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bugs

01-11-2007, 10:52 AM

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00055.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00053.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00052.jpg

some reasonably recent sketches. stuff that still needs to be worked on. any crits or suggestions??? (ignore the smudges on the last sketch)

VILE_ATX

01-11-2007, 01:38 PM

your arrows come from nowhere, and your L is humpin your A, work on fills.

your L looks weird but i like your A S and E.

uglydog

01-11-2007, 02:19 PM

why dont u post actual paintings instead of sketch's. anyone can sketch n make it luk gud but paintin it is completly different.

=SALE=

01-11-2007, 02:24 PM

`freak, the first one of the sketches i said it looked like a bite it just doesnt looked like ur style, i really like the last one u posted

duse, love ur work

martian, it luks good

=SALE=

01-11-2007, 02:39 PM

oh and melbs and Q i didnt mean it like u 2 guys think, but it doesnt looked like his style so thats why i said that, sorry all

E_B_A

01-11-2007, 03:39 PM

prescriptrx - looks better... keep working on that simply stylee and you'll progress...

damn duse looks hot like always. I'm really thinking your shit is not toy, man.

It's simple but you have mastered that shit. NOT toy.

=SALE=

01-11-2007, 04:14 PM

Im fucking sorry all :)

MithOneLfc

01-11-2007, 04:14 PM

Lase...do you know ANYTHING about graffiti..?...LASE...

=SALE=

01-11-2007, 04:15 PM

uglydog, for paintings go to the brickslayers part :) cause this is the paper chase, for all things on paper, so for all things with paint and stuffs go to the brickslayers part :) easy as pie :)

freakeenyc

01-11-2007, 04:57 PM

sale i understand wat u meant by that pic being of a different style..lol i agree...cuz it was just another version of something i did a long time ago..but fixed up .

martian too many extensions bro..ur stuffs ususally good tho. and lase lose the extensions..they dont flow.

MithOneLfc

01-11-2007, 05:37 PM

He shudnt even right LASE...hes a fucking dope writer..

nothing to crit

sum new shit...still playing with Add-ons :D ..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/-7.jpg

I hope i aint getting ahead of myself...but im starting to think in my self that im progressing from simples..

Crits Please...Thanks..

KestoFiasto

01-11-2007, 06:32 PM

Coke here you go
http://i16.tinypic.com/454kggn.jpg
shitty picture kinda

but fuck it....go to bombing science..go the shopping part..look up movies...and search em on GOOGLE VIDEO...theres atleast 13 of em...Men In Black II and III...and bunch more

tom_peters

01-11-2007, 07:23 PM

why dont u post actual paintings instead of sketch's. anyone can sketch n make it luk gud but paintin it is completly different.

that's why this is the paper chase forum

stupid

you have the grammar/spelling of a 3 year old

coke0793

01-11-2007, 08:03 PM

woah thanks that looks sweet
ras just check bs
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5641/picture018uj8.jpg

vacuum cleaner

01-11-2007, 08:08 PM

the kid who did that shit in their textbook... effing obnoxious.

hope you don't get billed for that hahahahahahahaha

KestoFiasto

01-11-2007, 08:27 PM

mith...the only thing i have to say is lose like 80% of those clouds haha
freak...i dno me personally ive never really got into that 3d letters going into different directions kinda style
coke...its different...only hollows still though lol
lase...drop the wildstyle
duse...i like it...just really really ugly colors lol

SE-Rythm

01-11-2007, 09:29 PM

a few new ones. crits appreciated.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMAG0054.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMAG0053.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMAG0050.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMAG0049.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMAG0048.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMAG0047.jpg

Sorry bout the quality

prescription-rx

01-11-2007, 09:44 PM

vacuum, i own all of my books... so i have no worrys

bouncingsoul

01-11-2007, 10:21 PM

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0569.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0570.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0571.jpg

Sike_Bomber

01-11-2007, 10:32 PM

Hey rhythm, its way too blurry, i cant even crit that

SE-Rythm

01-11-2007, 10:55 PM

sorry about the quality im downloading a photo editing program. so i'll fix em

kendoner

01-11-2007, 11:03 PM

bouncing...i like the middle one...cept for the K...nice though!

VILE_ATX

01-11-2007, 11:38 PM

bouncing you need to spend less time drawing and more time painting

freakeenyc

01-11-2007, 11:51 PM

bouncing...those sketches are great.

SE-Rythm

01-12-2007, 12:09 AM

crits appreciated

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1322.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1313.jpg

i'll have more in a little while

coke0793

01-12-2007, 12:10 AM

SE-Rythm

01-12-2007, 12:40 AM

Some More...

