Toys post here...

[BANK]

well im not lookin for a cookie or anything...im just lookin to see what i can do to make my shit better...

[GnomeToys]

There isn't anything really specific I would say, you've got a pretty clean simple there. It's art, so this is your style. Do what you want with it.

[El Producto]

Originally posted by BANK
well im not lookin for a cookie or anything

by signing up to 12oz you practically asked for someone to give you a cookie...the whole point of this site is people giving other people cookies...

anyhow, your stuff is actually quite good, go paint

[Evoke_Me]

what kind of cookies are we talking about

[yeaaaah baby]

mmm cookies. and lets see some painted shit if you have any

[THE CORONER]

no kidding

[rak it up]

http://www.photodump.com/direct/rak it up/DCP_0229.jpg'>

[i]Originally posted by **DatDude**
if it looks bad to you it prob looks bad to them

[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/rak it up/DCP_0230.jpg'>

i love chill spots... where no one can see what u fucked up

[yeaaaah baby]

keep your shit simple. that top one is hurt.

[rak it up]

yea i was just messing around btu i will start stickin to simple stuff...thanks

[yeaaaah baby]

you might as well just save your paint instead of fucking around with peices like that

[CrazyLazy]

Originally posted by yeaaaah baby
you might as well just save your paint instead of fucking around with peices like that

I believe you made your point. And at least he tries piecing. :lol: :lol: Hit me up, Yeah Baby, we still gotta go bombing soon.

[yeaaaah baby]

you owe me crazylazy. i got a flick for you also. you email me, i dont know your addy

[Swiffer Jet]

that Tear piece is looking hurt hahahahahaha

keep it simple.

[yeaaaah baby]

^^ thank you for restating that.

[Swiffer Jet]

anytime.

[**DatDude**]

yo nigga, them are soooooooooooo garbage...

[mef_one]

dude the piece looks killed

[JeezMan]

That Keys shit looks a lot better than that tear junk, once again, keep it simple...

[rak it up]

wow ok guys thanks for the criticism.... i get it ...go simple

[THE CORONER]

EEXXACCTTLLYYY
thank god someone finally gets it

[Fr8Junkie]

Originally posted by **DatDude**
yo nigga, them are soooooooooooo garbage...

yo nigga you dont have much space to be talking shit

[yeaaaah baby]

Originally posted by Fr8Junkie
yo nigga you dont have much space to be talking shit
drow

[moosepoopmat]

yo bank...your pulling your shit together without a doubt....thats awsome....go to a chill wall after you find a name and a sketch you really like....do you have an official name? or are you just toying with every letter till you find something?

[BANK]

fuck.... im feelin AGES I have got a lot done with it but apparentley there are a lot of ages out there..and i liek GESA but i dont know...maybe SAGE... i got some sketchs for sage i ll post them in a little while..

[MS.rokkaz]

alright here is some stuff...
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE-SELF.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE01.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE02.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE03.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE04.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE05.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/SELF01.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/SELF02.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/self03.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/self04.jpg'>
what yall think..

[BANK]

alright tryin this out SAGE..first sketch .....
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/nix_hex_205/AGES-SAGE.jpg'>

[Superbrew]

there's already a guy who writes self, but keep those sketchs goin

[jender403]

DID ANYONE ELSE BESIDES MYSELF NOTICE THAT Evoke_Me BIT MR.WIGGLES LETTERS ??? THERE ON MRWIGGLES.BIZ

damn evoke you totally fuckin bit his letters:confused: [IMG]http://www.photodump.com/direct/gameover215/bite.jpg'>

[Superbrew]

nice one detective, come on evok, try a little harder :D

[BANK]

Bump for wanted criticism on AGES n SAGE...

[MS.rokkaz]

bump..yall give me some feedback...

[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE-SELF.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE01.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE02.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE03.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE04.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE05.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/SELF01.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/SELF02.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/self03.jpg'>
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/self04.jpg'>

what yall think..

[why write?]

pose...work on your letters, too sloppy...and bank those sketches are dope, dont write ages though, nice work though[on both sketches]....and evok, your a fucking toy...stop biting letters you fag.

[BANK]

alright...
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/wild_irish_rose/SAGE001.jpg'>
comments and suggestions

[CrazyLazy]

Originally posted by BANK
what yall think

Your stuff isn't bad at all man. I think that the only thing you really need to work on is the handstyle. But that's my personal opinion.

