Criticize me

[nervv]

I started writing and I don't know anyone with experience to criticize my work. I haven't gotten up much, so I don't have any flicks of that but...

Paper:
http://wb.konsolnet.com/draw/blackbook/2005/Nerv01.jpg
http://wb.konsolnet.com/draw/blackbook/2005/Nerv02.jpg
http://wb.konsolnet.com/draw/blackbook/2005/Nerv03.jpg

My first hat:
http://wb.konsolnet.com/posts/3-2-05/3-2-05c.jpg

Sketches: (too big)
01 (http://wb.konsolnet.com/draw/sketches/2004/01.jpg)
02 (http://wb.konsolnet.com/draw/sketches/2004/02.jpg)

Don't flame too hard now =(

[casekonly]

not bad

[rize415]

the first 2 sketches are pretty dope. i'd just say work on the consistency of the thickness of all yer letters. keep it up

[InfamousOne]

there is already a nerv in gsk....

[Herbivore]

Originally posted by rize415@Mar 3 2005, 08:17 AM
the first 2 sketches are pretty dope. i'd just say work on the consistency of the thickness of all yer letters. keep it up
Quoted post

yeah... and the characters in the first link aren't bad either. there's really not much advice anyone can give you besides "practice, practice, practice"... you're on the right path though.

[exxell]

dont worry what other people say. jus paint sketch whut u feel like.
cuz yu may have different style from others and that whut makes yu an individual. trust me I ceen worst
all i could say keep up the work.








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[Mr. Chad]

the first two or good but that 3rd one is no good.

[th3_monk]

not bad at all

[H of BL]

im likin it, keep it up

[StarzAbove]

Aside from the millions of NERV(V,E,S,Z) out there. You color pretty good
The 1st piece is ok the 2nd is pretty ill the 3rd is horrible.
Overall good job

[Flayed God X]

you got the idea but your letters are weak, work on simples

[HAL*LOVE*U]

if i were u i would just do some straight letters i really like the second one

but really work on strait letters and a name change wouldent hurt
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[nukka]

get off the fuckin internet and paint you fag.

[swif1]

Good fills but your letter structure is lacking.

[th3_monk]

yeah

[seeking]

1. anyone that tells you not to listen to what people say is a toy and sucks.
2. don't listen to everything everyone says, cause most of them are toys and suck.
3. spend more time working on making solid letters than making pretty colored sketches.
4. you might consider a name change. 'nerv' is pretty generic.
5. trucker hats are plaaaayed out. you say '1st' as if you plan to make more. i would not advise this.
6. the sketch with the gun is really gross. you should throw it away.
7. photoshop is for making the olsen twins touch eachothers boobs, not for graff.
8. every time you make a new sketch, compare it to the 3rd one. does it look anything like it? no? good.
9. a quick way to fame is through reality based tv shows. see if you can get on one then wear a t shirt/jacket/hat/face paint that has your tag on it.
10. there are two types of writers, indy-rock/hardcore/scenester kids and wiggers. decide which group you more closely resemble then go to the gap and buy a whole new wardrobe.

[smokejuda]

that ssome good advice especially #10

[Fishnet]

i fit in the indy/hardcore/emo category but i still likes to keeps it gangster...