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1327-1.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1330.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1328.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1334.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1326-1.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1316.jpg

Crits appreciated

SE-Rythm

01-12-2007, 12:50 AM

are those better

kendoner

01-12-2007, 12:50 AM

what the fuck do u write?...ummm go simple

prescription-rx

01-12-2007, 12:50 AM

rhythm- look pretty good, i see that style a lot around school and such.. keep practicing and get better control for smoother lines

SE-Rythm

01-12-2007, 12:52 AM

i love letters so i write like 5 names. se, east, seep etc

SE-Rythm

01-12-2007, 12:54 AM

when you say simple you mean str8 letters

SE-Rythm

01-12-2007, 12:59 AM

anymore crits

bouncingsoul

01-12-2007, 01:07 AM

I fail at painting... Halfassed rushed 3d and everything...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0572.jpg

:edit: Hahahahahaha, look at the top and bottom 3d's of my K... I suck

staby

01-12-2007, 01:15 AM

Hey hey hey that's somehow pretty sweet.
http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=100359
Painting clean. If you haven't seen it allready. The more chill the spot the better.

delonemonkey

01-12-2007, 01:23 AM

BouncingSoul, nice job finnaly painting, mad props you could use a little work but not bad for your first time.You will be really good if you keep going at it..
where are you from?

KestoFiasto

01-12-2007, 01:39 AM

heres a couple of my character sketchs i did awhile back
http://i10.tinypic.com/4799w8g.jpg
http://i1.tinypic.com/2yo78jq.jpg

VILE_ATX

01-12-2007, 01:43 AM

anymore crits

pick a name, find basic lettering styles, sketch sketch sketch sketch sketch sketch

blart.BOS

01-12-2007, 02:06 AM

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/dan-cor/DSC02095.jpg
char working on

http://i116.photobucket.com/albums/o32/dan-cor/DSC02094.jpg
trying some new letters, i don't know where i'm going with this one

criticals appreciated

tango 24

01-12-2007, 02:08 AM

alot of miths characters reminds me of some of new koncepts stuff

STIN5

01-12-2007, 02:14 AM

SON OF A BITCH I SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/333/s4200002ex9.jpg
CRITS!!!

well...actually i have seen worse but all in all i think it came out good.
this is my 1st sketch ever with colors and lettering and everything. if you cant read it I write STIN5 so yea I'm still toy but i like how this turned out

:edit: yes i know i misspelled color

KestoFiasto

01-12-2007, 02:26 AM

not bad if really your first sketch...your 3d is really fucked though...the top one aint bad...exept that really ugly arrow...im assuming thats your handstyle but you just made it into a throwie kinda

STIN5

01-12-2007, 02:33 AM

yea that is my hand style i have been practicing on that just like writing on stuff not like hardcore practice but yea my hand start to shake real bad when i was doing the arrow

prescription-rx

01-12-2007, 02:41 AM

this is what i drew like 2 years ago, when i was a freshman
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o172/plain-gabe/sickone.jpg
i only drew the fish, and the sick the rest were just friends things
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o172/plain-gabe/collab.jpg
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o172/plain-gabe/axeman.jpg

and heres my very first real attempt ever at graffiti... probably 3 years old.. after a year i quit writing and focused on other art
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o172/plain-gabe/1stgraf.jpg

E_B_A

01-12-2007, 03:01 AM

Here's some advice, se-rhythm.

PICK ONE NAME.

See, this is a common mistake in graffiti. Cats think every piece is different letters. It's not. Each piece is some variation of the same letters. True some writers have more than one set but you start simple, draw the same letters EXACTLY THE SAME OVER AND OVER and as you master those letters, you begin to develop skill with connections, fills, flow, extensions... all that good shit.

But if you constantly draw different shit each time you are not really practicing.

You have to MASTER those damn letters the same every time until you hate them.

I keep saying this over and over.

I hope some of you mother fuckers are listening because doing this really will make you better.

E_B_A

01-12-2007, 03:02 AM

prescription rx - I see a lot of potential in what you could be doing from that last sketch.

Take the advice from the post I made above this one and practice one set. Eventually, you'll be able to put those composition skills to good use.

E_B_A

01-12-2007, 03:04 AM

stins... big up for coming with simple letters. You guys should all take note and pay attention to how that cat composed his letters.

Your 3D is way off, though.

3D needs to make sense like the letters are carved blocks of wood. Pick one vanishing point and only one. If you don't quite get 3D yet, DON'T DO 3D! Do a drop shadow or nothing at all other than the letters.

E_B_A

01-12-2007, 03:06 AM

bouncing souls... I like that, actually. Throw a halo around it with the white and that's pretty damn good for a toy.

STIN5

01-12-2007, 03:20 AM

thanks EBA yea i knew my shit was way off but i thought why not try and learn from my mistakes and try and get better at it and understand it more so that was good advice

prescription-rx

01-12-2007, 03:40 AM

just did this.. fun fun...
probably a little much
thanks for all the help though EBA, im going to stick to the same stuff for a while
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o172/plain-gabe/stir7.jpg

VILE_ATX

01-12-2007, 05:14 AM

a bit much for a slap, your S dominates your other letters you need to work on flow

bugs

01-12-2007, 08:34 AM

Lase...do you know ANYTHING about graffiti..?...LASE...

well yer but i dont know as much as id like. which is why im on the toy thread to get sum help. dick.

bugs

01-12-2007, 08:41 AM

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/lasekwlfill.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/face_version_1_by_willfoofighter.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/laseblueandred.jpg

just to show i know a bit more than you think. not the best stuff in the world ok but at least i make the effort to paint without sum1 who just sketches dissin me. the only way you can learn to paint is paint.

bugs

01-12-2007, 09:27 AM

yer sorry for the bitchy comments and shitty post. lol. its just every1 is here to learn, not to be bitches at. id prefer if ne1 doesnt have nefin constructive to say, then they are better off not sayin nefin.