[BANK]

Bump for wanted comments and suggestons on BANK's SAGE

[earo 35]

im gonna give MS.rokkaz some help....
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE-SELF.jpg'>
on this one, self and pose need to work on your handstyle, im not really feeling those S's or L's, and your S and E dont flow with your your L or F. the solution to this, is to practice handstyle, write your name over and over and over and over, dont stop, personally, i wouldnt make my letters so round, but hey, it may be easier for you.
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE03.jpg'>
on thise one, pose, youre on the right track, but theres always room for improvement. you need to work on your 3-d, you have the same problem on your S, and you need to work on that P do it in one stroke instead of 2

[earo 35]

[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE01.jpg'>
on this one, good choice of color, but the green kills it.... you made your hole on the E too big, and all the squigglys around the letter... get rid of them, its a throwie, keep it as simple as possible.
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE02.jpg'>
good shit, i like this one.
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/POSE04.jpg'>
you need to work on letter structure, i dont like this one.

[earo 35]

[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/poseyourstuff/SELF01.jpg'>
you need to work on 3-d, its horrible, you gotta start simple, dont go into peices until you have your throwies and handstyle down. and thats all i can say for the rest of them, work on your simples before you move onto more complex stuff.

[ChaR'04]

[img]http://www.mkonji.theequineschool.org/minz2.jpg'>

comments?

[**DatDude**]

the last ones lookin mad hype, i like it MINZ. clean it up a lil, like the black shit in backround other then that it looks good

[ChaR'04]

Thanks . The black shit is from the other side of the paper.. yeah im cheap. :cool:

[**DatDude**]

POTENTIAL, yes, yes, yes you have it

[THE CORONER]

656 the neibourgh of the beast

[ChaR'04]

Originally posted by **DatDude**
POTENTIAL, yes, yes, yes you have it

Just keep practicing aye.

[ChaR'04]

[img]http://www.mkonji.theequineschool.org/minz3.jpg'>

MINS

any better?

[holycrapRUN]

it looks to me like you are hiding so-so letters with a nice coloring job.

[THE CORONER]

yeah i agree dont cover up pieces with colors if ur pieces suck....

[StarzAbove]

Letters letters letters.
3D is ill tho

[THE CORONER]

yeah

[ChaR'04]

Its true, 3D and fills are the only parts im good at.

[oddz]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00452792f00000011.jpg'>
any help?

[**DatDude**]

Originally posted by oddz
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00452792f00000011.jpg'>
any help?

do you honestly think you need help? all you need to do is more

[oddz]

thanks but i ment can you giv me any tips on 3d or anythin lyk that?

[StarzAbove]

What does it say! Cause it looks pretty ill

[earo 35]

Originally posted by StarzAbove
What does it say! Cause it looks pretty ill

[THE CORONER]

i personally love that piece man
keep it up

[**DatDude**]

Originally posted by StarzAbove
What does it say! Cause it looks pretty ill
?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????

[THE CORONER]

whats with the question marks
i wanna know what it says to my life depends on it:rolleyes:

[oddz]

it says oddz is it hard 2 read?

[StarzAbove]

I see it now, still hott but i don't know much about the good or bad dealing with 3d pieces

[oddz]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00452792f00000014.jpg'>
heres a new character. wot u fink?

[8907808]

Constructive criticism. Please.

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07alsamo/DSC00584.jpg'>


[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07alsamo/DSC00583.jpg'>

[why write?]

just practice, and dont start peicing just yet...work on your throw, round more edges...make letters go with eachother, let everything flow...every letter looks diff on yours

[some]

hello all.
i think this is the best thread to dump my stuff.
heres one.

[img]http://www.hot.ee/some/sketsahsome.gif'>

edit. another one. ARMASTUS means love in estonian.

[img]http://www.hot.ee/some/sketsalove.gif'>

[8907808]

ups for more feed back on my ish....and some I like that second one.

[**DatDude**]

Originally posted by 8907808
Constructive criticism. Please.

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07alsamo/DSC00583.jpg'>

wow son, not good at all.

[THE CORONER]

yeah man im sorry and i do know that this is the toy thread
but please, look at graff around u and on this site, do u reall ythink that is very good at all?

[**DatDude**]

i think you tried to hard man go back to the A B C's and find the letters your most comfortable with, take it from there

[moosepoopmat]

understand individual letter structure first...then start putting shit together....look at simple bubble letters...then expand from that...but not untill you can make it look clean...

[THE CORONER]

[IMG]http://www.photodump.com/direct/THE CORONER/blum.jpg'>

[mef_one]

[img]http://pics.fotango.com/pictures/0400609321_001P.jpg'>
defs

opinions?

[oddz]

defs the pic dint load. neway heres anuva sketch :D
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00452792f00000016.jpg'>

[Gates]

Originally posted by oddz
defs the pic dint load. neway heres anuva sketch :D
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00452792f00000016.jpg'>

:confused:

toy thread?......nice though

[StarzAbove]

Get that out the toy thread and into the 3d pages

[AORAone]

and the face you did earlier, move that too the character thread. good stuff.

