

Nah it wasn't sarcasm. I'm digging the R. And the black and hot pink.

[yeaaaah baby]

Originally posted by CrazyLazy
Nah it wasn't sarcasm. I'm digging the R. And the black and hot pink.
LIAH!

[Evoke_Me]

*listens*

[brasse hed]

http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v295/nicegi/diza1t.bmp
my old tag a readable more my style feedback plz

[El Producto]

Originally posted by holycrapRUN
Thanks for that lil' bit of constructive criticism, bro. And yes, that was sarcasm.

when i saw it i actually thought it was a joke...no offence but how the hell did you make it that messy??..theres random coloured lines all over the place

[holycrapRUN]

Lotta changes to the colors combined with changes to the letters themselves. I was lazy erasing, since it's really hard to have that kinda control with a mouse.

[bridge bum]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000069.jpg'>

[bridge bum]

anyone home?

[akrbone]

[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/CourageAklaim.jpg'>Aklaim's Courage The Cowardly Dog
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/AkrbCharacter.jpg'>
Akrb
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/AkrbCharacter1.jpg'>
Akrb
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/RollCall.jpg'>
Akrb Roll Call

[OmenTFC]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00445440f00000005.jpg'>
For the make battle without 3-d, constructive critisism needed yo...

[Angry Kids]

damn kid, you need to work on letter structure like now

[OmenTFC]

Originally posted by Angry Kids
damn kid, you need to work on letter structure like now
yea i know, the picture adds on to it tho'
:lol:

[OmenTFC]

o almost forgot, whats the best free image hosting site?

[bridge bum]

Originally posted by bridge bum
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00418672f00000069.jpg'>
what do all of you think of this one?

[AWProvidence]

what do all of you think of this one?

everything is pretty good but im not really feeling the awc the W looks kind of weird

[yeaaaah baby]

Originally posted by OmenTFC
o almost forgot, whats the best free image hosting site?
www.photobucket.com (http://www.photobucket.com)

and i'm diggin your work bridgebum. that dubya is funk tho.

[bridge bum]

yeah the W kind of sux

[yeaaaah baby]

deedni

[THE CORONER]

blahblahblahblahblahblah

[Evoke_Me]

we all progressing...i should be posting one later so stay tuned

[BLaCkNiGGa]

Originally posted by holycrapRUN
goofin around on the computer

[img]http://img73.photobucket.com/albums/v221/holycraprun/hellomomma.jpg'>
HURT!!!:D

[BLaCkNiGGa]

Originally posted by smits
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v256/whatsmyfeauture/black%20book/mise3.jpg'> [img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v256/whatsmyfeauture/black%20book/mise4.jpg'> [img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v256/whatsmyfeauture/black%20book/miser.jpg'> ..ight heres some more...doin alot of straight letters...get letter struckture down...tell me wat you think...i know theres a mize in san fran or watever...dont worry about it...im gonna change my name before i get up big
nice man especially the first one, but theres already a pretty famous mize back in frisco, but whatever, rock on.:cool:

[placer_sf]

can i hav feedbak on these sketches please, n also check out
www.strait-faces.tk (http://www.strait-faces.tk) for more


http://bushido.0catch.com/placer%20city.jpg
http://bushido.0catch.com/shooby.jpg
http://bushido.0catch.com/arow.jpg

it wont let u hotlink so ull hav to typ it in lyk

[Evoke_Me]

placer, it didn't didn't show at all, try photodump, photobucket, or fontango, there all free

[StarzAbove]

2 many pop ups

[bridge bum]

pop ups, what are you talking about?

[StarzAbove]

When i click on placer_sf links

[kons_doa]

Originally posted by kons_doa
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v339/konsdoa/58742095.jpg'>
FREE TONK!!!!
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v339/konsdoa/58742111.jpg'>
KONSDOA
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v339/konsdoa/58742104.jpg'>
ONE OTHER KONS

ALL MY SHIT LOOKS TOY SO YA HAHA

[GnomeToys]

You dont' need to post that in every thread. Just listen to my advice, as I am the wildstyle grafftag master. YOU NEED MORE FUCKING ARROWS.