E_B_A

01-12-2007, 12:59 PM

bugs... paint skills are actually pretty impressive. Nice and clean letters.

But the letters themselves... need work.

But big up for keeping it simple.

bugs

01-12-2007, 01:04 PM

bugs... paint skills are actually pretty impressive. Nice and clean letters.

But the letters themselves... need work.

But big up for keeping it simple.

thx for the critz. nice to see some positive feed back. thx for the advise. ive been workin on my letters for a while now. just tryin to get a little help developing.

bugs

01-12-2007, 01:11 PM

I fail at painting... Halfassed rushed 3d and everything...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0572.jpg

:edit: Hahahahahaha, look at the top and bottom 3d's of my K... I suck

nah that looks pretty good for a first peice. letters are well structured. just need to paint more. get ur can control.

Elroy

01-12-2007, 04:50 PM

uh yah http://www.jumpingbaboon.com/fishta/Photo%2084.jpg

edoggg

01-12-2007, 05:02 PM

nice peach fuzz

BAITER

01-12-2007, 05:04 PM

all the kids in here keep trucking its a long process but your going to take alot of shit but dont let it stop you evolution comes in time!
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3010940.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3010998.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3019516.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/6.jpg

as of late
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3012123.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3012131.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3012147.jpg
bait

keep trucking i was in here when segway way lending advice stay humble!

BAITER

01-12-2007, 05:07 PM

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3010938.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3010937.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3010940.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y103/ekso808/S3010939.jpg

more old shit im still toy

coke0793

01-12-2007, 07:54 PM

I fail at painting... Halfassed rushed 3d and everything...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0572.jpg

:edit: Hahahahahaha, look at the top and bottom 3d's of my K... I suck

holy shit thats awesome.....:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :cool:

edoggg

01-12-2007, 08:19 PM

hahaha yea the tops a little wide but hey, its a fine lil peice. paint more, post more.

VILE_ATX

01-12-2007, 09:57 PM

more old shit im still toy

3ds wackkkkkkkkkk

coke0793

01-12-2007, 10:14 PM

going back to simples
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2168/picture020ii4.jpg

T_R_O_N

01-12-2007, 10:38 PM

^^^ do you ever do anything else other than throws?

KestoFiasto

01-12-2007, 10:50 PM

thats how your supposed to start off dumb ass...to learn basic letter structure and everything...its alot better then see some wack ass wildstyle that looks like it was bit off and chewed off mark eckos getting up..or some wack ass shit that looks retarted...

SE-Rythm

01-12-2007, 10:58 PM

some people only do throws. thats still chill keep writing.

SE-Rythm

01-12-2007, 10:59 PM

:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

going back to simples
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2168/picture020ii4.jpg

bouncingsoul

01-12-2007, 10:59 PM

Sorry about the rip and the wierd lighting from the sun haha

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0573.jpg

Still fucking with extensions

coke0793

01-12-2007, 11:02 PM

^^^ do you ever do anything else other than throws?

handstyles....:p
i dont do pieces i dont have the patience i guesss
any crits for it thoug...
knews that is fucking awesome

TALL_HOUSE

01-13-2007, 12:01 AM

bouncing soul, please paint, find a nice safe spot, piece it n then post the flicks cz u shouldnt rele be on this thread.

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 12:09 AM

go back a page he painted one

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 12:09 AM

kendoner

01-13-2007, 01:49 AM

throw-ups are my second love

Turtz

01-13-2007, 02:04 AM

going back to simples
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2168/picture020ii4.jpg

change your fuckin word.

SCEC is wack as fuck, and all your throwies look the same except for when you add a little point at the top or something.

coke0793

01-13-2007, 02:36 AM

fuck you?

dusetwo

01-13-2007, 02:49 AM

for real though , change it up it always looks the same

coke0793

01-13-2007, 02:51 AM

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5641/picture018uj8.jpg
is this different or still the "same"

vacuum cleaner

01-13-2007, 02:56 AM

bouncing, try to open up that s for a change. it's gettin' better, though

Turtz

01-13-2007, 03:05 AM

http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5641/picture018uj8.jpg
is this different or still the "same"

all you did was stretch the letters out. Try fuckin wit some different style Letters, i suggest looking through brickslayers for inspiration.

dusetwo

01-13-2007, 03:06 AM

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r50/dusetwoaof/scec.jpg
for example

Melbs Scum

01-13-2007, 03:49 AM

bouncing soul is fresh!!