[Swiffer Jet]

looks like two spiders got mangled in a totem piece.

[oddz]

haha it dus kinda dnt it

[escapeartist]

bein humble

[elitebish]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00394315f00000025.jpg'>

eh

[THE CORONER]

WHERE AM I
WHAT THREAD IS THIS??

[Issac Brock]

what do you think?
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v345/Sort1/able.gif'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v345/Sort1/sort_pink_and_brown.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v345/Sort1/sort_orange_and_yellow.jpg'>

[OmenTFC]

^^
dope...did you use adobe photoshop with those??????

[Dr.Goe]

??? to me it looks like he used markers...lol

[StarzAbove]

The able one is nice

[8907808]

still trying...damn man I fuckin hate my camera, if youre looking at the real drawing instead of a picture of it it doesnt look that bad...but since its too much trouble for me to invite all of 12oz to my house just to look at a toy sketch, here it is. Be nice.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07a...mo/DSC00586.jpg (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07alsamo/DSC00586.jpg)

[Swiffer Jet]

you need to keep your letters simple and basic. and please...don't add so many highlights...or at least colour the entire umm...tool.

[yeaaaah baby]

yeah its the camera's fault that your shit looks wack... riiiiight.
just keep it simple!! how many times does this have to be said? do alot of block letter peices. make sure that your letters are all the same widths and all that fun stuff. when you get a decent block letter down show us.

[OmenTFC]

Originally posted by Dr.Goe
??? to me it looks like he used markers...lol
naw, i know he used markers, but did he use photoshop to make the picture look better??????

[THE CORONER]

paint the streets white
death is the standard breach for a complex prize...

[**DatDude**]

Originally posted by 8907808

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07a...mo/DSC00586.jpg (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07alsamo/DSC00586.jpg)

SOOOOOOOOOOOO DISGUSTING MAN REALLY REALLY BAD

[mef_one]

owch

[decomposed32]

word its so hurt it makes me wanna shoot myself

[decomposed32]

im just tryin to come up... i think its just alright

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00457012f00000001.jpg'>
Feedback please

[brasse hed]

i like that jus get rid of the bar extensions on the end of evry thing otha wise jkeep it up

[AWProvidence]

some new throws
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0911.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0913.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0912.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v291/jojoipm/HPIM0915.jpg'>

FEEDBACK PLEASE

[rinse]

Originally posted by oddz
defs the pic dint load. neway heres anuva sketch :D
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00452792f00000016.jpg'>
damn that piece is sick!
it just made my day. i love it when shit like that sneaks up on you, you know, when you dont expect it.
nice piece and great placement.

[BLaCkNiGGa]

all this toys shit is making my eyes go crazy.:crazy: :lol: :lick: :lick: :lick: :lick: :lick:

[THE CORONER]

i like that black and white one a little bit up higher
that one link is fuckin so weak i cant even believe it...

[HAL*LOVE*U]

WTF DO U EVEN WRITE WHAT? ARE U DOING ON THIS FORUM I NEVER SEEN NE OF UR SHIT ATEAST SO ME SUMPING TO SHUT ME UP FUCKING POST WHORE POST A FLIK OR JUST STOP GIVING PEOPLE ADVICE UR ANNOYING THE FUCK OUT OF ME

[THE CORONER]

a.where the fuck are your hot flicks king
b.why would i use my graff name as my name on an internet site?i think its a little pretentious and no one really cares anyways
c.and i reall y dont care if im annoying you at all, your just trying to be like everyone else and try to get some e-friends by knocking THE CORONER because everyone else does, your just like thos try hards who rock the mad skate clothes but have never been on a skateboard in theyre lives
d.i could see you being one of those kids.
e.and what city are you king in, wheres your crazy wildstyle burners anyways??

[Swiffer Jet]

Originally posted by HAL*LOVE*U
WTF DO U EVEN WRITE WHAT? ARE U DOING ON THIS FORUM I NEVER SEEN NE OF UR SHIT ATEAST SO ME SUMPING TO SHUT ME UP FUCKING POST WHORE POST A FLIK OR JUST STOP GIVING PEOPLE ADVICE UR ANNOYING THE FUCK OUT OF ME
one word: GRAMMAR

[HAL*LOVE*U]

wtf the only thing that pisses me off is u give mad people advice nad i have never once seen ne bit of ur graf and when once did i say i was king and fuck u can u atleast shut me up by posting a goddam flik of ur graf


and also i do skate im in a skate krew go to www.toothfilms.com (http://www.toothfilms.com) go to archives and go to nike mikey and watch that and then if u still think i suck and still think im a poser i dont kno what to say

[HAL*LOVE*U]

yes i am a fucking 13 yr old short ass mexican

[brasse hed]

not bein nosy ye but you make it seem like your some sick skater wiv big balls when your not. your definately not a poser but if compare yourself to some of the skaters who use this shite (including myself) your pretty shite so if i were you id respect your elders. no beef ye!