[JeLisOneR]

[img]http://www.strike9.com/file.ashx?path=%2fkrylonone%2ffullsize%2f480x360_D SCN0417.jpg'>

[img]http://www.strike9.com/file.ashx?path=%2fkrylonone%2ffullsize%2f480x360_D SCN0416.jpg'>

[img]http://www.strike9.com/file.ashx?path=%2fkrylonone%2ffullsize%2f480x360_D SCN0415.jpg'>

rip me apart

[JeLisOneR]

how do i get it to show images insted of links ... i put the [img]'> tags around the url

[0RB1T0N3R]

yo jelis where you from?, theres a jelisone here in chicago

[kons_doa]

Originally posted by GnomeToys
You dont' need to post that in every thread. Just listen to my advice, as I am the wildstyle grafftag master. YOU NEED MORE FUCKING ARROWS.

SHIT IDK I JUST STARTED LIKE NOT TO LONG AGO THATS Y I FUCKING SUCK WELL YA ILL TRY PUT MORE ARROWS LOL IF I NO HOW BUT SHIT IDK THANKS FOR YOUR ADVICE...

[JeLisOneR]

im from missouri bout an hour from kc ... ive been writing for about 3 years but kinda got away from it for the last year... within the last week i got a legal wall for a clothing store and it just got me back in hardcore...

[JeLisOneR]

ill be in chicago sometime in sept ... ill have to hunt him down and battle him :P

[0RB1T0N3R]

well hes pretty dope just to give you the heads up

[JeLisOneR]

do you know how long hes wrote jelis ... ive done some bombs and did a ass ton of stiker bombing in chi ....sucks theres a writer named jelis there now =/

[Blauh]

[img]http://img67.photobucket.com/albums/v204/arghteaaaa/chromie.bmp'>

Toy.

[StarzAbove]

T Capital letters alittle thinner n you've got it

[akrbone]

i like it thick, it looks cool, but take star's above advice i still suck

[0RB1T0N3R]

hes been bombing for years dude, ill try to get some flicks.......hes like eighteen and been writing jelis since he was maybe 14 hes writes rokr also

[KanFeumz]

Originally posted by Blauh
[img]http://img67.photobucket.com/albums/v204/arghteaaaa/chromie.bmp'>

Toy.

how long has it been since you started?

[Blauh]

6 months.

[brasse hed]

Originally posted by Blauh
6 months.
6 months not bad i guess ur just lernin now but u dont suck at least not like that kons doa person his graff hurts....bad

[smits]

BlackNigga,
yah i know that there is a mize in frisco...mise/mize...i sorta new that when i started, mise is just a starter name for me im gonna change prolly end of the summer...cuz i dont want any beef over a name..but when you look at it most names are taken some where but i will change...but thanx for the feed bak..epreciated

[BANK]

what a weekend.....
manged to do this in all the maddness
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/GESA.jpg'>
whats the word? sorry for the sloppiness

[why write?]

^ im feeling that

[StarzAbove]

best style yet

[brasse hed]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v295/nicegi/lefatw.bmp'>

feedback plz cuz im paintin soon

[StarzAbove]

make the hole in the A smaller

[brasse hed]

yeah other than that

[why write?]

brasse - why do your letters get bigger as the piece goes on? make the whole in the a smaller and make it follow the outside of the letter, dont put all those little tags in there.....you forgot 3d on bottom of your L...keep it up though, looks alright

[**DatDude**]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/My%20Stickers/yoooonigg.jpg'>

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/My%20Stickers/yoooonig.jpg'>

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/My%20Stickers/yooooniggg.jpg'>

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/My%20Stickers/111.jpg'>

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/My%20Stickers/111212.jpg'>

[StarzAbove]

Not good at all go SIMPLE

[yeaaaah baby]

usually when people put sayings on stickers or pieces they are clever sayings. blue letters blue balls is not clever.

[**DatDude**]

hey it least i wasnt makin it up. dont take things so serious, i mean doesnt it say TOYS POST HERE, i am a toy, so....

[zealot]

Originally posted by StarzAbove
Not good at all go SIMPLE

how much simpler can you get?

[0RB1T0N3R]

:lol:

[brasse hed]

damn im not being very productive recently heres an attempt feed back plz
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v295/nicegi/lefapnk.bmp'>

[**DatDude**]

how much simpler can you get?

i know garbage

[Evoke_Me]

looking for feedback, i was experimenting with my name...on one i took off the 'e', but the rest have it...looking for positive feeback

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v294/Evoked/IMGA0584.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v294/Evoked/IMGA0589.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v294/Evoked/IMGA0588.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v294/Evoked/IMGA0587.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v294/Evoked/IMGA0586.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v294/Evoked/IMGA0585.jpg'>

[**DatDude**]

i like the first one
2nd and 3rd need work
i like 4, needs coloring though
5 looks like GVOKG
and that guy #6 is raw...