VILE_ATX

01-13-2007, 03:54 AM

good question

KestoFiasto

01-13-2007, 04:03 AM

hahah DUSE2 hahaha i already tried helping him with my own sketch...didnt work..he stuck with his hollows with no fillin no 3d no outline same hollow just a different change in each one

VILE_ATX

01-13-2007, 04:03 AM

post your shit you made for duse

KestoFiasto

01-13-2007, 04:10 AM

i didnt sketch anything for duse...i did a sketch for coke... its 2 pages back

coke0793

01-13-2007, 04:57 AM

hahah DUSE2 hahaha i already tried helping him with my own sketch...didnt work..he stuck with his hollows with no fillin no 3d no outline same hollow just a different change in each one

why do fills matter.... seriously i could give a shit about colors id rather look at good letters that are hollow than shity letters with like 4 different colors
no saying my hollows are good im just saying
and the thing you posted for me before had no fill....
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1430/picture022eq0.jpg
this different...?
and people stop making sketches for me i apreciate it but ill probably never gain anything from it ive never bitten before and never want to and the whole inspriing thing doesnt work to well for me....
and for the last few things i posted were they good..?
thats all i want answered

Decay_RA

01-13-2007, 05:16 AM

dusetwo

01-13-2007, 05:30 AM

why do fills matter.... seriously i could give a shit about colors id rather look at good letters that are hollow than shity letters with like 4 different colors
no saying my hollows are good im just saying
and the thing you posted for me before had no fill....
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1430/picture022eq0.jpg
this different...?
and people stop making sketches for me i apreciate it but ill probably never gain anything from it ive never bitten before and never want to and the whole inspriing thing doesnt work to well for me....
and for the last few things i posted were they good..?
thats all i want answered
nah they wernt, need to try a completly different style man, shits just repeditive

coke0793

01-13-2007, 05:40 AM

fuck...none of them?
i didnt mean those orange highlighter things i was just trying to go different and failed horribly
like was this okay..?
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/2168/picture020ii4.jpg

kendoner

01-13-2007, 06:15 AM

no no no...fuck no...just do straight letters...the ones right on ur
keyboard...they look like this>>>SCEC<<<do that...it seems like ur whining...

Sike_Bomber

01-13-2007, 06:41 AM

no offence to anyone, but im sick of the SCEC throwies. idk, just do a piece or something.

VILE_ATX

01-13-2007, 06:45 AM

...harsh

coke0793

01-13-2007, 06:58 AM

what the fuck did i do to you.....and dont worry im gonna stop posting here so just shut the fuck up
and if you wanna battle fine i dont care

Zeeo

01-13-2007, 10:49 AM

god damn. get off coke. calling him a toy and shit.... wtf read the fucking name of this thread "TOYS post here"

Zeeo

01-13-2007, 11:30 AM

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/Cashandcadillacs/100_0113.jpg
critz please

Zeeo

01-13-2007, 11:34 AM

lol

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 12:21 PM

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 12:23 PM

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/Cashandcadillacs/100_0113.jpg
critz please

work on you handstyle. and there is already a kain.

+WAR+

01-13-2007, 12:36 PM

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/Cashandcadillacs/War01.jpg

any tips or crits?

colors are fucked up. good markers ran out...

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 12:46 PM

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/Cashandcadillacs/War01.jpg

any tips or crits?

colors are fucked up. good markers ran out...

ya go simple. real simple straight letters no colors then post it.

+WAR+

01-13-2007, 01:09 PM

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/Cashandcadillacs/War02.jpg

Simpler.

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 01:19 PM

ok. sketch the letters like the ones on your keyboard >>WAR<<

MithOneLfc

01-13-2007, 01:22 PM

If he likes throws...let him do throws..

baiter....not liking the painting but the skecthes are aight..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1-1.jpg

Crits on this quick one...i hate peices without colour..

+WAR+

01-13-2007, 01:29 PM

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/Cashandcadillacs/war03.jpg

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 01:42 PM

War- Nice i like it alot
mith- your fuckin amazing

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 01:43 PM

war do some bubble letters

+WAR+

01-13-2007, 01:55 PM

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/Cashandcadillacs/WAr04.jpg
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/Cashandcadillacs/War05.jpg

+WAR+

01-13-2007, 01:55 PM

fucking markings. i gotta do a better job eraseing

bugs

01-13-2007, 02:07 PM

Bugs, the point was not to bitch, he was only saying that your name "LASE" is already mad taken, and by some ill writers. You shouldn't take offence to that, because he's kinda right.
You don't see anyone writing COPE3 or anything.

But other than that, your painting is clean.

yer thats true. but think how many graffiti artists there are in the world and then think of how many tag names you can actually use. the likelyness is, most peoples tags are pobably being used by someone else too.