[THE CORONER]

a skate krew? haha are you kidding me
ive been sponsored before and have doen design work for fuckin skate companies, so give me a fuckin break and you and your krew can go lick balls for all im concerned KING GRAFF

[HAL*LOVE*U]

but i am good for my age and its not really a skate drew its more of a gruop of skaters that chill and put a site together and i am sposnerd by skaters island and can we just squash what i started even tho ive never seen ne of ur stuff

[akrbone]

[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/DSCF0327.jpg'>some new shit,thanx stars above for the advice!, the lower part of the b aint done cuz i was sketchin somewhere n had2give the penz back:o

[THE CORONER]

Originally posted by HAL*LOVE*U
but i am good for my age and its not really a skate drew its more of a gruop of skaters that chill and put a site together and i am sposnerd by skaters island and can we just squash what i started even tho ive never seen ne of ur stuff


sure whatever you say but i gota know
why is it in your apparent part in that skate vid you seem to startt out as a really short person and then you grow a signifcant amount
i think its different skaters and your just a lying sack of shit

[THE CORONER]

Originally posted by HAL*LOVE*U
but i am good for my age and its not really a skate drew its more of a gruop of skaters that chill and put a site together and i am sposnerd by skaters island and can we just squash what i started even tho ive never seen ne of ur stuff


sure whatever you say but i gota know
why is it in your apparent part in that skate vid you seem to startt out as a really short person and then you grow a signifcant amount
i think its different skaters and your just a lying sack of shit

[brasse hed]

coroner who were u sponsered by, iwas on unabomber in the uk. your ALRIGHT for your age n how long have u been skating?O yeah you see how you were annoyed by being called a poser well skaters dont like it wen others make it seem like theyre the shiznit. bump for skater heds and peace!!!!

[Superbrew]

Uk skate scene is lookin good these days, not the same as a few years back

[brasse hed]

ye definately all the tony hawk generation are realising theyr shite n quitting, its great!!!

[HAL*LOVE*U]

that was me the whole time on the vid look at the face its just cuz its spread out over a year just short clips from shit

[**DatDude**]

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v240/hypes4life/Legal%20Graff%20Crew/cers.jpg'>

[Superbrew]

Brasse head, drop me an e-mail dude, sickinthemind@hotmail.com

[BZA-One]

[img]http://9.pichold.com/sketch_of_stuff_2.jpg'>

[BANK]

havent posted anything in here in awhile...
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/wild_irish_rose/SCthrowie.jpg'>
...oh yeah im missin the 3d on the bottom of the C ... just noticed that..

anyways ..what yall think...

[**DatDude**]

Name already takin, change it bub

BZA-one, :eek: WEIRD :eek: but fresh

[BZA-One]

bump for comments, please

[dase*ONER]

lol, who cares how fuckin good u are at skating. have some damn fun, but im on NK's flow team. i love people who brag n put other people down cuz they are "better". i really doubt that but hey, its all about fun. try skating a pool instead of a handrail.

[dase*ONER]

lol, who cares how fuckin good u are at skating. have some damn fun, but im on NK's flow team. i love people who brag n put other people down cuz they are "better". i really doubt that but hey, its all about fun. try skating a pool instead of a handrail.

[BobotheHobo]

its kinda taken.. the other writer uses a k not a c

[BANK]

where is SEKO from???

[akrbone]

Originally posted by akrbone
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/DSCF0327.jpg'>some new shit,thanx stars above for the advice!, the lower part of the b aint done cuz i was sketchin somewhere n had2give the penz back:o feedback plz?

[why write?]

its a good style, make everything porportional, keep your lines straight, keep the same amount of space in between each line...keep them parralel, get rid of that extension on the R....keep practicing, your gettin better

[BANK]

yall hook me up with some criticism on my letters of the SECO... thanks
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/wild_irish_rose/SCthrowie.jpg'>

[8907808]

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07alsamo/DSC00594.jpg'>
nisus
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/07alsamo/DSC00593.jpg'>
feedback please, and sorry about the size

[BANK]

your tryin to hard to make it look like graff....you need to start out real simple... use the letters on your keyboard and evenly space them... dont overlap right now...keep it simple.. open up your letters...dont restrict them and remeber ...no extentions..no arrows..for right now

[earo 35]

Originally posted by BANK
yall hook me up with some criticism on my letters of the SECO... thanks
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/wild_irish_rose/SCthrowie.jpg'>
youre getting alot better, theres not much to criticise, its good, but its too simple, add more letters make more flicks, and i like your handstyle, its dveloping alot better, keep up the good work and post more flicks...