[**DatDude**]

in other words...

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/Random/darienlake.jpg'>

I LIKE IT

[brasse hed]

a little more feed back plz ignore the throwie
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v295/nicegi/lefathrow.bmp'>

[Evoke_Me]

thanks for the advice, do u think i should drop the last 'e'

[Issac Brock]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v345/Sort1/NEON.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v345/Sort1/sort_pink_and_brown.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v345/Sort1/sort_orange_and_yellow.jpg'>

i write sort..not neon, i just felt like doing a neon straight letter cause i was bored of doing my letters...feedback is requested...

[CrazyLazy]

Not too bad at all, Sort.

[StarzAbove]

Yea i agree those are pretty good for a start

[Issac Brock]

thanks

[BANK]

aight I made some changes on the G and A
http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/GESA001.jpg
theres kinda of a glare on it from the flash its not supposed to be a highlight on the G
constructive criticism please.....

[**DatDude**]

Just some shit i was workin on

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/My%20Stickers/heyheya.jpg'>

[**DatDude**]

EVOKE all im saying is the first one you did without the E is nice. try without it.

BANK, yeah thats straight.

[El Producto]

im feeling that GESA

[yeaaaah baby]

bank- lookin good.
isaac brock- lookin good also.
datdude- lookin pretty toy.

[**DatDude**]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/SURE/heyheya.jpg'>

[**DatDude**]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/SURE/heyheyas.jpg'>

[**DatDude**]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/RUNT/111.jpg'>

[**DatDude**]

yeaaaah baby
last time i looked,

TOYS POST HERE

jus wonderin

[AWProvidence]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0678.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0669.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0645.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0643.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0871.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0872.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0873.jpg'>
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0677.jpg'>

[akrbone]

sort not bad @ all cuz ur better than me haha

[BANK]

um tryin at handstyle ..yeah...
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/gesahand007.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/gesahand.jpg'>
cronstructive criticism please......

[StarzAbove]

A looks like D

[smits]

sort- that last one is lookin pretty fresh...i like the colors and the fact that your letters are consistant. most people cant get that right. its always way extreme...good work

AWprovidence- im not feelin the outlines. just to complicated and no real structure..it just takes work. but the hand is nice... well the one on the top...the one that says jeal needs work...but the other ones are dope...i dont no if you did those... cuz it doesnt seem like it, but if you did good work...go simpler on the peicies though..

just my opinion

[holycrapRUN]

gesa, no need for the letters to connect, only do it if it flows, dont force it.

[BANK]

ehhhh i guess...
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/gesa008.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/gesa009.jpg'>
tryin sumthin
constructive criticism...

[**DatDude**]

Yo BANK the handstyle aint workin 4 you, The last 2 are good until you reach the A other then that yeah its aight

[Nekro]

Originally posted by **DatDude**
[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/SURE/heyheya.jpg'> You're kidding, right?

[8907808]

I call this one A Lame Attempt At Wildstyle

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07alsamo/DSC00580.jpg'>

and a really bad throwie

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07alsamo/DSC00581.jpg'>

[StarzAbove]

Originally posted by BANK
aight I made some changes on the G and A
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/GESA001.jpg'>
theres kinda of a glare on it from the flash its not supposed to be a highlight on the G
constructive criticism please.....

Stick to this style this 1's ill

[**DatDude**]

As a matter of fact, i was kidding. thats my boy hes not that bad...

[why write?]

Originally posted by StarzAbove
Stick to this style this 1's ill

i agree

[BANK]

k....got a problem...im trying to add 3D to..
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/GESA001.jpg'>
but everytime i try to add the 3d to it it comes out lookin like shit ..any suggestions on how to add 3d shadow ...need some tips to help e out ...i been lookin at other shit to try to figure it out but when i try it on mine it looks liek shit...help

[why write?]

you should do all 3d going into the bottom middle, make it like blackwith white lines or white with black lines, try it out...i think it would look good like that, thats just my opinion though...im still toy myself, try it...see if you like it

[CrazyLazy]

Originally posted by BANK
k....got a problem...im trying to add 3D to..

but everytime i try to add the 3d to it it comes out lookin like shit ..any suggestions on how to add 3d shadow ...need some tips to help e out ...i been lookin at other shit to try to figure it out but when i try it on mine it looks liek shit...help

you can try just a shadow-like thing instead of 3-d. it looks good though.