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 04:06 PM

war- keep sketching

kendoner

01-13-2007, 04:09 PM

http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/Cashandcadillacs/WAr04.jpg
http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q256/Cashandcadillacs/War05.jpg

dont write WAR...theres allready one in H-Town...and he wrecks

MithOneLfc

01-13-2007, 05:05 PM

is that even Graffiti ^^

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1121.jpg

connection peice

crits ?

thanks

coke0793

01-13-2007, 05:13 PM

mith i like that alot it flows good and stuff
http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/3712/picture024ci8.jpg
there 3d arent you glad i didnt do it before

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 05:15 PM

coke stick to your throws

KestoFiasto

01-13-2007, 06:05 PM

but the point is if you dont learn 3d your never gonna do it..if you never do straight letters...thats all i was saying was try something new instead of being a straihgt up bubble letter throwie person...so you could be a rounded writer..i wasnt trying to rip on you...and mine wasnt filled in because i drew it then poseted it....but coke everyones bit someone...or looks like their bitten...becasue almost every letters has been recycled for years and years now...im saying dont bite the whole thing..bite a little part you might like now...so later you can make your own shit...

SE-Rythm

01-13-2007, 06:15 PM

^ ya true dat

MithOneLfc

01-15-2007, 06:18 PM

WTF..Whys 12oz been down..shits shit..

i gots loadsss of new shit..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1-2.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/w.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/-9.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/-8.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/12-2.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/1121.jpg

CRITS THANKS :)

dripuk

01-15-2007, 06:20 PM

a random simple
crits???
43746

bouncingsoul

01-15-2007, 06:25 PM

Haven't sketched in a loooong while

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0575.jpg

marko

01-15-2007, 07:15 PM

mith good stuff keep them coming
knews also good stuff but u should do something with colors. cuz your letters look good all u need is color
heres a new sketch. critism
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i246/marko313/gold.jpg

Nodi

01-15-2007, 07:33 PM

Crits, Opinions, advice much appreciated

freakeenyc

01-15-2007, 07:56 PM

nice maz.

VILE_ATX

01-15-2007, 08:03 PM

faero, fix your letters, they suck. go with blocky letters look at maz, do that

Sike_Bomber

01-15-2007, 08:11 PM

Haven't sketched in a loooong while

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0575.jpg

dont you post sketches every day?

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 08:59 PM

is it me or did we have a battle here a few days ago

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 09:00 PM

and i had 80 posts... wtf is going on

dusetwo

01-15-2007, 09:02 PM

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r50/dusetwoaof/wasp.jpg
exhange i did

Sike_Bomber

01-15-2007, 09:22 PM

Hey war, please be serious with me. are you really trying your hardest, please, im not trying to be an ass at all, just.... seriously?

bugs

01-15-2007, 09:43 PM

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00098.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00097.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00096.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00095.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00094.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00093.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00092.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00089.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00088.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/shitfuck_00087.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/IMAGE_00044-1.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/IMAGE_00046.jpg

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r245/willfoofighter/IMAGE_00045.jpg

some old some new. critz much appretiated.

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 09:44 PM

crits

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/IMGP1354.jpg

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 09:47 PM

crits
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/IMGP1339.jpg

bugs

01-15-2007, 09:49 PM

[QUOTE=SE-Rythm;5084667]crits
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/IMGP1339.jpg[/QUOT
not too bad. i think you should work on your letters alot more before you think about using fills. and if you do want to do fills, you should use lightr colours.

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 09:53 PM

thanks. and bugs im still a toy but i think yours are dope.

bugs

01-15-2007, 09:56 PM

thanks. and bugs im still a toy but i think yours are dope.

lol. thx mn. ive been a bit lazy recently and ive actually looked back and realised i had sum better stuff b4. need to start working from that and get back into the swing of things really

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 09:59 PM

crits
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/IMAG0068.jpg

enigmatic

01-15-2007, 10:01 PM

dont you post sketches every day?

THere allllllll the same. all of em.

bugs

01-15-2007, 10:01 PM

crits
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/IMAG0068.jpg

try using a skinny cap on your outline, take your time a bit more, and cut in your lines.

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 10:03 PM

k thanks

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 10:03 PM

crits
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r132/SE-CTK/IMAG0071.jpg

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 10:06 PM

crits

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1328.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1327-1.jpg

MithOneLfc

01-15-2007, 10:10 PM

BUGS...DAYM...THAT 4TH ONE IS STRAIGHT UP DOPE .. keep that style mane..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/z.jpg

old style for meeee

crits

bugs

01-15-2007, 10:13 PM

BUGS...DAYM...THAT 4TH ONE IS STRAIGHT UP DOPE .. keep that style mane..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/z.jpg

old style for meeee

crits

i wud have kept up that style for that tag name "came" but i got threatned to be stabbed coz the name was to similar to sum1's tag called kane
fuckin petty but whatever.
thx for thecritz newayz. more crits appretiated.

bugs

01-15-2007, 10:14 PM

like the mith thing btw. lol. keep it up

MithOneLfc

01-15-2007, 10:24 PM

i wud have kept up that style for that tag name "came" but i got threatned to be stabbed coz the name was to similar to sum1's tag called kane
fuckin petty but whatever.
thx for thecritz newayz. more crits appretiated.

fucking bump..ooh..oochie woochie..:confused: ;) :o :lol: :huh: :eek: :rolleyes: :D

MithOneLfc

01-15-2007, 10:24 PM

BUGS...DAYM...THAT 4TH ONE IS STRAIGHT UP DOPE .. keep that style mane..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/rainlfc/z.jpg

old style for meeee

crits

bump

sory double ostt

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 10:25 PM

critz or advice

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1330.jpg

bugs

01-15-2007, 10:48 PM

bump

sory double ostt

you got ur letters down man. you should start experimenting with some fills. you done any actual peices yet???