[THE CORONER]

way to go bro way to start simple i love it

[Pen15]

what with you girls. why do some people think that the more squigly your letters are, the more graffiti like it is.

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v21/waestedwonder/toy.jpg'>



p.s. coroner is gay. hate hate hate on you.
[img]http://www.whatsbetter.com/static/images/1175.jpeg'>

[iloveboxcars]

Originally posted by earo 35
youre getting alot better, theres not much to criticise, its good, but its too simple, add more letters make more flicks, and i like your handstyle, its dveloping alot better, keep up the good work and post more flicks...

it isn't too simple


i think it's nice.

[brasse hed]

the shit on this page burns my eyes more than that fat naked guy.
im not beffing with you bank but i honestly dont think you should give feedback when your not all that good yourself. im not trying to dis you but yno wat i mean mate.
But you were rite about that person before.

[El Producto]

Originally posted by brasse hed
ye definately all the tony hawk generation are realising theyr shite n quitting, its great!!!


theres nothing wrong with tony hawks games..and if you like the song in your signature.....

well i wont go any further...but yeah, tony hawks games are fucking sweet, i gotta admit though, they do seem to commercialise graf, especially in the upcoming thug2

[brasse hed]

el producto: nah i was referring to the tony hawk genertion of skating not graff but your right. wen i say the "tony hawk generation" i mean the kids who played tony hawk's games and thought "this looks realy easy i bet id be the best in the world". btw i love the tony hawk games.
o yeah that song is jokes along with baby cakes. no i dont like it but its funny

[El Producto]

yeah, them songs are funny because they are crap though..most of the bullshit you get on channel u, just a bunch of rudeboys thinking they ca rap, talking about killing people and dressing as if they are american, fucking losers..but whats worse is the dickheads who text into the channel looking for a fuckin girlfreind it usually goes something like this "723, im a buff gal, wot u sayin? wots ur numba?" "my numba is *********"...when will people realise that they dont allow numbers on the screen?? im rambling on now, but my point remains: FUCK CHANNEL U

[**DatDude**]

Originally posted by BANK
where is SEKO from???

716 meng

[brasse hed]

that channel needs to get shut down.best is thers ppl frum my estate who have videos on it n they all bop around like badmen now.
its not an acheivement to have a low budget uk garage video on a channel wer the only ppl who watch are the ones with videos on it.

[El Producto]

hahaha, yeah theres some boy on my road whos in one of them videos, funny shit when i saw him standing there with some angry look on his face

the sad thing is that channel u have a few decent videos, but they never play them..they need to get more jehst, some mud fam, task force, braintax, moorish delta...anyway, back to topic

[BANK]

Originally posted by **DatDude**
716 meng
so New York...
still never heard of him.....

[brasse hed]

ye im more into the drum n bass and the boo cru

[BANK]

alright heres with all the letters
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/wild_irish_rose/SECO002.jpg'>

[BANK]

??????^^^^^^??????

[earo 35]

Originally posted by BANK
alright heres with all the letters
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/wild_irish_rose/SECO002.jpg'>
a lot better man, and for iloveboxcars it is nice, but its too simple to give him help.... now bank, think of other words and write them using that same style... dont get stuck on the same letters, the more letters you use, the more ideas you get... post more flicks ;)

[BZA-One]

[img]http://1.pichold.com/bza_one_graff1.jpg'>

[Swiffer Jet]

[img]http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon27.gif'> [img]http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon27.gif'> [img]http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon27.gif'> [img]http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon27.gif'> [img]http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon27.gif'> [img]http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon27.gif'> [img]http://www.12ozprophet.com/ubb/icons/icon27.gif'>

[THE CORONER]

i definately concur

[Dr.Goe]

damn he BURNS!!!!!