[BANK]

yeah yeah ..i meant shadow ..tips on shadowing needed.....thanks whywrite ill try that out i have tryed doin that on some other shit and it worked out ill try that

[CrazyLazy]

Not much advice I can give with out it seeming really complicated when it's all typed out. Just watch out for the round sides like "o"s and stuff. They get a little tricky.

[KanFeumz]

Originally posted by Blauh
6 months.

thats koo I got this dude started about like about 8 months and he is still hasnt learnd much.....ohwell:spin: :spent:

[Illbill88]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00413232f00000157.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00413232f00000158.jpg'>
just alittle nothin

[**DatDude**]

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/Legal%20Graff%20Crew/dude.bmp'>

lil sumthin sumthin

[**DatDude**]

^^^^^^^^^^^^Prisma markers. sort of looks like crayon though 4 some reason, dunno why.

[Evoke_Me]

i was about to ask u why the look like that? but u answered it, how long u had the prismas, i don't know much, sometimes the tips it smashed or its running out of ink.

[0RB1T0N3R]

maybe there not even prismas...........

[JeezMan]

didnt see a toy thread in brick slayers so since i dont really sketch or flick ne of em ill just post shit ive painted.. only some of my shit.... Sort, i also hope im better than some of these cats....haha
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000014.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000141.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000143.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000144.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000154.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000188.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000207.jpg'>
^^^me and my boy Bael
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000218.jpg'>
feedback is requested

[shani1985]

nice work

[**DatDude**]

http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthrea...?threadid=55524 (http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?threadid=55524)

thats the toys post in brickslayers

but its ok, i guess/

and i think i used those markers ALOT before, thats why it looks like that, plus i was just tryin some stupid shit, other then that. U LIKE IT?

[Evoke_Me]

Originally posted by 0RB1T0N3R
maybe there not even prismas........... maybe cause i've never seen prismas to look like that...but no h8

[**DatDude**]

Are you kidding me, if you used them b4 and then like 8 months later u bust them out, thats the results. shit it looks aight to me though

[yeaaaah baby]

Originally posted by BANK
um tryin at handstyle ..yeah...
[IMG]
looks like you are crossing yourself. stay away from that.

[yeaaaah baby]

Originally posted by 8907808

just wondering.. your screenname isnt your phone number is it?

[why write?]

^ we got a detective on our hands

[8907808]

Originally posted by yeaaaah baby
just wondering.. your screenname isnt your phone number is it?

well....when I first made it it wasnt supposed to be....but it IS someones grandmas phone number. I forget who though

[yeaaaah baby]

yeah i'm a detective.

[BANK]

ok ... um what do yall think...
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/gesahand010.jpg'>

ok constructive criticism please....

[StarzAbove]

Lose the $ and !

[**DatDude**]

its aight nun good though, no what try again :)

[zombi]

[img]http://img50.photobucket.com/albums/v154/thedeadwalktheearth/book9.jpg'>
[img]http://img50.photobucket.com/albums/v154/thedeadwalktheearth/stuff1.jpg'>
[img]http://img50.photobucket.com/albums/v154/thedeadwalktheearth/sticker1.jpg'>
[img]http://img50.photobucket.com/albums/v154/thedeadwalktheearth/book1.jpg'>
[img]http://img50.photobucket.com/albums/v154/thedeadwalktheearth/wall4.jpg'>
[img]http://img50.photobucket.com/albums/v154/thedeadwalktheearth/elephant1.jpg'>
[img]http://img50.photobucket.com/albums/v154/thedeadwalktheearth/wall7.jpg'>

[do wuts good]

not bad at all .. the first couple sketches are pretty good

[**DatDude**]

first three are good, but ounce you use the paint (can) it dont look all that great. but prob the best thing for you to do is find a practice spot, one where you can go to and practice your new shit. i wouldn't hit up any good spots right now. you don't wanna start coming off as a toy. you def got style if you get paint control, and a good throwie, you should be there in no time. drawing is alot better to deal with, alot more leway. :)

[Evoke_Me]

zombi, u shouldn't be here with the rest if us, those are awesome.