VILE_ATX

01-15-2007, 10:55 PM

rythym mannnn do block letters, i know you dont want to but you need to.

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-15-2007, 10:57 PM

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/8532/dscf0053it7.jpg
crits and tips? anything. . it would be helpfull

VILE_ATX

01-15-2007, 11:00 PM

you want tips? get better markers, what is that white one with the black cap?

bugs

01-15-2007, 11:02 PM

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/8532/dscf0053it7.jpg
crits and tips? anything. . it would be helpfull

another tip. move the markers out of the way so we can ee it properly

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-15-2007, 11:03 PM

its a sanford markette infinity dry out prevention permanent marker. . that hrouw up i did is purple but it came out blue in that pic. . =/ [ i used the 2 markers on the left , the one mention`d above and the purple chisel tipp`d sharpie ]

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-15-2007, 11:06 PM

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6087/setb0mbww4.jpg is that one any better?. .

KestoFiasto

01-15-2007, 11:11 PM

i like it...i bet it would look better with a lower case T...capital one just looks kinda outta place

bugs

01-15-2007, 11:13 PM

VILE_ATX

01-15-2007, 11:13 PM

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6087/setb0mbww4.jpg is that one any better?. .

noice, lol is that highlighter? i like it but i would change the T

SE-Rythm

01-15-2007, 11:15 PM

dont write set there is a guy in NY and he kills.

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-15-2007, 11:15 PM

ok thanks. . and yes its a highliter. . =]

KestoFiasto

01-15-2007, 11:16 PM

work on your extensions....like 90 percent come outta no where...or just look ugly...like on the last one...in the first letter...and last letter.....or it might be an ugly ass L...if it is...id say go back to letter structure and figure out a better way to make it look...because right there just proves dont start off with wildstyles...

bugs

01-15-2007, 11:19 PM

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-15-2007, 11:20 PM

http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/6639/dscf0054rn6.jpg
another SET style. . concluding with all of the styles you`ve seen. . tell me which one you think is best. . and im gonna work on fixing the T in that last one.

KestoFiasto

01-15-2007, 11:21 PM

kinda blurry...but i like your throwie....you have one of the better throwies ive seen people draw up in here...the first one is better if you fix the T...2nd ones kinda more simple...still nice though...atleast you aint dropping some dumb wildstyle

zero939

01-15-2007, 11:24 PM

Hey Guys, im pretty new to graff so can i get some crits please.

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8386/ceronicejm7.jpg

marko

01-15-2007, 11:25 PM

bugs i like your fill in well some of them
can i get some critism
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i246/marko313/gold2.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i246/marko313/gold.jpg

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-15-2007, 11:25 PM

ok kool ; thanks. . lol

bugs

01-15-2007, 11:27 PM

bugs i like your fill in well some of them
can i get some critism
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i246/marko313/gold2.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i246/marko313/gold.jpg

make ur leters more the sam size. more i proportion.

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-15-2007, 11:36 PM

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/3541/banessa1qm3.jpg
BEST piece i`ve done so far. . for a friend.

bugs

01-15-2007, 11:37 PM

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/3541/banessa1qm3.jpg
BEST piece i`ve done so far. . for a friend.

sick. bloody hell. no offence but i didnt expect that from lookin at ur throwies

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-15-2007, 11:39 PM

http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7128/ivanfj5.png
<br>
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6812/ivansiitonamedominicanfzi2.png
MY NAME. . =]

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-15-2007, 11:40 PM

LOL thanks. . but the last two throwies arnt recent . thats when i first started fuckin` around wit SET . . i used to do MONSTER but i was like nahh thats too long for a toy like me.

Sike_Bomber

01-15-2007, 11:41 PM

damn monster, thats ill. but i disagree bugs, his throwies werent too bad at all

bugs

01-15-2007, 11:44 PM

damn monster, thats ill. but i disagree bugs, his throwies werent too bad at all

i didnt say they ere bad. i just didnt expect peices like that.

kendoner

01-15-2007, 11:53 PM

Monster...ur shits klean...i like ur throwie too

lucidBANG

01-16-2007, 12:11 AM

Nice job with the D.R. jumpoff. Represent!

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-16-2007, 12:14 AM

thankss. . yup yupp ! you dominican too?

zero939

01-16-2007, 12:36 AM

[QUOTE=zero939;5084909]Hey Guys, im pretty new to graff so can i get some crits please.

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8386/ceronicejm7.jpg[/QUOTE

Sorry its just a sketch...

SE-Rythm

01-16-2007, 12:36 AM

crits

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g278/blade04/IMGP1330.jpg[/QUOTE]

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-16-2007, 12:42 AM

letters are nice and simple. . so is the concept. . work on forming them better and your control over the marker? or does that marker suck?

SE-Rythm

01-16-2007, 12:54 AM

monster who are you talking to?

