[spasone]

[Walid Jumblat]

Jesus, this fucking page....

[Sevage]

I like this S but the rest of the piece is shit..

[Monestar]

It looks dope like some kind of praying mantis feel to it. Nice highlighting.
Flor that is fresh as fuck very clean

[Mason YoshiKami]

i don't think i like this one.. the fight is awesome by the way! PUERTO ROCKS STAND UP!!!

[Mason YoshiKami]

workin on this at the moment

[Monestar]

I like the letters mason but that piece lacks flow. That S cow is too out pf place too lol.

satire Exchange

[Mason YoshiKami]

Originally Posted by Monestar (View Original Post)

I like the letters mason but that piece lacks flow. That S cow is too out pf place too lol.

satire Exchange

thsi is fire. the beveled parts are on point. and your i looks like a crazy robot type thing. you should do a burner of just that mechanical looking style with the whips to make a body or something.
yeah idk the s,o,n is wack ill prolly just redo it. good looks on the crits

[peskTA]

ooooo the kidd is back stuck in the crib for the next two months working on music ...back on my blackbook grind on downtime....shouts to tesk i i have an excahnge i have to color i started months ago....the last thing i saw in this thread by u left people in here in the dust applaud the man.....besides the rest are ahhhhhhhh so so .....lol

[peskTA]

now go home and get ya shinebox

[peskTA]

[peskTA]

gohomeandgetyashineboxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[E_B_A]

Thanks Mone! Proper 8.5X11 will come sooner than later. I didn't forget about DCOR.

Working on something epic right now...

[eido]

Canvas, if theres a canvas thread please redirect me.

[pertplus1]

black and white sketch is cool





http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/sho...81885&page=434

canvas thread is pretty easy to find

[Dcor8]

@eido that blue and pink piece is tight man, nice work all arnd

[sayWORD?]

eido you spelled righteous wrong.

[Back In 88]

^

[peskTA]

[Sevage]

Starting a new book, trying to up my game on this one and going to attempt a few two pagers.
Any advice or crits from the experts would be appreciated... also when doing shit like this, if you make the characters the same colour as the piece does that just blend them together and make no focal point?

[Back In 88]

Personally, I'd try to keep the letters in the centre, seeing as they're supposed to be the focus of the pages.
Your shading is immaculate as usual.
Maybe try integrating the character with the piece...

[E_B_A]

I've gotten to the point that I really doodle out roughs of my pieces and all the major elements
first and work off that. I've always had trouble spatially laying things out so they make sense.
I have to really see it in my mind before I can start doing two-pagers with backgrounds.

In the future, just have a plan. Make it a plan that works for you and stick by it but with some
flexibility. Get it as specific as you need. And never neglect working off source art. It's truly
invaluable.

As to that piece, I'd just run the 3D at an angle to the bottom left. Then put lots of detail in
the 3D. Get loose and hazy with the halo and then put lots of skulls in the background
with darker coloring and you're gold. That'd be dope. Just my opinion.

[sayWORD?]

i was gonna comment that pesk should probably stop posting the same sketches 50 times after his ongoing two month timeouts from 12oz where he gets run outta the forums.

then i saw the tampons.

there still is hope.

[pertplus1]

also, i think you've said that atleast 5 times now, haha

[sayWORD?]

haha dude called me out over a year ago telling he was gonna serve me with a handstyle.

im still waiting.

until i get it, pesk gets no love.