[yeaaaah baby]

i'm diggin that seco

[akrbone]

http://www.photodump.com/direct/akrb/newsketch.jpg good seco, now plz compliment/critisize

[BANK]

^^^^your still tryin t hard to make it look liek graff.... start out simple....this is an old flick of mine but its better to start off and move from there....
http://img66.photobucket.com/albums/v200/bank205/BANK3.jpg
yeah its really simple...but its a good start....try doin stuff leik that first...
and try to keep all your sketches clean... that looks gross mostly because of the coloring... the letters arent that great ...lose the extensions and the cuts n stuff..just keep it simple for now...learn to spae the letters evenly and makeing them the same size.....thats my 2 cents

[akrbone]

no i just messed up my damn outline on my A when it should b part of the k

[oddz]

i fink dat akrb was gd. nufin rong wiv ur lettas its jus da colorin needs 2 b neata

[earo 35]

Originally posted by akrbone
no i just messed up my damn outline on my A when it should b part of the k
BANK's got a point, you need to start out simple before you try for the more complex

[THE CORONER]

^^ dude looking at all the flicks uve posted, id take that advice to heart as well man

[BZA-One]

[img]http://9.pichold.com/spy_graff.jpg'>

[yeaaaah baby]

Originally posted by oddz
i fink dat akrb was gd. nufin rong wiv ur lettas its jus da colorin needs 2 b neata
writing like this makes you cool. keep it up

[THE CORONER]

haha no shit
dude make up your own thread and teach us all how to use 13 year old girl ebonics

because im itching to learn how to
so please show me

[Issac Brock]

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: hahahahahahahahahah--a rare time when ill say lol and actually be laughing out loud--:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

[yeaaaah baby]

akrb: so far the only person that has liked your work is oddz. oddz fink dat uR wrk iz gud. the rest of 12oz thinks you should go simple.

[THE CORONER]

thankyou and no shit
dude stop beefing and shutup and pratice
thats all i gotta say about that and about you EVER again

[Blauh]

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/arghteaaaa/angel.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/arghteaaaa/WTF.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/arghteaaaa/intertwined.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/arghteaaaa/curly.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/arghteaaaa/Bensbomb.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/arghteaaaa/trippleentente.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v204/arghteaaaa/RANDOM.jpg'>

The last is the most recent........ The start is the oldest.

[HAL*LOVE*U]

if i were u i would go with the second to last picture nice style and there clean

[THE CORONER]

meh i didnt really like em i thot that you needed to resize them

[THE CORONER]

but yeah if you could make the lines simpler on that second last one itd be hot

[StarzAbove]

2nd to last flic has the best letters

[Blauh]

Sweet... I didn't like any of those styles actually. I have one that I've got pretty nice I'll post it up tonight my time.

[MOOGLE?]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00461689f00000008.jpg'>

[THE CORONER]

i kinda like those characters i guess

[Dr. Dazzle]

Originally posted by BZA-One
[img]http://1.pichold.com/bza_one_graff1.jpg'>

What in the jesus is this monstrosity??

[BobotheHobo]

what is that thing supposed to say

[BANK]

alright.... used sharpies this time.... the lines ijn the 3d look bad i was trying to do them with a silver sharpie that has a squashed tip.. and the clouds suck but ill make em better next time....

but what do yall hitnk
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/wild_irish_rose/SECO.jpg'>

[THE CORONER]

i like the letters theyre clean

[PAID:one]

looks good BANK. but try not to put two dark colors together. <<<reffering the the blue forcefield you got next the black outline.

unless the values are in direct contrast.

[PAID:one]

Originally posted by PAID:one
looks good BANK. but try not to put two dark colors together. reffering the the blue forcefield you got next the black outline.

unless the values are in direct contrast.

[StarzAbove]

tru that colors are too dark can'r see at night if painted on a wall but you are improving

[BANK]

really i dont know how to color that well.... whats the best way to go about learning color schemes and such

[THE CORONER]

i just do the background first but thats just me

[ChaR'04]

[img]http://www.mkonji.theequineschool.org/minz4.jpg'>

Says minz, I have no idea whether this is good or not.

[in2_thevoid]

Originally posted by ChaR'04
[img]http://www.mkonji.theequineschool.org/minz4.jpg'>

Says minz, I have no idea whether this is good or not.



put it on a train.. i would flick it.



*ifyoucouldgetitascleanasitisthere.

[why write?]

BANK - great fucking work, but yeah imma have to agree..change the colors...and i dont like double-outline, keep it up

[MOOGLE?]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00461689f00000015.jpg'>

moooooooooooore than meeets the eeeeeeeyyyyyyyeeeee!!!

[JeezMan]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000315.jpg'>
dont got ne sketches...heres some painted work. comments please

[earo 35]

Originally posted by MOOGLE?
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00461689f00000015.jpg

moooooooooooore than meeets the eeeeeeeyyyyyyyeeeee!!!
if it werent for the fact that i had those transformers as a kid, i would tell you to get the fuck off this forum.

[brasse hed]

bank are you in oceanside,n y cuz i saw a seco outline on a truck lookin like urs ????
im here on vacation by the way

[Mistery]

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mistery510/Wider.jpg'>


give me heka tips and dont just say "go simple at first...."..i need more than that

[Mistery]

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mistery510/Scan0002.jpg'>

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mistery510/Scan0001.jpg'>



any tips?