SE-Rythm

01-16-2007, 12:56 AM

if its me the pictures just blurry.

MONSTER//TNK//SPK

01-16-2007, 12:57 AM

SE-Rythm

VILE_ATX

01-16-2007, 01:03 AM

its not the picture, your lines arent clean, you need to work on controlling your pen

Sike_Bomber

01-16-2007, 01:04 AM

hey maz, i dont like your placement or color of the leters, but your letter structure is ok by waht i can tell

KestoFiasto

01-16-2007, 01:15 AM

alright i posted this alreay a night ago...but since it was down yesterday seems like alot of posts were lost so....READ THIS

to start off....begin with letters on your keyboard...example...THIS.....you have to do this to learn letter structure and having the letters all the same size and spaced out the right way dont think you can skip this and become good....and when you get your letters to like good like...THIS....you have start to move on to doing some bubble letters and start to rocking your own style and flow on letters....putting extensions on letters..putting 3d on your thowies...forcefield around the piece and things like this...and after that you can move onto more things after that...DONT START OFF DOING WILDSTYLES...THEY WILL COME OUT WACK AND UGLY...bite when needed too when your a toy...if you see something you like bite it...im not saying bite the whole thing...bite the part you like the most...sketch it over and over again...becasue you wont be bitting when your 5 years into the game bombing..this is the time to bite the most and learn different styles is when your a toy...also...go to brick slayers...find the nearest major city to you..or the city you live in...look at the people that write there...look through the lists of pictures and study em....also watch a ton a of graff movies...STYLE WARS, STATE YOUR NAME(search Tae Blanco on GOOGLE VIDEO..your welcome) MAN IN BLACK 2,3...BOMB THE SYSTEM,QUALITY OF LIFE...theres a bunch more...all of these can be found on google video....and when you start to paint...find a chill spot no one can really see..or you can get busted for...take your sketchs there to help you out...take you time and make it look nice...also...sketch and sketch and sketch...paint paint and paint...

poopslush

01-16-2007, 01:19 AM

some shit-
unfinished peice, I know its prob over my head, but whatever.
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f182/poopslush/mini-chill013.jpg
throwies arent really my thing, heres a quickie
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f182/poopslush/mini-chill015.jpg

toy as fuck. oh yes.
CRITS PLEASE

lucidBANG

01-16-2007, 01:23 AM

[QUOTE=zero939;5084909]Hey Guys, im pretty new to graff so can i get some crits please.

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8386/ceronicejm7.jpg[/QUOTE

Sorry its just a sketch...

Dope. :D

KestoFiasto

01-16-2007, 01:35 AM

your throwies is dope i like it smek.....

bud.

01-16-2007, 01:59 AM

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b223/gayasshomo/Picture001.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b223/gayasshomo/Picture002.jpg

crits?

poopslush

01-16-2007, 02:04 AM

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b223/gayasshomo/Picture001.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b223/gayasshomo/Picture002.jpg

crits?
first pic
the simple in the bottom right is pretty good, but that throwie is hard to read as fuck.
second pic
the throwie is a lot better and the one on the bottom is good, and try to stay consistent with the letters

poopslush

01-16-2007, 02:07 AM

http://img391.imageshack.us/img391/3467/picture032da7.jpg
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/9800/picture029sx8.jpg
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/32/picture028va0.jpg
exchnages

Dont take this as beef, but all the shit I've seen you do looks exactly the same. mix it up.

And those "n"s dont look like n's to me

bud.

01-16-2007, 02:08 AM

yeah thats a problem i gotta work on, and my camera is shitty so they where kinda bluury but thanks man

kendoner

01-16-2007, 02:37 AM

bud ur stuffs pretty good...keep it up...also work on ur r a little

b0nez

01-16-2007, 03:52 AM

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3701/bonez3kl6.jpg
:] first piece.

poopslush

01-16-2007, 04:06 AM

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3701/bonez3kl6.jpg
:] first piece.
wouldnt really call it a peice, but ill as hell nevertheless

VILE_ATX

01-16-2007, 04:08 AM

dope man, wicked handstyles too

b0nez

01-16-2007, 04:25 AM

http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/6582/bonez4tl8.jpg
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7601/bonez5wi5.jpg

iunno if im biting anyones style, but this is what i just now came up with :]

Sike_Bomber

01-16-2007, 04:29 AM

hey bonez, i like the bottom one, the top one seems a little unorganized

b0nez

01-16-2007, 04:32 AM

:D ok well ill work on making my stuff more organized.

Sike_Bomber

01-16-2007, 04:35 AM

i like the letter structure though

b0nez

01-16-2007, 04:37 AM

:D im tired of drawing for now so ill post alot more tomorrow. since theres exams and ill have most of the day off.

Sike_Bomber

01-16-2007, 04:41 AM

[QUOTE=zero939;5084909]Hey Guys, im pretty new to graff so can i get some crits please.

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/8386/ceronicejm7.jpg[/QUOTE

Sorry its just a sketch...

the 'e' is messy. and i dont like the sketchyness, if that makes sense. just not clean, keep working though.