[StarzAbove]

:confused:

[Swiffer Jet]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000014.jpg'>

yor throw isn't bad at all! it looks good for starters. keep at it becuase sooner or later shit will look h0t

[BANK]

uh ...
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/GS002.jpg'>
theres like a lit part comin of the g goin into the s thats not supposed to be there but ..
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/GESA012.jpg'>
this one aint to good thought i might post it any ways

[**DatDude**]

um..... a yeah... i dont like the shadow around the whole GEAS it doesnt look good at all

[BANK]

its actually two colors there is a shoadow then a outliner of blue but the blue outliner is real thick but its hard to tell in this pic that that its blue...sorry....

[**DatDude**]

oh yeah my fault the thread in brickslayers is closed.

[**DatDude**]

BANK how do you take your pics, you use a camera right? ever try scanning them?
its alot easier to see if scanned and you dont gotta worry about glare and light and shit like that :king:

[CrazyLazy]

Zombi, lookin good.

[BANK]

Originally posted by **DatDude**
BANK how do you take your pics, you use a camera right? ever try scanning them?
its alot easier to see if scanned and you dont gotta worry about glare and light and shit like that :king:
wish i had a scanner....

[**DatDude**]

my bad, but if you like postin and shit scanners can be as low as $40-50.

[thiSINKsux]

that dude is cool

[**DatDude**]

thiSINKsux u know you ma nigga, (cough, cough) 14 hours eh? lol
ne ways when you sendin those pics 2 me? you know i got your back

[yeaaaah baby]

use www.photobucket.com (http://www.photobucket.com) and go simpler

[CrazyLazy]

The handstyle is not too shabby though.

[GnomeToys]

I like the first oddz sketch.

[rak it up]

hey guys photo bucket is out adn i have a couple pics id liek to post.... i looked on the thread w/ a bunch of sites but i dont like manye of em.... have any other ideas?????

[CrazyLazy]

Why not photobucket? Is it not working or something?

[Evoke_Me]

its working.....


anywayz, here's a new charector....

[img]http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v294/Evoked/IMGA0593.jpg'>


tell me what u think...

[**DatDude**]

shit, BUMP.
thats whats up, nice and crisp.
is that a can in his hand?
i like the kickers, hahaha

[Evoke_Me]

thx man, i've been working on it for a long time.....i'ma change my name, i found out there was a evoke, people keep telling me, and i am hard headed, u know how some toys are.....stay up and stay fresh

[rak it up]

yea its bunk.... it says that too many ppl are joining so they arent accepting new members and my membership ran out... so any help would be a great help

[0RB1T0N3R]

try photodump.com its pretty fast and it doesnt resize yer photos

[**DatDude**]

don't mention it. ;)

[why write?]

that last character is pretty good....looks kind of commercial graffiti hip hop character or something

[BANK]

ok...what do yall think..kinda sloppy ....
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/AGES.jpg'>
constructive criticism please

[mef_one]

im likin the dz oddz! u dun the sketch on the a3 yet?

[mef_one]

[GnomeToys]

You're in the wrong thread oddz.

[BANK]

bump for needed criticism on AGES...
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/AGES.jpg'>
criticism...

[StarzAbove]

Bring GESA back cuz 12oz has like 3 o 4 ages

[BANK]

ok...... hows this....
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/GESA013.jpg'>
constructive criticism please..

[Fr8Junkie]

Originally posted by **DatDude**
Are you kidding me, if you used them b4 and then like 8 months later u bust them out, thats the results. shit it looks aight to me though

just looks like shit to me

[yeaaaah baby]

lookin good bank

[mef_one]

[img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400602396_001T.jpg'>
me2
wat you guys think?

[BANK]

bump... cuz i need more criticism on this....
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/GESA013.jpg'>
help me out...

[oddz]

i fink u need mor detailed letta n less blocky

[**DatDude**]

i think you need to stop thinking of what other people think, if it looks bad to you it prob looks bad to them, we get the picture you dont have to right, "how's this" "constructive critism please"we get it man newayz its iight nun to bragg about though. :)

[**DatDude**]

put the work from the pad to the wall.