[BANK]

Originally posted by brasse hed
bank are you in oceanside,n y cuz i saw a seco outline on a truck lookin like urs ????
im here on vacation by the way

...dude i dont even know where that is...i live down where the cotten grow

[StarzAbove]

Go Simpler than that

[Mistery]

Originally posted by StarzAbove
Go Simpler than that



simpler how?

[PAID:one]

it's pretty simple.

you just need to go in there and tweek it up a bit. A little tightening here, a little funk there......

[PAID:one]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mistery510/Scan0001.jpg'>

[i]Originally posted by PAID : one
it's pretty simple.

you just need to go in there and tweek it up a bit. A little tightening here, a little funk there......

[img]http://www.boominent.com/wider.jpg'>
na'meen?

[brasse hed]

Originally posted by BANK
...dude i dont even know where that is...i live down where the cotten grow

that means 1 of 2 things either u painted a seco outline on a truck and it ended up in new york or theres another seco.
?????????????????????????????????????????????

[Mistery]

Originally posted by PAID:one
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mistery510/Scan0001.jpg'>



[img]http://www.boominent.com/wider.jpg'>
na'meen?


haha thanks

[akrbone]

Originally posted by JeezMan
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00407452f00000315.jpg'>
dont got ne sketches...heres some painted work. comments please i like the majik

[BANK]

sorry for the sloppyness
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/wild_irish_rose/seco003.jpg'>
...

[yeaaaah baby]

ay bank when do we get to see some painted work?

[Issac Brock]

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v345/Sort1/sort1.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v345/Sort1/erasdw3.jpg'>
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v345/Sort1/AAAA0018.jpg'>
:confused:

[m o r s]

so yeah somebody please tell me what im doing wrong with my letters and stuff.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v67/willscarsgoaway/Picture060.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v67/willscarsgoaway/bed35.jpg

[StarzAbove]

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v345/Sort1/erasdw3.jpg'>

This is ill

[Hokus]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00463845f00000001.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00463845f00000002.jpg'>
[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00463845f00000003.jpg'> [img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00463845f00000004.jpg'>

tell me what you think, sorry its in pencil..

[BANK]

Originally posted by yeaaaah baby
ay bank when do we get to see some painted work?
next few days....

[yeaaaah baby]

excellent
hokus: Dont outline tags. i'm diggin your character.

[Hokus]

i don't usually i was just outlineing it so you could see it n' shit, thanks for the tips though..word @ willie, you wanna colab on some stickers let me know , email me or just say somthing about it on the board

[BANK]

ok...i promise ill have a painted peice the next time i post but check this out and give me some feedback... just tryin shit out...
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/wild_irish_rose/avec01.jpg'>

[why write?]

im feelin it BANK, just dont double outline your whole piece, 1 color around the whole thing is cool....thats just what i think, but if you like it, then you like it

[yeaaaah baby]

bank: you like those colors huh? you have consistent pieces, so just work on that handsteez

[BANK]

yeah i jsut liek the combinatiosn for some reason.. plus i dont have many paint markers.....btw that written avoc in that pic is not workin on handstyle just wrote it ther when i was think of shit...

[BANK]

any other criticism....

[MOOGLE?]

Originally posted by earo 35
if it werent for the fact that i had those transformers as a kid, i would tell you to get the fuck off this forum.




who me?



you must be talking to the other moogle who signed up on 12 oz the same time i did..that dude is fucking toy as hell..

i must agree with you on the transformer picture though..weak shit

[Issac Brock]

^^^^^^
anybody have any feedback on the shit i posted?

[why write?]

^ i enjoyed the first painted flick...nice style

[Hokus]

i thought it looked really good..

[BANK]

Originally posted by Issac Brock
^^^^^^
anybody have any feedback on the shit i posted?

all i have to say is work on that R other than that i like all of it...

[akrbone]

liked the 1st Sort alot

[rize415]

Originally posted by why write?
im feelin it BANK, just dont double outline your whole piece, 1 color around the whole thing is cool....thats just what i think, but if you like it, then you like it
nothing wrong with a little double forcefielding.

[alcohol]

[img]http://picserver.student.utwente.nl/view_image.php/7FS055FXJV52/p.jpeg'>

[StarzAbove]

Go simpler man

[laybeuh]

Originally posted by StarzAbove
Go simpler man


DONT LISTEN TO HIM.. GO WILDER GO WILDER!! MAN JUST GO ON ARTCRIMES.COM THEY HAVE ILL DOPE BURNER STYLES YOU CAN BITE AND LEARN FROM THAT JUST KEEP DRAWING MAN THEN GET GOODER AND THEN PEOPLE WILL TELL YOU YOURE COOL AND YOULL TELL EVERYONE AT SCHOOL YOUR A GRAFFITI WRITER AND THEN YOU WONT KNOW HOW TO PAINT AND EVERYONE WILL HATE YOU AND YOULL WONDER WHY GOD HATES YOU SO MUCH... AWWW THE LIFE OF A PAPER CHASER.. CALL ME SO DOPE ONERSKI... ONER ONER ONER

[Propaganda]

then talk shit online to other artist to make yourself feel better than everyone else.