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 04:47 AM

fuck u sike bomber change yur fuckn name wat do u noe bout graff. ill tell u shit dats wat now change yur name..if u wana battle for this name im up..fuck u suck asshole..im the real sike bitch

Sike_Bomber

01-16-2007, 04:52 AM

what? haha, go find a girl dude and chill.

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 04:54 AM

dude my bad i jus kicked my brothers ass..my bad
we koo..if not ill battle lyke my brother wanted us to

TRF

01-16-2007, 04:54 AM

you guys both write sike??

well then, this calls for a battle

VILE_ATX

01-16-2007, 04:55 AM

....your brother must get into the hawaiian threads too

Sike_Bomber

01-16-2007, 04:56 AM

damn dude, that surprised me i wont lie.

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 04:56 AM

haha sorrie man..

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 04:57 AM

you guys both write sike??

well then, this calls for a battle
if he wants to i will

TRF

01-16-2007, 04:57 AM

pussy

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 04:57 AM

....your brother must get into the hawaiian threads too
not really only i go into those threads

VILE_ATX

01-16-2007, 04:57 AM

hahahah this shits awnnnnnn

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 04:58 AM

tell him then if he wants to

VILE_ATX

01-16-2007, 04:58 AM

i think you should battle trf

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 04:59 AM

pussy
who??

TRF

01-16-2007, 04:59 AM

you motherfucker!

Sike_Bomber

01-16-2007, 05:00 AM

alright im not battling, tonight at least. later. but theres no way im fighting over the name, just for props or w/e.

VILE_ATX

01-16-2007, 05:00 AM

hahaha

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 05:01 AM

y not sike??

TRF

01-16-2007, 05:01 AM

beeyotch, the TRF will beat you both in a battle, any word

Sike_Bomber

01-16-2007, 05:02 AM

y not battle tonight? tired and not in the mood.
y not battle over the name? no fucking way im giving it up.

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 05:02 AM

sure bought dat..

TRF

01-16-2007, 05:04 AM

who wants to battle the amazing TRF, whassup nucka

Sike_Bomber

01-16-2007, 05:04 AM

i think your brothers back on the comp.:rolleyes:

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 05:05 AM

haha alright..yah i dont wana battle tonight..dont have my shit wit me right now..did u read the PM message??

Sike_Bomber

01-16-2007, 05:05 AM

fuck trf, go away, we'll pick this shit up later.

TRF

01-16-2007, 05:05 AM

i think you wanna quit talkin about his brother and start battling ME

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 05:05 AM

i think your brothers back on the comp.:rolleyes:
no hes not..hes crying i kicked his ass

VILE_ATX

01-16-2007, 05:05 AM

trf where you from?

TRF

01-16-2007, 05:06 AM

austin tejas beyyutch whatchu want

VILE_ATX

01-16-2007, 05:06 AM

your lyin

TRF

01-16-2007, 05:07 AM

nigga how da fuk you know

VILE_ATX

01-16-2007, 05:07 AM

what do you write

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 05:07 AM

im not in this i jus wana c so pics.

nydaBFC

01-16-2007, 05:08 AM

smesh, yeah, it seems like you're a little in over your head with that style. The throw is good though.

scec, i crit your shit all the time on BS.. It'd be nice to see something besides throws from you and maybe a diff style.

bonez, feeling your stuff., thats a throw not a piece just so you know. the pink one is nice and simple yet stylish. not feeling the orange and white one, but that is what a piece is. The white and tan one reminds me of a cat named Sevnine who posts on BombingScience. I like yours better though, its cleaner.
cero, its sloppy, sizes are off and it doesn't have an overall style. You're new though so just keep working at it

Don't see anything else on this page

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/01-15-07_4.jpg

I messed up on the right side of the A a little.. added a digital fill so it isn't too boring to look at.

crits?

TRF

01-16-2007, 05:08 AM

i have a couple names, but i mostly just tag one of them!

VILE_ATX

01-16-2007, 05:08 AM

what is it

TRF

01-16-2007, 05:08 AM

crio nigga

graff.addiction

01-16-2007, 05:10 AM

nyda its alright..best one i saw tonight then bones comes after u..

poopslush

01-16-2007, 05:39 AM

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/01-15-07_4.jpg

I messed up on the right side of the A a little.. added a digital fill so it isn't too boring to look at.

crits?

keep the width of the Y's tail more consistent, not tapered, and thats about it
nice stuff

nydaBFC

01-16-2007, 09:56 AM

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q35/nydacaun/01-16-07_1.jpg

Something kinda modified from my newest style.

¤Shark¤

01-16-2007, 10:15 AM

alright i posted this alreay a night ago...but since it was down yesterday seems like alot of posts were lost so....READ THIS

also watch a ton a of graff movies...STYLE WARS, STATE YOUR NAME(search Tae Blanco on GOOGLE VIDEO..your welcome) MAN IN BLACK 2,3...BOMB THE SYSTEM,QUALITY OF LIFE...theres a bunch more...all of these can be found on google video....

can you send me a link where i can dl Quality Of Life. Cause i can't find it anywhere. not even on google video.