[rymewon]

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[CamS]

thats ill..im not much of a critic, but thats still sick..i like the colours in both of them...the style is flowin there balanced...keep it up

i like the character in the top right of the bottom one.

[rymewon]

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Im not much of a critic either..all 3 are dope specially the top character in the second one and the last one is too dope..peace

[AeRoSoL JuNkiE]

ok, work on your letter structure and 3D.

not feeling ita whole lot. not really any ingenuitive letter structure. just lines that vaguely make up a letter. it's alright, but stretching it.

[rymewon]

Originally posted by Andy Capp
not feeling ita whole lot. not really any ingenuitive letter structure. just lines that vaguely make up a letter. it's alright, but stretching it.

did u even look at or for the letters, apparently u did not.. look again. mr. capp.. post some examples of your ingenuitive letter structures........

[~DeNtOnE~]

Originally posted by cyzm
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i think thi onr is the best good colors better sturture then the others you got skill i just dont like how the 2ed one has like leters that wrinkle or what ever.. still loooks ok i guess

i like the colors ont he first one.

but i really dont like the characrters.

the first and last ones flow really nice...i dont like the letter structures of the second one...but dope use of color as usual.

[cazper]

<------is cyzm's biggest fan...lol, damn cyz....u bang out a lot of book pieces....also, im always amazed with ur colors, do u use prismas and something else? if its other than prismas can u please tell me cuz i would like to experiment with them....pace out

thrid ones cool the rest suck

[WITS]

One of you actually said these are sick? I wish I had a scanner. I'd hit you like ebola.
Style comments::: Don't like any of them really. No letter form. Anyone can throw some lines together that resemble their letters. Nice colors but no letters and nice colors= who gives a fuck. Sorry. I can be an asshole.

cyzm always has had mad color skemes i love em!
props.

dope. now lets break out the paint

[IntangibleFame]

I like the first one more...

ill leave you with a grain of sand in lifes hourglass.....haters... hate rate and debate...but give us something which we can do the same.....peace

[WITS]

I would if I had the means.

damn witts u a cocky sucker aint u i guess cyzm set him self up with the title of the thread but u come off on some big attitude like u a king u should down size the attitude till u can post some of your shit no matter if its not worth (means) as u speak peace daa

i love the colors, dont really like the letters though.

[MiceHoe]

cyzm, you may think your shit is good now, and it is better than your old ish, but in a year or two from now your gonna look back at those sketches and see all kinds of shit ya dont like. Your on the right path but your still learning. Keep it up.

[Tyler Durden]

no thanks.

Originally posted by WITS
I would if I had the means.

hahahaha....critiques have the best excuses

[serpent of the light]

no me gusta.

the first one is just spaghetti, the second one is just gross, though i like the characters, and the third one is alright.

i'm not claiming i'm better, just saying what i think