[KanFeumz]

Originally posted by m o r s
so yeah somebody please tell me what im doing wrong with my letters and stuff.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v67/willscarsgoaway/Picture060.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v67/willscarsgoaway/bed35.jpg the top yellow one.....the M work on the M looks like it got hit with a hammer and the S looks like its taking a shit the R and the O are ok......

[GoRuben!]

stick to working on straight letters and develop some style. then try the technical stuff if thats your thing.

[GoRuben!]

Originally posted by BANK
^^^^your still tryin t hard to make it look liek graff.... start out simple....this is an old flick of mine but its better to start off and move from there....
[img]http://img66.photobucket.com/albums/v200/bank205/BANK3.jpg'>
yeah its really simple...but its a good start....try doin stuff leik that first...
and try to keep all your sketches clean... that looks gross mostly because of the coloring... the letters arent that great ...lose the extensions and the cuts n stuff..just keep it simple for now...learn to spae the letters evenly and makeing them the same size.....thats my 2 cents lose the dripy part and don't make those gleams so thick.

[Hokus]

[img]http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00463845f00000009.jpg'>

What do ya'll think of that?

[akrbone]

[img]http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid137/p029bc57a40a9be5edadb681e5f833c2b/f7317e86.jpg'>

[akrbone]

commentz? it would have been better if i buffed,wall soaked in like hell:(
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v102/varo_who/IMG_1698.jpg'> n yes aware some of the force lines could have been straighter and some of the shine, other than those2 things

[Grimes]

my suggestion would be to hit the books hard,then when u feel good enough not to embarrass yourself,then go paint sumthin,practice,practice,practice!

[BlueStreaks]

akrbone ...

go as simple as possible,and lose the stupid green shit in the letter's.

[akrbone]

i have new sketchz if only my damn camera wasnt broken

[WallDecoratR]

me?.......a toy?................nah

[Abikone]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v67/willscarsgoaway/ABIK.jpg


I'm a toy and this is really the first time i've "painted" just let me know what you think...i know the "k" is out of porportion

[yeaaaah baby]

not bad abik

[PAID:one]

Your 'R' looks like PARA's.

ABIK Krylon Sage! Practice those letters and stay up!

[printscreen]

i was thinkin the same thing

[BANK]

alright i did this aveco the other day.. it was dark as shit and i couldnt see what i was doin....
[img]http://www.photodump.com/direct/wild_irish_rose/aveco,mors,abik002.jpg'>

[StarzAbove]

Good you paint but still needs work

[Mistery]

[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mistery510/Scan0002.jpg'>


[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mistery510/Other/aesoe.jpg'>

[Abikone]

same design just diff colors and a little style change
http://usera.imagecave.com/Abikone/avecomorsabik003.JPG

[Mistery]

lol u and Bank painted on the same wall didnt u...the walls look exacstly alike in color and everhiyntg.......

[brasse hed]

abik altho u need a bit more can control but that will come in time your lookin good mate.:jpotato:

[yeaaaah baby]

Originally posted by Mistery
[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mis...10/Scan0002.jpg (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mistery510/Scan0002.jpg)'>


[img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mis...Other/aesoe.jpg (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v358/Mistery510/Other/aesoe.jpg)'>
calm down with that last piece. do more straight letters. the top one is alot better then the bottom one.

[Mistery]

Originally posted by yeaaaah baby
calm down with that last piece. do more straight letters. the top one is alot better then the bottom one.

haha thanks..i no i can do better in that first one.......and the second oen i had to hurry on to ge tinto the battle..i wa slate for it allready so i had ot get it in fast

[dregs]

im not sure if its been asked before so i didnt start a whole topic abut it... what sorta pens/markers do you's all use to sketch with.... ive seen some sick pieces dun on here that couldnt be done with cheap pens/texters etc.

[yeaaaah baby]

i use prismas. but i've been getting into crayola markers.

[StarzAbove]

Chalk is way better

[yeaaaah baby]

^^ good call.

[BANK]

chalk???????? tell me more.....

[yeaaaah baby]

[BANK]

shit i thoguht he was serious for a second and was liek shit never heard of that...

[StarzAbove]

:lol: nah