[imported_moses1]

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what do u think of my style, ne crizitism welcome.

[imported_JedaOne]

personaly the letter arent that great i am not any better but i have seen better how long have you been writting i liek the character!

character = baaaaaaad
letters are pretty good if you lose the connectors which dont really work, but the basic letter structure is ok from what i see. keep drawin.

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I'm not your average honky, raised by a pack of retarded donkies...

[imported_moses1]

i been writin for almost a year. i been doin my best to develope a style. ne1 have ne thoughts on how i could my the lettering better.

[kid furie]

start simple...

[mr.yuck]

Yes. I the wisdom tycoon have some knowledge to drop. Try by making all of your letters the same size. Keep the basic shape you have now. Something i reckomend to all new comers is to read a book on caligraphy. As you understand letter structure better you will be able to tear the damn alphabet to pieces my young boy.

PEACE

1st- i am not an expert, king, or even close, but i do know a few things. some i can apply, others i still work on.

having said that, i think that just working towards making your letters more consistant. in style and in shape. draw with a pencil and eraser close by. work with it. tweak it. draw shapes. rectangles, sqares, circles etc. this will help with getting some consistancy.
drawdrawdraw
paintpaintpaint
thats what they tell me
keep at it
dont lose hope
i get excited by progress, because i am no where near perfection

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I'm not your average honky, raised by a pack of retarded donkies...

[imported_curious george]

what the fuck is up with that WAK ASS 3D!

[imported_intercept]

Originally posted by moses1:
i been writin for almost a year. i been doin my best to develope a style. ne1 have ne thoughts on how i could my the lettering better.

holy shit...a year and you suck that much i have been writing for a year and a half and painting for like a year(on and off).....and i was better than you when i first started look you should learn how to draw dont just tag wit markers............a year you must be kidding......this makes me happy to know i dont compelly suck..................

[sect one]

its not that bad the character looks like the crackhead from the pj's

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[imported_satellite]

make the two "s"'s consistent, lose that thing over the m, and the o looks slightly lopsided

[knowlej]

for the love of god, lose the arrows!

[imported_garth vader]

the character looks like that crackhead from the pj's

its not bad if your a beginer
just keep it more simpler, work on your handstyle,then throwies,then simples, then try out your crazy stuff
thats the way I THINK is the best way to get better
but who am i?

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Penis Juice!!

[imported_ruEtbeer]

Originally posted by knowlej:
for the love of god, lose the arrows!

and change your name....moses kog.

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i am the buff...

[imported_jojoo13]

take away all that other shit and you have yourself a good bomb...the charecter is wack though..it looks like a old man or a girrafe of some sort

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no no NO not BZEE....BZ
={(____) <---i luv this stuff!!!

[near]

personally i like it...its not a totally dope style or anything but ide like to see it up some where props on the character

[imported_dead people rule]

dont do that

[Vanity]

dump the connectors, don't worry about cuts in the 3d, cump the character, have the letters on the same 'plane' and make em the same size.
there's a cat from st. louis that writes moses

[imported_Sirca]

Nice letter structure...its a pretty good piece

[imported_rancid]

The only good letter is the s.
The handstyle sucks...

[imported_JedaOne]

how long have you been writting

[imported_moses1]

OK dudes and chiks i been tryin all the things most of u all tell me, but when i do it just looks so simple kinda like just plain ol bubble letters neone can do. most of u all say it sucks but if u seen it w/out all that stuff around it i think u would be sayin worse thing. does ne1 have ideas for write it w/out all the shit around it but where it wont be so simple lookin. and i been tryin to write for bout a year but i change my style completly a few months ago. also thanks for tell me how it is cause i dont want to be out there putin up bullshit people think if fucked up

[imported_Seym1has2no3fiends]

I really like the word "crizitism"
it sounds funny! criz-it-tism!

[imported_Fr@se]

i bet your crew is pretty tigh

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