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Default beginner sketch - 06-01-2001, 06:12 AM

i wanna say thanks to cese...for posting my last sketch, i saw nobody liked it too much....but tell me what you think about this one.
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Default 06-01-2001, 06:13 AM

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Default 06-01-2001, 06:17 AM

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Originally posted by Restroom Bomber:
[img]http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1682882&a=12911818&p=48481546&Sequence=0&re s=high'>
this is how i feel about the whole situation...

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Default 06-01-2001, 06:30 AM

aight, i wanna talk shit but im gunna be a nice guyand heed some advice...the color is aight...but the letters just look too goth or something...try rokken straight letters first with simple colors...and let style just come naturally...you show creativity but lack skill...not to be harsh but just lettin you know whatsup...keep it in your blackbook till you have something tight and then bomb away...thats the best advice i can give...piece
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Default 06-01-2001, 06:35 AM

just stick to straight letters when u first start out, then once u get those down you can twist em any way u want...i totally neglected straight letters when i first started out and went right to piecing and once i started focusing just on straight letters ive improved all around.
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Default 06-01-2001, 09:00 AM

thats crazy... theres ALOT of space inbetween your too thin lines... just copy a computer font make real simple letters until you understand what makes the letter a letter ....
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Default 06-01-2001, 10:34 AM

TOO FUCKING SKINNY!
Not enough letter structure, either...the way your letters branch off it just looks random...
And chill with the arrows...you don't need to add an arrow to EVERY fucking corner of your letters.
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Default 06-01-2001, 12:25 PM

yeah skinny and random but i admire the attempt at an overall structure with the cross action you have going on. keep working at it!

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Default 06-01-2001, 02:16 PM

when you do dis shit, make sure your letters can go together more...like, some parts is too skinny, den some parts is too fat...work on dat...but da color on it's aight...
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Default 06-01-2001, 02:43 PM

next time post yer sketch in imerz post
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Default 06-01-2001, 03:34 PM

Fatten em up, then post it in imerz's beginner sectioneroo.
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Default 06-01-2001, 03:44 PM

alright, since everyone is giving you negative comments...

its actually alright, there are some things you need to improve on, but doesnt everyone need to improve on something? The letters are skinny, but if you like it then dont change it...the only thing i would say is to make the two A's skinny also, they are a little bigger than the rest. Maybe just try to let the letters flow into each other more...but its not bad for a beginner...

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Default 06-02-2001, 04:38 AM

and heres a nifty link to it
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Default Re: beginner sketch - 09-19-2007, 03:19 PM

WERE ALL THE PICS????
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Default Re: beginner sketch - 09-19-2007, 03:20 PM

DBD PM ME I GOT SOME ????????
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